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laaiba
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phool ki narm pattee
par jaise
shabnam ne
dheere se hath rakha...
to woh muskaa kar
khil jaati haii.....
aise hee maiN
jab bhee
teree yaa.doN ke
hisar meiN
houle se qadam rakhtee huN
to dil kee aaNkhein
dar.d
kee shabnam se
bhar jaatee haiN.........
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2012, 03:11:15 PM » |
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bahut khoob
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laaiba
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2012, 03:12:34 PM » |
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bohat shukria aapkaa...  |
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2012, 03:31:11 PM » |
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phool ki narm pattee
par jaise
shabnam ne
dheere se hath rakha...
to woh muskaa kar
khil jaati haii.....
aise hee maiN
jab bhee
teree yaa.doN ke
hisar meiN
houle se qadam rakhtee huN
to dil kee aaNkhein
dar.d
kee shabnam se
bhar jaatee haiN.........
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Nice creation. But i think nisar ki jagah nisaar hona chahiye. |
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2012, 03:32:00 PM » |
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phool ki narm pattee
par jaise
shabnam ne
dheere se hath rakha...
to woh muskaa kar
khil jaati haii.....
aise hee maiN
jab bhee
teree yaa.doN ke
hisar meiN
houle se qadam rakhtee huN
to dil kee aaNkhein
dar.d
kee shabnam se
bhar jaatee haiN.........
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Nice creation. But i think hisar ki jagah hisaar hona chahiye. |
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laaiba
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2012, 03:34:00 PM » |
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rite par baat to samjh aa gayee naa..... |
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2012, 04:15:01 PM » |
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boht khub laiba ji ek rau apka hua
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2012, 04:19:24 PM » |
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bahut khoob laaiba jee  |
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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2012, 04:23:59 PM » |
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phool ki narm pattee
par jaise
shabnam ne
dheere se hath rakha...
to woh muskaa kar
khil jaati haii.....
aise hee maiN
jab bhee
teree yaa.doN ke
hisar meiN
houle se qadam rakhtee huN
to dil kee aaNkhein
dar.d
kee shabnam se
bhar jaatee haiN.........
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2012, 06:47:02 PM » |
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Laaibaa Jee Aadaab!
WaaH jee waaH kia kahne hai aapke is andaaz e bayaaN ke
Behad khoob jee... )
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #12 on: October 19, 2012, 08:12:28 AM » |
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boht khub laiba ji ek rau apka hua
bohat bohat shukria aapkaa saahil ji......... |
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«Reply #13 on: October 19, 2012, 08:13:02 AM » |
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bahut khoob laaiba jee bohat shukria mkv ji.......... |
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«Reply #14 on: October 19, 2012, 08:13:24 AM » |
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