Dard to apna sathee hai..........

by KOYAL46 on June 30, 2010, 06:22:06 AM
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Dard ko apna saathee banaa liya jab se humne
Ashqo ko aankhon se kabhi behne na diya humne

Jee chahta hai mein Aansu aankhon ke pee lu
Khamosh c tanhayeeyon mai kuchh pal jee lu

Bant-ta nahi koi,fir Kyu jaane dard mere dil ka
Sochti hu Kya mein na bolu honth apne siee lu

Koi b kyu ho dukhee mere dukh se O meri sakhee
Esliye pehne rehti hu chehre pe muskaan sakhee

Jaanti hu sach kehne ka nahi hai ab ye jamaana
Seekh liya hai ab mei-ne dard me bhi muskurana
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2010, 10:23:25 AM »
Wah Wah Koyal didi kya hi khoob poem likhi hai aapne. Padhkar mazaa aa gaya. Nek khwahishaat ke saath daad qubool farmaye.n. Dua hai ho zor-e-qalam aur zyada.
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«Reply #2 on: June 30, 2010, 10:50:20 AM »
Wah kya qoob kaha hai ,, achi khawish pe dad hazir hai qubol karen .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


duwa go

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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2010, 11:48:23 AM »
Tahe dil se aapka shukriya Riyaz-bhai.......

Wah Wah Koyal didi kya hi khoob poem likhi hai aapne. Padhkar mazaa aa gaya. Nek khwahishaat ke saath daad qubool farmaye.n. Dua hai ho zor-e-qalam aur zyada.
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2010, 11:49:56 AM »
Dad k liye aapka Dhanaywaad...Qadeer-bhai....

Wah kya qoob kaha hai ,, achi khawish pe dad hazir hai qubol karen .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


duwa go

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«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2010, 04:32:09 AM »

   Nice one Koyal dear. Yu hi achha achha likhti raho or muskuraati raho. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2010, 05:02:56 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Koyal ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 01, 2010, 09:23:26 AM »
Daad k liye shukriya Tamanna-di..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

  Nice one Koyal dear. Yu hi achha achha likhti raho or muskuraati raho. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2010, 10:18:55 AM »
Dhanaywaad aapka Klaskar-ji.....

bahut khoob likha hai aapne Koyal ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 01, 2010, 10:24:06 AM »
bahut hi acha likha hai koyal ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 01, 2010, 12:18:48 PM »
Thanks for liking my poem.....Samnoj-ji

bahut hi acha likha hai koyal ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 02, 2010, 02:41:02 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: July 03, 2010, 08:15:10 AM »
M.Bji  taliyon ka shukriya......

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 03, 2010, 03:17:08 PM »
bahut aacha koyal ji....per

dhokhe se hasti aankho mein neer bahut hoti hai,
dard ki muskurahat mein peer bahut hoti hai.
hum duniya se kyn na aapna chehra chupa le,
per aaine mein khud ki tasveer bahut roti hai...
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«Reply #14 on: July 05, 2010, 10:23:41 AM »
Dhanyawaad Bhondu ji....
Aapki line bhi bahut achhi hain....per

Harsh se hasti aankho mein neer bahut hota hai,
Peeda bhari muskuraahat mai dard bahut hota hai

(Dard ki muskurahat mein peer bahut hoti hai.)

Hum duniya se aapna chehra Laakh chhupa lein,
Per aaine mein khud ka aksh bahoot rota hai...

bahut aacha koyal ji....per

dhokhe se hasti aankho mein neer bahut hoti hai,
dard ki muskurahat mein peer bahut hoti hai.
hum duniya se kyn na aapna chehra chupa le,
per aaine mein khud ki tasveer bahut roti hai...

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