Dard TooTte Patte Ka....

by qayda on June 12, 2009, 07:36:44 AM
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qayda
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"main mafi chahta hoon ise dubara post karne ke liye"
lekin kafi dino ke bad ispar nazar padi to main khud ko rok nahi paaya....
maine ise pehli bar 20 june 2005 ko post kiya tha..
""maine isme ped se toot te hue ek patte ke dard ko sametne ki koshish ki thi...shayad usme main safal nahi ho saka....
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Toot te samay ek patta
kah gaya us ped se
main jeevan tha tumhara
tere paas kya rah jayega

main giroonga zameen pe
astitva bhi mit jayega
par toota hoon jis daal se
us jagah nishan rah jayega

girti thi osh mujhpe
to nikharta tha husn tera
ab tere tarika-e-ishq pe
phir na bahaar aayega

fir milna nahi hai humko
is fiza mein dubaara
teri zameen se udakar hawa
jane kahan le jayega

main tere shakh ka sitara tha
kyon tumne roka nahi
khair, tu hi koi manzil bata de
jahan ye jhilmilayega....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2009, 07:40:55 AM »
Kisi se juda hone ka dard bakhubi bayaan kiya hain tumne Qayda bohat khoob... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2009, 07:53:19 AM »
Qayda,

Very nice and beautiful creation ! Bravo ! Applause Applause Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2009, 10:52:06 AM »
Very beautiful indeed, bohot bohot khoob Qayda   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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shab
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2009, 11:15:34 AM »
WAAH BHAI JAAN,BAHUT KHOOB
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