Dard ZAKHM me na raahat DAWAA me hai...!! -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #15 on: October 30, 2012, 01:37:36 PM »

Quote from: sarfira on October 29, 2012, 10:04:30 AM

waah waah janaab--
kya khoob khyalaat kahe aapne
sach kahen to aise post padh kar kuch likhne ka mann hum jaison ka bhi ho jata hai--
daad kubul karen bhai
aate rahen
khus rahen

sarfira ji, aapne to itni tareef kar ke mera hi sar firaa diya, sarkar hum to mehaz shaukiya 4 lafz kehne waaloN me se haiN, aur ehsash to hum sab ke paas haiN hi, bas uthaayi kalam aur likh daaliye kuch, kald hi aapko padhne ka muraadi rahuNgaa...


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Re: Dard ZAKHM me na raahat DAWAA me hai...!!

«Reply #16 on: October 30, 2012, 01:49:22 PM »

Quote from: Aarish on October 29, 2012, 10:08:52 AM

Aarish ji padhne aur pasand karne ka shukriya... bas yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Dard ZAKHM me na raahat DAWAA me hai...!!

«Reply #17 on: October 30, 2012, 01:50:46 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 29, 2012, 09:13:32 PM

bahut bahut khoob Ghayal ji... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

Hriday ji maiN aapka tahe dil se shukraguzaar huN, ki aapne meri ye adni si peshkash pasand ki, bas aage v yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte rahiyega...


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Dard ZAKHM me na raahat DAWAA me hai...!!

«Reply #18 on: October 30, 2012, 01:53:04 PM »

Quote from: janumanu on October 29, 2012, 11:40:12 PM

kaise ho mirzaa............ adaab ............

bhayee ghazal to pahle suni huee hai zubaani ... magar ye jo sawa ... ka Qafiyaa hai... bahut maza deta hai ..
ek baat aur .. yaar Qafiye gadbad ho gaye hain..
tumko sare qafiye Wa.... pe bandhne honge ,,,
yaa matle main chhooT le lo... taaki aa pe qafiye bandhy ,,,,

fir milte haiN

ssdssb mirza, aapki dua hai bas chale jaa rahe haiN, waise bade hi khudgarz nikle aap, jab shuru ki thi tabhi sunaya tha, tab khayal na aaya iska, hum to nithalle haiN hi, aapne v nazar andaaz kar diya is bewkufi ko, aage v yuNhi saath dete rahiyega.... Usual Smile


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