darta hoon main:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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ek baat hai dabi huyi muddaton se seene mein
oos raaz k faasf hone se darta hoon main
jo barson se daal kar beithe hai naqaab
unke pardanashi hone se darta hoon main

nahi chahta koi ilzaam de oonhe meri maut ka
oonke saza paane k khayal se darta hoon main
band rakhna meri aankhen dikh na jaaye tasveer unki
unke badnaam hone k khayal se darta hoon main

yoon toh chaha tha jo ummra bhar woh kar na saka
na jaane phir aaj kyun yeh khayal karta hoon main
kii tu agar bewafa na hoti tu kya mein tere paas hota
jaane kyun kha ke dhoka bhi pyaar tujhse karta hoon main


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abdulqadeer

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Re: darta hoon main

«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2009, 09:57:50 AM »

Bahoth Qoob janab Maza agaya padke Likhte raho yunhi salil

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Rajesh Harish

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Re: darta hoon main

«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2009, 03:24:28 PM »

Bahut Khoob Salil Ji


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salil2002

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Re: darta hoon main

«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2009, 06:41:36 AM »

shukriya rajesh bhai and abdul bhai


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Re: darta hoon main

«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2009, 06:50:18 AM »

bahoot khoob salil ji bas pahle para ki teesari aur chouthi line me kuch atpata sa padhne me aaya...
jo barson se daal kar beithe hai naqaab
unke pardanashi hone se darta hoon main
yahan pardnashi ki jagah benaqab hona chahiye tha shayad .....kyunki pardanaheen ka matlab jo lo parde me rahte hain...
mai koi urdu ka jankaar nahi agar mai galat hun to maafi chahunga


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salil2002

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Re: darta hoon main

«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2009, 07:01:36 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on January 25, 2009, 06:50:18 AM

haan bekaraar ji aap sahi keh rahe hain
magar mera yahan par yeh samjhana tha kii .......woh naqaab daal kar beithe hai aur agar parda bhi daalenge toh pehchaanne mein pareshaani hogi.........shukriya aapne itni bareeki se pada


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Re: darta hoon main

«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2009, 07:04:24 AM »

are wah mere dost..bahoot gahri soch thi aapki aur mai oopar oopar hi ghum kar aa gaya......bahoot khoob..salil


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Pooja

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Re: darta hoon main

«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2009, 07:43:19 AM »

bahoot khoob salil wah kaya likha hai... yah do line to bahoot pasand aai hai

kii tu agar bewafa na hoti tu kya mein tere paas hota
jaane kyun kha ke dhoka bhi pyaar tujhse karta hoon main

Good work


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salil2002

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Re: darta hoon main

«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2009, 08:31:18 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 25, 2009, 07:43:19 AM

thank u pooja di


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