DARTA HUN ___________~ROY~

by roy on June 24, 2012, 07:06:27 AM
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darta hun mai
 k kahin tu mujhe bhool to na jayegi....
kabhi mujhse kahin door challi to na jayegi.....

RENGTA HUA AYA JO MAI GHUTNO K BALL
tu nangge pair mujhtak ek kadam bhi chal na payegi .....   sad5

chahta nahi tu ghar valoon ko chood de mere liye 
jinhoon ne janam diya unhe chod diya TO MERE SATH TO TU 2 KADAM chal bhi na payegi 

kya kuch kiya or kar sakta hai ye ROY , bayan nahi kar sakta 
par be-bass hun ye soch k ke meri khamoshi tu samjh to na payegi !!



ROY
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2012, 07:10:07 AM »
acchi koshish hai "Roy" jee

Yadi wo kahe ke..

tere naam se jude hain,
toh ye ilzaam acchey hain

tujhey sukoon dete hain
toh ye daag acchey hain

kisi bahane sahi,
tere kaam toh aa hi gaye

dil bahalne ko sahi
ye khayaal, acchey hain..
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ab kya kahoge?
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2012, 07:13:17 AM »
Beautifull.
Waise aapki es poetry me kuch spelling mistakes hai aap apni poetry ko ak baar aour dhayan se read kare.
..
Waise darna manaa hai.
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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2012, 07:34:37 AM »
shukriya massom je batane k liye !!
maine correct kar diye THANKS allot Usual Smile

kashatriye hun mai , badde bade SHURVIROON KO DHER KAR DIYA....
PAR YE MOHOBAT NE SEENE PE GOLI KHANE VALE KO
           PEETH DIKHA K BHAGNE PE MAJBOOR KAR DIYA...
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2012, 07:44:53 AM »
Quote from: suman59 on June 24, 2012, 07:10:07 AM
acchi koshish hai "Roy" jee

Yadi wo kahe ke..

tere naam se jude hain,
toh ye ilzaam acchey hain

tujhey sukoon dete hain
toh ye daag acchey hain

kisi bahane sahi,
tere kaam toh aa hi gaye

dil bahalne ko sahi
ye khayaal, acchey hain..
Usual Smile

ab kya kahoge?

ilzamo se bachi rahe tu iss liye kabhi tere kariib nahi aaya
koi tera daman na ganda kahe, is liye kabhi tujhe paas nai bulaya

dil kya behlaun mai , vo hai he tere pas
dhadkan he dil se door chali jayegi kabhi, galati se bhi esa khayal he nahi aya
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2012, 01:18:20 PM »
bahut sunder
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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2012, 04:23:32 PM »
shukriya sir
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2012, 02:58:10 AM »
Quote from: roy on June 24, 2012, 07:44:53 AM
ilzamo se bachi rahe tu iss liye kabhi tere kariib nahi aaya
koi tera daman na ganda kahe, is liye kabhi tujhe paas nai bulaya

dil kya behlaun mai , vo hai he tere pas
dhadkan he dil se door chali jayegi kabhi, galati se bhi esa khayal he nahi aya


ghadi bhar ki judaai rang udda deti hai chehre ki,,
jab tumse umar bhar ka bichadna hoga tab kya hoga?  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2012, 02:59:50 AM »
bahut badhiya roy babu kya baat hai.......darta hun.....bahut hi khubsurat kalam....dhero daad. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2012, 08:00:45 AM »
wwaah suman g kya khoob kaha hai

"daali se pataa jo gir jaye jalane ke he kaam ata hai
tujhse bichad kar mera bhi ye he hashar hoga"
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2012, 08:01:17 AM »
bohot bohot shukriya saudagar g Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2012, 05:36:59 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2012, 05:39:55 PM »
shukriya hriday g Usual Smile
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