***Deewar***

by Meena on January 27, 2005, 05:37:25 PM
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Meena
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«Reply #45 on: January 30, 2005, 10:27:30 AM »
so sweet sis jaan!
 :D
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thycreator
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«Reply #46 on: January 30, 2005, 10:30:53 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
you r always welcome that too with a sweet hug :hug: Winking


Nidhi ji..........mujhe bhi :oops:
 :wink:
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #47 on: January 30, 2005, 05:05:40 PM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Gud one Meena ji,

Wo humse kehte hai ki deewaron ne unhe humse bacha rakha hai,
Unhe koi ye bataye ki unhone humpe kya sitam dha rakha hai,
Unse hum dur hi  rehte toh kuch gila bhi na hota uska,
Wo mere pas hai par phir bhi kyu matam mana rakha hai...

Kyu soniyo???


kya baat hai creatore ji nice answer

good meena ji pandit ji and tanha ji



wah!!!!!!!!!!  sabhi logon ne bahot accha likha hai.........ab main kiska kiska naam likhoon........  

talash unko hamari to nahi,poocho zara unse
wo qatil jo liye phirte hain khanjar astinon mein...............
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thycreator
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«Reply #48 on: January 30, 2005, 05:21:14 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Gud one Meena ji,

Wo humse kehte hai ki deewaron ne unhe humse bacha rakha hai,
Unhe koi ye bataye ki unhone humpe kya sitam dha rakha hai,
Unse hum dur hi  rehte toh kuch gila bhi na hota uska,
Wo mere pas hai par phir bhi kyu matam mana rakha hai...

Kyu soniyo???


kya baat hai creatore ji nice answer

good meena ji pandit ji and tanha ji



wah!!!!!!!!!!  sabhi logon ne bahot accha likha hai.........ab main kiska kiska naam likhoon........  

talash unko hamari to nahi,poocho zara unse
wo qatil jo liye phirte hain khanjar astinon mein...............


Wah Waheed bhai,

Aise qatil dhoodhne se nahi milte hai mere dost,
Aise qatilon ka kabhi chehra bhi nahi hota..
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pandit
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«Reply #49 on: February 01, 2005, 02:54:59 PM »
thanx to all....
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HumTum
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«Reply #50 on: February 01, 2005, 03:59:54 PM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Gud one Meena ji,

Wo humse kehte hai ki deewaron ne unhe humse bacha rakha hai,
Unhe koi ye bataye ki unhone humpe kya sitam dha rakha hai,
Unse hum dur hi  rehte toh kuch gila bhi na hota uska,
Wo mere pas hai par phir bhi kyu matam mana rakha hai...

Kyu soniyo???


kya baat hai creatore ji nice answer

good meena ji pandit ji and tanha ji



wah!!!!!!!!!!  sabhi logon ne bahot accha likha hai.........ab main kiska kiska naam likhoon........  

talash unko hamari to nahi,poocho zara unse
wo qatil jo liye phirte hain khanjar astinon mein...............


Wah Waheed bhai,

Aise qatil dhoodhne se nahi milte hai mere dost,
Aise qatilon ka kabhi chehra bhi nahi hota..



wah ....very nice all of you....

woh yun chahera-e-masumiyaT se aye karne qatl hamara..
k unkeN hathooN mein woh khanjar bhi hamseY dekha na gya...
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thycreator
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«Reply #51 on: February 01, 2005, 04:05:52 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Gud one Meena ji,

Wo humse kehte hai ki deewaron ne unhe humse bacha rakha hai,
Unhe koi ye bataye ki unhone humpe kya sitam dha rakha hai,
Unse hum dur hi  rehte toh kuch gila bhi na hota uska,
Wo mere pas hai par phir bhi kyu matam mana rakha hai...

Kyu soniyo???


kya baat hai creatore ji nice answer

good meena ji pandit ji and tanha ji



wah!!!!!!!!!!  sabhi logon ne bahot accha likha hai.........ab main kiska kiska naam likhoon........  

talash unko hamari to nahi,poocho zara unse
wo qatil jo liye phirte hain khanjar astinon mein...............


Wah Waheed bhai,

Aise qatil dhoodhne se nahi milte hai mere dost,
Aise qatilon ka kabhi chehra bhi nahi hota..



wah ....very nice all of you....

woh yun chahera-e-masumiyaT se aye karne qatl hamara..
k unkeN hathooN mein woh khanjar bhi hamseY dekha na gya...


Bahut acche HumTum,
Khanjar dekh ke bhi bhala kya kar lete aye mere dost,
Humne dekha usse phir na unko rok paye hum.....
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HumTum
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«Reply #52 on: February 01, 2005, 04:08:20 PM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Gud one Meena ji,

Wo humse kehte hai ki deewaron ne unhe humse bacha rakha hai,
Unhe koi ye bataye ki unhone humpe kya sitam dha rakha hai,
Unse hum dur hi  rehte toh kuch gila bhi na hota uska,
Wo mere pas hai par phir bhi kyu matam mana rakha hai...

Kyu soniyo???


kya baat hai creatore ji nice answer

good meena ji pandit ji and tanha ji



wah!!!!!!!!!!  sabhi logon ne bahot accha likha hai.........ab main kiska kiska naam likhoon........  

talash unko hamari to nahi,poocho zara unse
wo qatil jo liye phirte hain khanjar astinon mein...............


Wah Waheed bhai,

Aise qatil dhoodhne se nahi milte hai mere dost,
Aise qatilon ka kabhi chehra bhi nahi hota..



wah ....very nice all of you....

woh yun chahera-e-masumiyaT se aye karne qatl hamara..
k unkeN hathooN mein woh khanjar bhi hamseY dekha na gya...


Bahut acche HumTum,
Khanjar dekh ke bhi bhala kya kar lete aye mere dost,
Humne dekha usse phir na unko rok paye hum.....


wah kya baat hai ..... nice one.....

Kahoon kiss say main ke kya hay shub-e-ghum buree bala hay
Mujhay kya bura tha marna, agar aik bar hota
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Meena
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«Reply #53 on: February 03, 2005, 05:35:39 PM »
wowwwww!!!!!!

 :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #54 on: February 04, 2005, 05:12:48 PM »
very  nice  hum  tum...... :lol:
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HumTum
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«Reply #55 on: February 04, 2005, 05:15:46 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
very  nice  hum  tum...... :lol:


Thanks waheed ji.....
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HumTum
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«Reply #56 on: March 04, 2005, 05:07:47 PM »
Quote from: "stalin"
'unhe apne hi bhoole hue sitam yaad aaye
 jab gair ne tadpaya to hum yaad aaye"


meraa pyaar jal rahaa hai ai chaand aaj chhup jaa
kabhii pyaar thaa hamein bhii terii chaandni se pahale

main kabhii na muskuraataa jo mujhe ye ilm hotaa
ki hazaaron Gam milenge mujhe ik Khushii se pahale
nm


HumTum
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Meena
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«Reply #57 on: March 04, 2005, 06:20:57 PM »
wah ji wah!!

 :D
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #58 on: March 05, 2005, 12:35:48 AM »
HUM TUM


NICE :D
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Arifa
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«Reply #59 on: March 05, 2005, 11:00:33 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Ajeeb sawal uthe hai humari larkarati hui chal ke upar,
Kaise batayen hum ke paon ke niche sholon ko chupa rakha hai...

Dikhayenge nahin kabhi in taza chalon ko hum,
Yeh to woh gum hai jine seense se laga rakha hai...

Kaise girayen un deewaron ko jo hai dil ke aas pas,
Inhone hi to is bedard duniya se ab tak bacha rakha hai...

Kaise batlaye hum apne gum ki paidasih ko aaj,
Ke zuban ko mile dhokon ne gunga bana rakha hai...

Chod jate hai humsafar bhi rast me saath apna,
Jo apne raston ko tanha chupi se saja rakha hai...

Gum ke badal rehte nahin, kushiyon ki kirne zaroor milengi,
In jhoote waadon se kismat ne hume latka rakha hai...



wahwah meena bohat ache

yun tou humare par kate hain
magar apni udan ko jari rakhe hain
mien apne shab o roz se kon si khush hoon
zinda hoon magar is mein bhi kai raaz chupe hain
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