Deewaron Sa Chup Rehta Hoon...

by Aryaan on January 25, 2005, 01:54:28 AM
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sandhaya
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«Reply #15 on: June 27, 2005, 05:20:45 AM »
kya baat hai Aryaan ji .........really touching .....imotional kar diya aapne tuh

kehna kuch hai keh kuch jati hun main
jab bhi bolna chahun chup reh jati hun main

kya hai asar teri surat ke noor main aisa
aati hai aankhon main chamak aur machal jati hun main

kyun hawa tujhe chuker phir mujhe mehkati hai
hoti hun khush ek pal ko phir besudh ho jati hun main

chedhti hai mujhe ye nigahein teri reh reh kar
kyun bina soche hi kuch bhi nach uthti hun main
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Aryaan
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«Reply #16 on: June 27, 2005, 01:25:11 PM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
kya baat hai Aryaan ji .........really touching .....imotional kar diya aapne tuh

kehna kuch hai keh kuch jati hun main
jab bhi bolna chahun chup reh jati hun main

kya hai asar teri surat ke noor main aisa
aati hai aankhon main chamak aur machal jati hun main

kyun hawa tujhe chuker phir mujhe mehkati hai
hoti hun khush ek pal ko phir besudh ho jati hun main

chedhti hai mujhe ye nigahein teri reh reh kar
kyun bina soche hi kuch bhi nach uthti hun main

Shukriya Sandhaya aur kya khoob reply hai, bohat achey.....

Thanks Jalpari....
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jalpari
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«Reply #17 on: June 28, 2005, 04:19:57 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
kya baat hai Aryaan ji .........really touching .....imotional kar diya aapne tuh

kehna kuch hai keh kuch jati hun main
jab bhi bolna chahun chup reh jati hun main

kya hai asar teri surat ke noor main aisa
aati hai aankhon main chamak aur machal jati hun main

kyun hawa tujhe chuker phir mujhe mehkati hai
hoti hun khush ek pal ko phir besudh ho jati hun main

chedhti hai mujhe ye nigahein teri reh reh kar
kyun bina soche hi kuch bhi nach uthti hun main

wow Sandhaya.... bahut ache!!!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #18 on: June 28, 2005, 05:06:23 AM »
sukhriya Aryaan ji .......au jal pari ........thanks alot
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nikki
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«Reply #19 on: June 29, 2005, 03:17:44 PM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
kya baat hai Aryaan ji .........really touching .....imotional kar diya aapne tuh

kehna kuch hai keh kuch jati hun main
jab bhi bolna chahun chup reh jati hun main

kya hai asar teri surat ke noor main aisa
aati hai aankhon main chamak aur machal jati hun main

kyun hawa tujhe chuker phir mujhe mehkati hai
hoti hun khush ek pal ko phir besudh ho jati hun main

chedhti hai mujhe ye nigahein teri reh reh kar
kyun bina soche hi kuch bhi nach uthti hun main



excellent work Sandhaya.......................
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pandit
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«Reply #20 on: June 29, 2005, 03:18:38 PM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
kya baat hai Aryaan ji .........really touching .....imotional kar diya aapne tuh

kehna kuch hai keh kuch jati hun main
jab bhi bolna chahun chup reh jati hun main

kya hai asar teri surat ke noor main aisa
aati hai aankhon main chamak aur machal jati hun main

kyun hawa tujhe chuker phir mujhe mehkati hai
hoti hun khush ek pal ko phir besudh ho jati hun main

chedhti hai mujhe ye nigahein teri reh reh kar
kyun bina soche hi kuch bhi nach uthti hun main


nice sandhya ................................................. .................................................
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Pooja
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«Reply #21 on: June 29, 2005, 04:55:19 PM »
wah!!! bahoot khoob Sandhaya and Aryaan...bahoot hi acha likha hai app dono ne!!!!!

meri kismat, shayad is deewr ki tarah hai
na hai rang, na hai rogan phir bhi khari hai!!

pal pal jharati hai yah deewar
pal pal mai jalati rahati hu

pal pal milti rahti hai mitti mai
pal pal mai tarapti rahati hi

dhoop ki tapish ho, ya ho baraf ki sardi
har mosam mai, khari rahati hu!!!!
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«Reply #22 on: June 29, 2005, 05:02:45 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Aur kahan main kuch kehta hoon
Deewaron sa chup rehta hoon

Chaar Qadam bas meri raah
Jis par main chalta rehta hoon

Main ne hai ek agan jagaai
Jis mein main jalta rehta hoon

Paani ki bas ek lehar si
uthta hoon, girta rehta hoon

Mera kahan kab koi thikaana
Behta hoon behta rehta hoon

Sukoon maut si meri hasrat
Jiske liye marta rehta hoon




wah aryaan,lovely post Usual Smile

very nice sandhaya and pooja ji also.
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Aryaan
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«Reply #23 on: June 29, 2005, 05:06:02 PM »
Bohat shukriya Nidhi & Pooja....n very nice Pooja......
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sandhaya
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«Reply #24 on: June 30, 2005, 05:13:55 AM »
sukhriya ..........ji sukhriya...........aap sab ka .....

humpe karam farmake hume kiya kayal
kis kis tarah se vo humpe sitam farma rahe hai
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Aryaan
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«Reply #25 on: June 30, 2005, 11:34:27 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
sukhriya ..........ji sukhriya...........aap sab ka .....

humpe karam farmake hume kiya kayal
kis kis tarah se vo humpe sitam farma rahe hai

Nice One Sandhaya....
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Pooja
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«Reply #26 on: June 30, 2005, 03:19:52 PM »
wah kaya baat hai Sandhaya!! Bahoot khoob!!!!

waqat bhi hai, mosam ka bhi hai takajaa,
is per bhi na tu ayye, yah kismat ka irada!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #27 on: June 30, 2005, 08:52:14 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
wah kaya baat hai Sandhaya!! Bahoot khoob!!!!

waqat bhi hai, mosam ka bhi hai takajaa,
is per bhi na tu ayye, yah kismat ka irada!!!

Good One Pooja....
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: June 30, 2005, 08:53:37 PM »
Shukariyan Aryaan ji............................................... .................................
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