dekho wo chup ho gaye.....

by vikas2210 on August 07, 2007, 08:27:14 AM
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Doston bahut dino baad kuch likha hai. Pata nahi kaya aur kaisa hai. Par share kar raha hun, ummeed hai aapka hamesha ki tarah saath milega.......


muskurahat mangi unhone
hummne kaha udhar rahi

bole hum udhar pe nahi jeete
hummen kaha chalo wo aapki hui

wo bole badle mai kaya loge
hummne kaha rehne do udhar raha

wo bole udhar hum rakhte nahi
hummne kaha ek pal ka saath dedo

poocha phir se de paoge kaya
wo dekho chup ho gaye

dekho doston wo chup ho gaye……
Zakahm dil ke phir se hare ho gaye.
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2007, 08:59:07 AM »
vikas G
acha likha hai

udhari aur unke chup rehne ka koi seedha link nahi ban paya. lekin samajh me aa gay ki ap keh rahe ki
wo sirf aj k liye sath hai, age ka unki chah bhi nahi aur bharosa bhi nahi

sahi kaha ?
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vikas2210
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2007, 10:42:29 AM »
Quote from: "Sahiba Zehra"
vikas G
acha likha hai

udhari aur unke chup rehne ka koi seedha link nahi ban paya. lekin samajh me aa gay ki ap keh rahe ki
wo sirf aj k liye sath hai, age ka unki chah bhi nahi aur bharosa bhi nahi

sahi kaha ?


Shukriya aane ke liye ur samjhne ki liye.

Waise aisa nahi tha mere kehne ka matlab..
asal main bahut dino ka gap ho gaya hai issliye thoda time lagega......


Mera kehna tha... wo chah ke bhi kuch nahi haami nahi bhar paye. Kai chuppi bahut kuch keh jaati hai.....


Waise saath dete rahiye ka.....

Vikas
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2007, 04:19:19 AM »
Vikas.. It is lovely.. Usual Smile =D>

Bahut aasaan words use kiye hai aapne; jinhe samajhna bhi bahut aasaan laga. Usual Smile

Aap ki hi shayari (baat), ek doosre andaaz mein: Usual Smile


Na chahte hue bhi jinn ke liye muskuraana pade,
Dekhiye Wohi khel jaate hai ab muskuraahaton se;
Do pal ka saath bhi ab unko deta hai bandishein,
Dhadakta hai dil to darr jaate hai dil ki aahaton se....
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Meena is back
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2007, 09:50:50 AM »
bohot khoob vikas ji and shika ji...

 :D
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vikas2210
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2007, 08:20:13 AM »
Quote from: Shikha12 on August 08, 2007, 04:19:19 AM
Vikas.. It is lovely.. Usual Smile =D>

Bahut aasaan words use kiye hai aapne; jinhe samajhna bhi bahut aasaan laga. Usual Smile

Aap ki hi shayari (baat), ek doosre andaaz mein: Usual Smile


Na chahte hue bhi jinn ke liye muskuraana pade,
Dekhiye Wohi khel jaate hai ab muskuraahaton se;
Do pal ka saath bhi ab unko deta hai bandishein,
Dhadakta hai dil to darr jaate hai dil ki aahaton se....


Shikha ji

Shukriya bahut bahut apka. Aur apne bhai abhut hi accha likha hai. Sach mai bahut khoob.
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vikas2210
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2007, 08:21:03 AM »
Quote from: Meena is back on August 08, 2007, 09:50:50 AM
bohot khoob vikas ji and shika ji...

 :D

Shukriya Meena Ji..
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muskan_bye
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«Reply #7 on: December 01, 2007, 05:20:02 PM »
bohot khoob sab bahut acha likha hai sabme sab aate hai......

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~"Khushboo"~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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vikas2210
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«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2009, 05:56:03 PM »
Kitna bolte they tum..
Par acche lagte they tum
Kaya hua jo tum chup hogay
kaya humse tum naaraz ho gaye

kaise sahunga main yeh khamoshi
kaisa jeeunga main baaki zindgi
aake keh do tum deere se kaan mai
tum mere hi ho sada ke liye.....
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2009, 07:23:35 PM »
Quote from: vikas2210 on August 07, 2007, 08:27:14 AM
Doston bahut dino baad kuch likha hai. Pata nahi kaya aur kaisa hai. Par share kar raha hun, ummeed hai aapka hamesha ki tarah saath milega.......


muskurahat mangi unhone
hummne kaha udhar rahi

bole hum udhar pe nahi jeete
hummen kaha chalo wo aapki hui

wo bole badle mai kaya loge
hummne kaha rehne do udhar raha

wo bole udhar hum rakhte nahi
hummne kaha ek pal ka saath dedo

poocha phir se de paoge kaya
wo dekho chup ho gaye

dekho doston wo chup ho gaye……
Zakahm dil ke phir se hare ho gaye.

Very nice...Bohot Khoob Vikas
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Aryaan
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2009, 01:15:53 AM »
Bohat khoob Vikas..
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2009, 06:43:07 AM »
Quote from: vikas2210 on August 07, 2007, 08:27:14 AM
Doston bahut dino baad kuch likha hai. Pata nahi kaya aur kaisa hai. Par share kar raha hun, ummeed hai aapka hamesha ki tarah saath milega.......


muskurahat mangi unhone
hummne kaha udhar rahi

bole hum udhar pe nahi jeete
hummen kaha chalo wo aapki hui

wo bole badle mai kaya loge
hummne kaha rehne do udhar raha

wo bole udhar hum rakhte nahi
hummne kaha ek pal ka saath dedo

poocha phir se de paoge kaya
wo dekho chup ho gaye

dekho doston wo chup ho gaye……
Zakahm dil ke phir se hare ho gaye.

Oye Hoye mere Dost Vikas.. Itne Dino Baad Aaj tumhe Yahan dekh kar Accha Laga..!! Bahut Hi Khoob Likha Hai.. Bilkul Alag Hat ke alag Soch ke sath.. Really Great Yaaaaaaaaaaar... Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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vikas2210
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2009, 10:29:50 AM »
Thanks a lot TALAT, ARYAAN and MANN

Accha laga phir se aap sabse milkar.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2009, 07:24:49 AM »
Wah kya baat bilkul alag andaz-e-bayaan, Bohat khoob Vikas....
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vikas2210
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«Reply #14 on: April 25, 2009, 04:50:52 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 24, 2009, 07:24:49 AM
Wah kya baat bilkul alag andaz-e-bayaan, Bohat khoob Vikas....

Shukriya Sajid bahi.....
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