der talak barsaat hui:Shayri-E-Dard

kaushikbhawna008

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kal aagan mei mere barsaat hui
dur talak thi bundo ki rimjhim
kuch der mei hi khamosh hui
bundo ki rimjhim ne mujhko kuch aisa tadpaya
saath mere meri tanhaai rahi
yaadon k saaye se ham bheege is tarah
fir der talak ashko ki barsaat hui
ye bundein kasak c dil mei kuch aisi jaga gayi
jinhe bhula chuke the ham kabhi unhi lamho ki yaad dila gayi
kuch gam ka daur aur badha is kadar
charon aur andhiyaara hua
jo chiraag jalaye rakha tha hamne
usi diye tale andhiyara hua
barsaat mei mor ki kook ne kuch cheda aisa tarana
mere lab khamosh rahe bas khamoshi mei hi dil ki asmaan se baat hui
kaha dil ne e-asman ab aur na baras na le or mera tu imthaan
tere sang to hai suraj chand sang sitare
par mera na koi yaha
par mera na koi yaha


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k.shael

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Re: der talak barsaat hui

«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2008, 06:49:43 AM »

NICE WORDING.... Applause

KAUSHIK JI,
IT'S HEART FEELINGS,
KEEP IT UP....
BY. K.SHAEL


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: der talak barsaat hui

«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2008, 08:36:09 AM »

thnx k.shael ji


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Rajbir

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Re: der talak barsaat hui

«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2008, 08:37:34 AM »

Bhawna

Bahut achche !

Keep writing like this !


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baadal102

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Re: der talak barsaat hui

«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2008, 03:29:41 PM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 15, 2008, 06:06:25 AM

bundo ki rimjhim ne mujhko kuch aisa tadpaya
saath mere meri tanhaai rahi
yaadon k saaye se ham bheege is tarah
fir der talak ashko ki barsaat hui

bahoot aache bhawana ji Applause

keep it up

Baadal


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natural

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Re: der talak barsaat hui

«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2008, 06:59:44 AM »

bahut achha laga parhkar Kaushikbhavna ji.. Usual Smile


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: der talak barsaat hui

«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2008, 06:22:18 AM »

Quote from: natural on May 18, 2008, 06:59:44 AM

bahut achha laga parhkar Kaushikbhavna ji.. Usual Smile

thnx baadal ji, natural ji and rajbir ji


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: der talak barsaat hui

«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2013, 02:07:27 AM »

Nice.


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