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Bhar jaayega ye mera zakhm dheere dheere
Mit jaayega dil se har bharam dheere dheere
Kasak uthti hai seene main paas aane ki tere
Bujh jaayegi har aas sanam dheere dheere
Kuch aur nashtar chala, abhi chhalni nahin seena
Kuch aur mujhpe karde karam dheere dheere
Kya hua jo zakhmon se hai choor ye zindagi
Aa jaayega Khuda ko reham dheere dheere
Maut hi se mayassar ho shayad sukoon mujhko
Door zindagi se ho jaayega ghum dheere dheere
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2006, 11:13:31 AM » |
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:cry: yaadan tereiya nu bhullna hun okha ho gaya......
jo ditey ne tu Gum ohna nu sehna okha ho geya.....
tu jaan lagey keh deta bhull ja mainu.......
hun unna gallan nu bhullana okha ho gaya....... :cry:
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2006, 11:19:10 AM » |
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Talat.... This is just Marvellous...
Bahut he achha likha hai.... =D> =D>
Nice Reply gr_ajimal... Good one... (Punjabi... wah wah)
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2006, 11:23:26 AM » |
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THANX SHIKHA
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2006, 11:43:36 AM » |
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Talat.... This is just Marvellous...
Bahut he achha likha hai.... =D> =D> Thanks a lot Shikha  |
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2006, 11:50:42 AM » |
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bahut khub talat...
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2006, 03:30:58 PM » |
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Thanks Panni ! |
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2006, 07:34:47 PM » |
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Bhar jaayega ye mera zakhm dheere dheere
Mit jaayega dil se har bharam dheere dheere
Kasak uthti hai seene main paas aane ki tere
Bujh jaayegi har aas sanam dheere dheere
Kuch aur nashtar chala, abhi chalni nahin seena
Kuch aur mujhpe karde karam dheere dheere
Kya hua jo zakhmon se hai choor ye zindagi
Aa jaayega Khuda ko reham dheere dheere
Maut se hi mayassar ho shayad sukoon mujhko
Mit jaayega zindagi se har gham dheere dheere
awesome Talat.......... iska jawaab nahi .............. har ek line bahot pyari lagi...... |
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«Reply #8 on: December 16, 2006, 08:37:02 PM » |
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very nice Talat!!
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«Reply #9 on: December 16, 2006, 09:54:01 PM » |
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Thank You Waheed and Tosha |
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2006, 02:43:17 AM » |
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Maut se hi mayassar ho shayad sukoon mujhko
Mit jaayega zindagi se har gham dheere dheereWah, Bohat khoob Talat... Iss saal ki behtareen shayera ke award ki mustahiq hain aap.. 
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2006, 05:52:16 AM » |
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ALL R NICE
:cry: Teri kather te sab kuch kar sakda..........
tun keha te duniya chad sakda....................
j nahi kuch kar sakda te uho bas ina he hai................
RSA tenu te sirf tenu nahi bhul sakda................... :cry:
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2006, 04:06:37 PM » |
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Maut se hi mayassar ho shayad sukoon mujhko
Mit jaayega zindagi se har gham dheere dheereWah, Bohat khoob Talat... Iss saal ki behtareen shayera ke award ki mustahiq hain aap.. Thanks a lot Aryaan for the complement :D |
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«Reply #13 on: December 19, 2006, 12:35:21 PM » |
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Ashk aankhon ke khushk ho gaye, dil dhadakna bhool gaya
Ho gaye hum door zindagi se kuch is tarah dheere dheere
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«Reply #14 on: December 19, 2006, 12:42:20 PM » |
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nice nice!!
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