dhoka

by mahip on February 04, 2005, 09:30:42 AM
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tera dard dil me liye ghumte the hum,
tere liye kuch bhi kar jane ki himmat rakhte the hum,
par tune mujhe sirf ek chabi samjha,
jisse tere liye har darvaja khol diya karte the hum.
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2005, 11:01:32 AM »
hmm..

Compliments from my side Usual Smile
but don't mind.. you should reconsider your last line !
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2005, 11:23:30 AM »
hmmm..  first two lines are good!!
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