dhoop ka safar!

by Guest on February 20, 2008, 03:33:24 PM
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dhoop ka safar chhav me thehar gaya,
kadam ke faasale rahguzar se bichhad gaya.
         wasl-e-nazar hui ek kali se baad-e-sahar,
         dopahar ko gul hua sham ko bikhar gaya.
rahguzar ka marasim manzil se hai ta umr ka,
gar manzil bhi karwat le to musafir kidhar gaya.
         meharbaN ho agar chaman pe bahaaraN,
         dekhte hi dekhte gul ki kismat sawaNr gaya.
safar-e-samaN ab kyo halka hua,
gethri jo kholi,dekha umr guzar gaya.
          zindagi dhoop ki si hai atiq,
          jo sahar se chali sham ki chaukhat pe thar gaya.
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2008, 03:39:38 PM »
bahut khoob...bahut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2008, 03:48:41 PM »
wah kaya  baat hai.. bahoot khoob Guest!!
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«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2008, 09:49:59 AM »
main Dhoop ke mazey ka safar
shahar mein aksar nahin le paata hun
jab bhi kahin jaata hun, paata hun
fir sey nigal gayi ek nayi imarat, mere hissey ki dhoop ko...
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2010, 04:55:57 PM »
kya baat hai bhai sahab
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