"" dhundla dhundla sa ""

by nirala on February 11, 2011, 03:11:20 PM
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dhundla dhundla sa jahaan dikhta hai
hosh me koi ab kahan miltaa hai

koi khusi se milta hai
koi ghamo me pistaa hai

rang o noor ab kahaan dikhta
lubon pe bas uudaasi ka samaa miltaa hai

kahne ko mehfil rawaan dikhta hai
mehfil me bhi har ek ab tanha miltaa hai

maaan lo har ek ko apna tu
khas ban jaye jo wo sakhs ab kahan milta hai

insaano ki bhid hai par
insaniyat ab kahan dikhta hai

dhundla dhundla sa jahaan dikhta hai
hosh me koi ab kahan miltaa hai
""
adhoora hai---
thanx
"
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ek_tamanna
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2011, 03:15:32 PM »
hmmmmmm
achhi hai so nice
lekin ek baat hai

tanha tanha yahan pe jeena ye
koi baat hai...?

achha laga soch

daad
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2011, 03:19:58 PM »
haha---
aapko ek bata du ke.
""
jo achha likhe wo NIR nahi
NIR se bura koi likh sake, wesa koi VEER nahi
""
Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
aapka thanx Tamanna sahiba
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tamanna.pt
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2011, 03:34:27 PM »

   Koi dhundhla nahi hai,hume to bilkul saaf saaf padhne ko mila hai  Giggle or bahut achha padhne ko mila. Adhure hi sahi par achhe khayalaat pesh kiy hai aapne Nirala ji, Nice thought. Keep writing. Usual Smile
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nirala
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2011, 03:48:12 PM »
arree wah--mene socha tha yahan sirf Ek Tamanna hai--par me galt tha yahan to Tamannaye-- hain kai saare Usual Smile
aapka bhi thanx Tamanna ji Usual Smile
ab me confuse ho gaya:(
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thanx
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2011, 05:55:30 PM »
Nirala jee Aadaab!

janaab Kia baat hai .... kafi achche kahayaal bayaN kiye
Ahsaas O khayaal waqai tareef e qabil hai janab..

Likhate rahiye... Nikhaar aata raheNga..
Koshish Jari rakhiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         

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Anshumali
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2011, 12:45:16 AM »
dhundla dhundla sa jahaan dikhta hai
hosh me koi ab kahan miltaa hai

koi khusi se milta hai
koi ghamo me pistaa hai

rang o noor ab kahaan dikhta
lubon pe bas uudaasi ka samaa miltaa hai

kahne ko mehfil rawaan dikhta hai
mehfil me bhi har ek ab tanha miltaa hai

maaan lo har ek ko apna tu
khas ban jaye jo wo sakhs ab kahan milta hai

insaano ki bhid hai par
insaniyat ab kahan dikhta hai

dhundla dhundla sa jahaan dikhta hai
hosh me koi ab kahan miltaa hai
""
adhoora hai---
thanx
"

Good One ....... Nirala JI !
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kishan8888
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2011, 11:39:52 AM »
wah mere dost
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2011, 11:48:35 AM »
dhundla dhundla sa jahaan dikhta hai
hosh me koi ab kahan miltaa hai

koi khusi se milta hai
koi ghamo me pistaa hai

rang o noor ab kahaan dikhta
lubon pe bas uudaasi ka samaa miltaa hai

kahne ko mehfil rawaan dikhta hai
mehfil me bhi har ek ab tanha miltaa hai

maaan lo har ek ko apna tu
khas ban jaye jo wo sakhs ab kahan milta hai

insaano ki bhid hai par
insaniyat ab kahan dikhta hai

dhundla dhundla sa jahaan dikhta hai
hosh me koi ab kahan miltaa hai
""
adhoora hai---
thanx
"

gud work
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2011, 06:05:14 PM »
Bahut Khub Nirala jI
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nirala
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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2011, 06:47:10 PM »
thanx Rishi ji
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manjum
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«Reply #11 on: February 14, 2011, 07:25:43 AM »
 bahut khub niralaji.... bahut khub...
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nirala
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«Reply #12 on: February 14, 2011, 07:48:14 AM »
thanx manju Usual Smile
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