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«Reply #15 on: September 03, 2012, 01:13:29 AM »

bahut khoob suman ji


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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #16 on: September 03, 2012, 07:31:39 AM »

Quote from: suman59 on September 02, 2012, 08:34:49 AM

Dhur tak hai gam ka sehra rasta koyi nahi
Karwa.n to chal rahe hai naksh-e-paa koyi nahi

Kis tarah ka shehar hai yeh kis tarah ke log hai
Muh mein hai sabke, jubane bolta koyi nahi

Is madari ki pitari mein karishmein hai bahut
De sake jo roshni aisa diya koyi nahi

Kanpthi hai is shajar ki tehniyan bas khauf se
Raks karne ke liye baadh-e-sabaa koyi nahi

Baunon ko kaandhe bitha ke mela kya dikhla diya
Vo samajte hain ki ab unse badaa koyi nahi

Kaam aa sakti nahi, yeh zakham seene ke liye
Yeh siyasi dor hai iska sira koyi nahi

Kashti-e-tehjeeb gar doobe to kya kare
Har kadam per ek khuda hai, nakhuda koyi nahi

दूर तक है गम का सेहरा रास्ता कोई नहीं
कारवां तो चल रहे है नक्श-ए -पा कोई नहीं!!

किस तरह का शहर है यह, किस तरह के लोग है
मुह में है सबके , जुबाने बोलता कोई नहीं !!

इस मदारी की पिटारी में करिश्में है बहुत
दे सके जो रौशनी ऐसा दिया कोई नहीं !!

कांपती है इस शज़र शजर की टहनियां बस खौफ से
रक्स करने के लिए बाढ़ -ए-सबा कोई नहीं !!

बौनों को कांधे बिठा के मेला क्या दिखला दिया.
वो समझते है की अब उनसे बड़ा कोई नहीं !!

काम आ सकती नहीं, यह ज़ख़्म सीने के लिए
यह सियासी डोर हैं इसका सिरा कोई नहीं !!

कश्ती-ए-तहजीब गर डूबे तो क्या करे
हर कदम पर एक खुदा है, नाखुदा कोई नहीं !!

ye best gahzal hai ... jo maine ab tak yaha padhi hai ....... u r outstaidng poet.....

behr khayal adyagi .......... kamaal hai .........
kamaal hai .........

hatss of .....


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ParwaaZ

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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #17 on: September 03, 2012, 07:55:36 AM »

Suman Jee Aadaab!

WaaH waaH waaH kia kahne jee waah waqai behad umdaa ahsaas
o khayaal aur gazab ki bayani rahi... aik behad umda kalaam
kahi hai aapne... Matle se lekar maqte tak gazab ke ashaar
kahe haiN...

Is umda aur khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Likhate rahiye...

Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..

Quote from: suman59 on September 02, 2012, 08:34:49 AM

Door tak hai gam ka sehra rasta koyi nahi
Karwa.n to chal rahe hai naksh-e-paa koyi nahi

Bahut khoob jee daad daad daad...

Kis tarah ka shehar hai yeh kis tarah ke log hai
Muh mein hai sabke, jubane bolta koyi nahi

WaaH jee bahut khoob farmaya daad...

Is madari ki pitari mein karishmein hai bahut
De sake jo roshni aisa diya koyi nahi

bahut khoob daad daad..

Kanpthi hai is shajar ki tehniyan bas khauf se
Raks karne ke liye baadh-e-sabaa koyi nahi

bahut khoob bahut umdaa ... behad achcha sher hai
daad daad daad...

Baunon ko kaandhe bitha ke mela kya dikhla diya
Vo samajte hain ki ab unse badaa koyi nahi

hahahaha SahiN farmayaa jee gazab ki tajurbe
kaar shaksiyat hai aapki bahut khoob...

Kaam aa sakti nahi, yeh zakham seene ke liye
Yeh siyasi dor hai iska sira koyi nahi

Masha Allaah kia umdaa sher kaha hai jee
hazaaroN daad is khoob sher par...

Kashti-e-tehjeeb gar doobe to kya kare
Har kadam per ek khuda hai, nakhuda koyi nahi

bahut umdaa bahut khoob... behad achcha sher
kaha hai daad dad daad...


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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #18 on: September 03, 2012, 10:11:44 AM »

laajwaab


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #19 on: September 03, 2012, 12:54:53 PM »

Suman ji. bahut khoobsutraat ghazal hai .khas taur se Baunon wala sher bilkul naye andaz a hai.bahut mobarak ho.


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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #20 on: September 04, 2012, 07:57:13 PM »

Quote from: suman59 on September 02, 2012, 08:34:49 AM

Dhur tak hai gam ka sehra rasta koyi nahi
Karwa.n to chal rahe hai naksh-e-paa koyi nahi

Kis tarah ka shehar hai yeh kis tarah ke log hai
Muh mein hai sabke, jubane bolta koyi nahi

Is madari ki pitari mein karishmein hai bahut
De sake jo roshni aisa diya koyi nahi

Kanpthi hai is shajar ki tehniyan bas khauf se
Raks karne ke liye baadh-e-sabaa koyi nahi

Baunon ko kaandhe bitha ke mela kya dikhla diya
Vo samajte hain ki ab unse badaa koyi nahi

Kaam aa sakti nahi, yeh zakham seene ke liye
Yeh siyasi dor hai iska sira koyi nahi

Kashti-e-tehjeeb gar doobe to kya kare
Har kadam per ek khuda hai, nakhuda koyi nahi

दूर तक है गम का सेहरा रास्ता कोई नहीं
कारवां तो चल रहे है नक्श-ए -पा कोई नहीं!!

किस तरह का शहर है यह, किस तरह के लोग है
मुह में है सबके , जुबाने बोलता कोई नहीं !!

इस मदारी की पिटारी में करिश्में है बहुत
दे सके जो रौशनी ऐसा दिया कोई नहीं !!

कांपती है इस शज़र शजर की टहनियां बस खौफ से
रक्स करने के लिए बाढ़ -ए-सबा कोई नहीं !!

बौनों को कांधे बिठा के मेला क्या दिखला दिया.
वो समझते है की अब उनसे बड़ा कोई नहीं !!

काम आ सकती नहीं, यह ज़ख़्म सीने के लिए
यह सियासी डोर हैं इसका सिरा कोई नहीं !!

कश्ती-ए-तहजीब गर डूबे तो क्या करे
हर कदम पर एक खुदा है, नाखुदा कोई नहीं !!


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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #21 on: September 05, 2012, 12:00:49 AM »

Quote from: nishi gahlaut on September 02, 2012, 02:40:30 PM

very nice suman ji.... Applause

thanks dear nishi


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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #22 on: September 05, 2012, 12:01:41 AM »

Quote from: arunmishra on September 02, 2012, 03:41:00 PM

Bahut achhchhi gazal. Daad, mubarakbad, evam shubhkamnayen.

-Arun Mishra.

bhut bahut thanks arun mishra jee


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suman59

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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #23 on: September 05, 2012, 12:02:29 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on September 02, 2012, 04:31:28 PM

bahut khubb ahut badhiya bahut hi lajawab aunty ji

Clapping Smiley

thank you very much my son


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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #24 on: September 05, 2012, 12:03:13 AM »

Quote from: mkv on September 02, 2012, 04:47:58 PM

Bahut badhiya
khoobsurat khayaalo se labrej.
wah wah wah
1st, 2nd n 3rd..the BEST

bahut bahut shukriya mkv jee


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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #25 on: September 05, 2012, 12:03:59 AM »

Quote from: nandbahu on September 03, 2012, 01:13:29 AM

bahut khoob suman ji

thanks nandbahu jee


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suman59

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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #26 on: September 05, 2012, 12:05:45 AM »

Quote from: janumanu on September 03, 2012, 07:31:39 AM

ye best gahzal hai ... jo maine ab tak yaha padhi hai ....... u r outstaidng poet.....

behr khayal adyagi .......... kamaal hai .........
kamaal hai .........

hatss of .....

ooooohhhh thank you janumanu jee Usual Smile


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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #27 on: September 05, 2012, 12:08:53 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 03, 2012, 07:55:36 AM

shukriya parwaaz jee


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suman59

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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #28 on: September 05, 2012, 12:09:28 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on September 03, 2012, 10:11:44 AM

laajwaab

thank you very much dr sb


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suman59

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Re: dhur tak hai gam

«Reply #29 on: September 05, 2012, 12:10:19 AM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 03, 2012, 12:54:53 PM

Suman ji. bahut khoobsutraat ghazal hai .khas taur se Baunon wala sher bilkul naye andaz a hai.bahut mobarak ho.

thanks siddiqui jee


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