Dhuv taare se aakash ke kone main rah gaye....mann

by mann.mann on November 17, 2011, 11:38:46 AM
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Wo sone sa raha aur ham mitti ke rah gaye.
Aur bandgi main uski har zulam sah gaye.

Chanda sa har din raah badalna na aaya hamko,
Dhuv taare se aakash ke kone main rah gaye.

Tufan main gaye the jo wo laut aaye ghar ko,
Kinare pe rah ke ham dhare main bah gaye.

Ik din shuru kiya tha aakash ka safar,
Aakash ke huye na dharti ke rah gaye.

Us bhid main chale the tanhai se ghabrakar,
fir bhi akele ham iss mele main rah gaye.

Jo kahte the sath denge aage nikal gaye,
pairon ke nishan dekhte "mann" dur rah gaye.

"Mann"
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«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2011, 12:45:46 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2011, 06:57:44 PM »
Man Jee Aadaab!

Janab kalaam ke khayaal aur ahsaas behad khoob rahe..
aapne kafiye meiN rahkar khayaloN ko lafzoN meiN dhalne
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Aik baat nazar aayi ke aapne jo kafiya chuna uske hum kafiye
behad muqtasar se haiN so aapko apne khayaaloN ko baNdhne ke
liye jitni aazaadi chahiye thi woH nahi mil paayi so agli bar
jab aap koi kalaam ko soNche to pahele kafiye jamaa kar liya
kijiye... aur uske baad un kafiyoN par khayaaloN ko rakhne ki
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2011, 09:25:40 PM »
 wah Mann bhai lya umda kaha hai...

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«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2011, 03:00:55 AM »
bahut dhanyawad siddiquiji
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«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2011, 03:02:53 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad parwaazji... aapki har baat hamare lie bahut bahut kimti hai aur ummid hai ki aap aise hi sath dete rahenge
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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2011, 03:05:53 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad ratinvirgoji
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