Dikhawa Jogan ka...

by Arjun_ on January 08, 2009, 01:43:58 AM
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Dil mein thi jo baat
woh mujhe safh safh kehti

Yu karke "Dikhawa Jogan ka"
Meri zindagi se toh na khelti

Mana, Seekha nahi hai maine dard sehna
lekin ghut-ghut ke jeena, meri kismat na kehti

khair, kheil jogan ka jogan hi jane
Tumse achi shayri humse toh nahi hoti
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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2009, 03:31:41 AM »
kya baat hai --arjun ji.....

dil mein, jo mere hai baat,
kash tum jaan jaate.
yeh dikhawa nahin hai,
mein teri jogan hu yeh samaj paate.
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2009, 07:40:37 AM »
Very Good Arjun... Applause

Woh behrupiya hain main janta hu ghayel
Par kasam shayri ki woh asal se haseen hain

                              -SG-
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«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2009, 09:01:23 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 08, 2009, 07:40:37 AM
Very Good Arjun... Applause

Woh behrupiya hain main janta hu ghayel
Par kasam shayri ki woh asal se haseen hain

                              -SG-

Nice Lines Bhai,.

Zehar Ki Meethi Khushboo Se, Zehar Ka Asar Nahi Badalta "Sajid,.
Haseen Thi Wo Chehre Se, Magar Dil Me Uske Fareb Hi Tha,;.

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«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2009, 09:07:00 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 08, 2009, 09:01:23 AM
Nice Lines Bhai,.

Zehar Ki Meethi Khushboo Se, Zehar Ka Asar Nahi Badalta "Sajid,.
Haseen Thi Wo Chehre Se, Magar Dil Me Uske Fareb Hi Tha,;.

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Bahoth Qoob Azeem Bhai Aur sajid bhai !!

 Eak Koshish meri bhi qubool ho tawajo chahonga !!

Pilake zaher jisne mujhe zindagi baqshi !!
Ap sunchta hon wo Azeem wo shaqs kaun tha !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2009, 09:13:09 AM »
Quote from: Arjun_ on January 08, 2009, 01:43:58 AM
Dil mein thi jo baat
woh mujhe safh safh kehti

Yu karke "Dikhawa Jogan ka"
Meri zindagi se toh na khelti

Mana, Seekha nahi hai maine dard sehna
lekin ghut-ghut ke jeena, meri kismat na kehti

khair, kheil jogan ka jogan hi jane
Tumse achi shayri humse toh nahi hoti

Bohat Bohat Achchi Shayari Likhi Hai Tumne, Arjun Bhai,.
Nice One,.

Jogan Ko Kyun Badnaam Karta Hai..
Kaun Sa Jogan Aisa Kaam Karta Hai,.

Mohabbat Abke Daur Mein Ek Khel Hai Mere Dost,.
Wo Daur Aur Tha Jab Koi Zindagi Kisi Ke Naam Karta Hai,.

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«Reply #6 on: January 08, 2009, 09:18:31 AM »
Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 08, 2009, 09:07:00 AM
Bahoth Qoob Azeem Bhai Aur sajid bhai !!

 Eak Koshish meri bhi qubool ho tawajo chahonga !!

Pilake zaher jisne mujhe zindagi baqshi !!
Ap sunchta hon wo Azeem wo shaqs kaun tha !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriya Bhai, Aur Bohat Achchi Lines Likhi Hai,.
Ek Koshish Apni Bhi,.
Kabool Farmaaye

Zehar Pilaakar Zindagi Bakashne Waala, To Beshaq Rab Hi Tha "Qadeer,.
Ek Wohi Hai, Jo Bando Ki Bewafaai Ke Bawjood, Bhi Wafaa Nibhaata
Hai,.

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«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2009, 10:57:55 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 08, 2009, 09:18:31 AM
Shukriya Bhai, Aur Bohat Achchi Lines Likhi Hai,.
Ek Koshish Apni Bhi,.
Kabool Farmaaye

Zehar Pilaakar Zindagi Bakashne Waala, To Beshaq Rab Hi Tha "Qadeer,.
Ek Wohi Hai, Jo Bando Ki Bewafaai Ke Bawjood, Bhi Wafaa Nibhaata
Hai,.

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bahoth qoob bhai !! magar maine shaqsiyath ki baath ki thi !!
Waise apka Jawab Badiya hai Azeem bhai !!


Qadeer Toopchi!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2009, 12:12:56 AM »
Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 08, 2009, 10:57:55 AM
bahoth qoob bhai !! magar maine shaqsiyath ki baath ki thi !!
Waise apka Jawab Badiya hai Azeem bhai !!


Qadeer Toopchi!!


I Agree With U Bhai,.
Magar Zehar Pilaa Kar Zindagi Bakashne Waali Zaat To Allah Paak Ki Hai Na,.

Agar Hum Kisi Aur Shaqs Ko, Ye Darjaah Dete Hain, To Shirk Hai Mere Bhai,.
Sorry Ke Main Yahaan Dakhal Andaazi Kar Raha Hoon Main,.
Magar Mere Bhai, Shirk Wo Gunaah Hai Jiski Maafi Nahi Hai,.

Aur Main Nahi Chahta Ke Mera Bhai, Anjaane Mein Koi Aisa Gunaah Kare,.

Maaf Karna,.
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2009, 12:33:41 AM »
Nice one Arjun Ji

Ab to dekh liye tu Dikhawa Jogan Ka
Tu jhat se bana le woh roop Jogi Ka

Phir hoga yahan mel Jogi Jogan Ka
Duniya dekhegi khel Jogi Jogan Ka
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«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2009, 11:09:18 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 09, 2009, 12:33:41 AM
Nice one Arjun Ji

Ab to dekh liye tu Dikhawa Jogan Ka
Tu jhat se bana le woh roop Jogi Ka

Phir hoga yahan mel Jogi Jogan Ka
Duniya dekhegi khel Jogi Jogan Ka


Bohat Badhiya,.
Bhaiya Ji,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2009, 11:25:03 AM »
arjun bhai well written,........ janasheen bhai, sajid bhai aur abdul bhai aap log toh chha gaye

kii shauk aaya humko bhi mohabbat ka
 ek chehre se humne mohabbat kar li
na jaane kyun kucchh toota sa mehsoos hua
 jab oos sangdil ne nazrein pher li
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«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2009, 11:47:51 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on January 09, 2009, 11:25:03 AM
arjun bhai well written,........ janasheen bhai, sajid bhai aur abdul bhai aap log toh chha gaye

kii shauk aaya humko bhi mohabbat ka
 ek chehre se humne mohabbat kar li
na jaane kyun kucchh toota sa mehsoos hua
 jab oos sangdil ne nazrein pher li

Shukriya Salil Bhai,.
And Nice One Yaara,.
Good Lines,.
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«Reply #13 on: January 09, 2009, 01:36:16 PM »
Quote from: salil2002 on January 09, 2009, 11:25:03 AM
arjun bhai well written,........ janasheen bhai, sajid bhai aur abdul bhai aap log toh chha gaye

kii shauk aaya humko bhi mohabbat ka
 ek chehre se humne mohabbat kar li
na jaane kyun kucchh toota sa mehsoos hua
 jab oos sangdil ne nazrein pher li
Good lines Salil Ji
Ek tarfa pyaar aisa hi hota hai
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«Reply #14 on: January 09, 2009, 04:56:53 PM »
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