****dikhawe pe na jaa****

by kaushikbhawna008 on January 06, 2009, 10:50:00 AM
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Mujhe gam dene waale sun
Mere muskurane  pe na jaa
Meri aadat si ban gayi hai ab hasna
Yu chehre k chalawe par na jaa

Koshish to bohut ki thi tune mitane ki magar
Mit kar bhi ham mit na paayei hain
Shayd afsos hoga tujhe mujhe dekhkar
K kyu ham tere sehar mei wapas aayein hain

To mat kar tu khauf  k tujhe badnaam na kareinge
Tujhe kabhi pyaar kiya tha aur pyaar hi karenge
Meri to rahegi yahi tamanna k duniya ki har khushi tujhe mile
Mujhe zakhm dene wale tujhe har khushi mile
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2009, 11:53:41 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2009, 12:13:29 PM »
Superb..  Applause Applause Applause Bahut Bahut Khoooooob BHAWNA.. Waqai Aapka Likha Ek ek Lafz Dil Ko Chhoo gaya..!! Aapki Qalam ke to Hum Pahale hi kaayal the.. Aaj aapki Jazzbaaton Ke Deewane Bhi ho gaye..!!

Aapka Likha Yeh Qalaam.. Padhkar Bilkul Such Sa Laga.. Mujhe Nahi Pata Ki Yeh aapki Zindgi Ke Kisi such se Milta-Julta Hai ya Nahi.. Par Aise Alfaaz wahi Likh Sakta hai Jisne kabhi Mohabbat me Dard Liya Ho..!!!

Daad Kubool Karen.. Great Words..!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2009, 01:54:47 PM »
kya baat hai bhawnaji......

muje gam denewale, mere chehre par mat jaa,
tuje sab pata hai,mere hasi ke peeche kya hai chupaa.
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2009, 02:48:23 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on January 06, 2009, 10:50:00 AM

Mujhe gam dene waale sun
Mere muskurane  pe na jaa
Meri aadat si ban gayi hai ab hasna
Yu chehre k chalawe par na jaa

Koshish to bohut ki thi tune mitane ki magar
Mit kar bhi ham mit na paayei hain
Shayd afsos hoga tujhe mujhe dekhkar
K kyu ham tere sehar mei wapas aayein hain

To mat kar tu khauf  k tujhe badnaam na kareinge
Tujhe kabhi pyaar kiya tha aur pyaar hi karenge
Meri to rahegi yahi tamanna k duniya ki har khushi tujhe mile
Mujhe zakhm dene wale tujhe har khushi mile

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Khushibhawna jii....
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 03:01:45 PM »
Bahut Khoob Bhawna.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2009, 03:05:49 PM »
Waah bhawna ji....Khub kahi apne Applause
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on January 06, 2009, 10:50:00 AM

Mujhe gam dene waale sun
Mere muskurane  pe na jaa
Meri aadat si ban gayi hai ab hasna
Yu chehre k chalawe par na jaa

Koshish to bohut ki thi tune mitane ki magar
Mit kar bhi ham mit na paayei hain
Shayd afsos hoga tujhe mujhe dekhkar
K kyu ham tere sehar mei wapas aayein hain

To mat kar tu khauf  k tujhe badnaam na kareinge
Tujhe kabhi pyaar kiya tha aur pyaar hi karenge
Meri to rahegi yahi tamanna k duniya ki har khushi tujhe mile
Mujhe zakhm dene wale tujhe har khushi mile




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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2009, 06:16:55 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob bhawna dear ...

Nice lines cara ji...
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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2009, 06:18:26 PM »
bahoot khoob bhawna.. Good work!!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2009, 08:47:17 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on January 06, 2009, 10:50:00 AM

Mujhe gam dene waale sun
Mere muskurane  pe na jaa
Meri aadat si ban gayi hai ab hasna
Yu chehre k chalawe par na jaa

Koshish to bohut ki thi tune mitane ki magar
Mit kar bhi ham mit na paayei hain
Shayd afsos hoga tujhe mujhe dekhkar
K kyu ham tere sehar mei wapas aayein hain

To mat kar tu khauf  k tujhe badnaam na kareinge
Tujhe kabhi pyaar kiya tha aur pyaar hi karenge
Meri to rahegi yahi tamanna k duniya ki har khushi tujhe mile
Mujhe zakhm dene wale tujhe har khushi mile




Waah Kaushik Ji,.
Bohat Hi Badhiya Likha Hai Aapne,.'
Nive One Yaar,.
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2009, 09:01:44 PM »
Kaise Kaise Zakham Mujhe Mohabbat Ne Diye,.
Muskuraana Phir Bhi Meri Ek Adaa Bangayi,.

Har Mord Pe Maine, Ghamo Ko Hi Paaya Hai,.
Khushi Mere Liye, Abto Ek Sazaa Bangayi,.

Jab Koi Na Bhar Paaya, Mere Puraane Zakham.,
Dard Hi Mere Liye, Ab Ek Dawaa Bangayi,.

Dard Milne Lage Hazaaron Mujhe, Phir Bhi,.
Dard Mere Jeene Ki Ek Wajaah Bangayi,.

Kis Kisko Pukaarta Main, Akhri Waqt Mein "Azeem,.
Jeena To Mera Azaab Tha Hi, Maut Bhi Ab Ek Khataa Bangayi,.


____________________________-Jaanasheen,.

Ek Koshish Dil Se,.
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«Reply #11 on: January 07, 2009, 05:40:51 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 06, 2009, 11:53:41 AM
Wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya sajid ji agar aap bhi kuch likhte to hamein khushi hoti
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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2009, 05:43:23 AM »
Quote from: Mann on January 06, 2009, 12:13:29 PM
Superb..  Applause Applause Applause Bahut Bahut Khoooooob BHAWNA.. Waqai Aapka Likha Ek ek Lafz Dil Ko Chhoo gaya..!! Aapki Qalam ke to Hum Pahale hi kaayal the.. Aaj aapki Jazzbaaton Ke Deewane Bhi ho gaye..!!

Aapka Likha Yeh Qalaam.. Padhkar Bilkul Such Sa Laga.. Mujhe Nahi Pata Ki Yeh aapki Zindgi Ke Kisi such se Milta-Julta Hai ya Nahi.. Par Aise Alfaaz wahi Likh Sakta hai Jisne kabhi Mohabbat me Dard Liya Ho..!!!

Daad Kubool Karen.. Great Words..!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

**~** Mann **~**


shukriya mann ji
bas kuch dard tha dil mei jo shabd bankar aap sab k saamne aa gaya hamari feelings ko samajhne k liye bohut bohut shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: January 07, 2009, 05:51:22 AM »
Quote from: cara on January 06, 2009, 01:54:47 PM
kya baat hai bhawnaji......

muje gam denewale, mere chehre par mat jaa,
tuje sab pata hai,mere hasi ke peeche kya hai chupaa.





Quote from: Sonia01 on January 06, 2009, 02:48:23 PM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Khushibhawna jii....

Quote from: khwaish on January 06, 2009, 03:01:45 PM
Bahut Khoob Bhawna.. Applause Applause Applause

khwaish ji, cara ji, sonia ji aap sabka bohut bohut shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: January 07, 2009, 06:22:08 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 06, 2009, 09:01:44 PM
Kaise Kaise Zakham Mujhe Mohabbat Ne Diye,.
Muskuraana Phir Bhi Meri Ek Adaa Bangayi,.

Har Mord Pe Maine, Ghamo Ko Hi Paaya Hai,.
Khushi Mere Liye, Abto Ek Sazaa Bangayi,.

Jab Koi Na Bhar Paaya, Mere Puraane Zakham.,
Dard Hi Mere Liye, Ab Ek Dawaa Bangayi,.

Dard Milne Lage Hazaaron Mujhe, Phir Bhi,.
Dard Mere Jeene Ki Ek Wajaah Bangayi,.

Kis Kisko Pukaarta Main, Akhri Waqt Mein "Azeem,.
Jeena To Mera Azaab Tha Hi, Maut Bhi Ab Ek Khataa Bangayi,.


____________________________-Jaanasheen,.

Ek Koshish Dil Se,.







jaanasheen ji bohut bohut shukriya aapka
jo aapne itni baariki se padhkar uska jawab itni saadgi k saath diya notworthy
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