Dil aur Kalam

by klaskar on March 25, 2010, 08:09:20 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 26, 2010, 02:32:42 PM »
thanx klaskar ji.aapse discuss karne mein bahut achha laga.aapne kaafi achhi tarha samjhaya hai ab to.maza aa gaya. icon_flower
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«Reply #16 on: March 26, 2010, 03:18:25 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriyaa Suresh ji... agar main aapni soch aap tak pahuchaa paya to usse badi khushi ki baat mere liye aur kya ho sakti hai.. bahut bahut shukriya aapka Suresh ji...!!!

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 26, 2010, 02:32:42 PM
thanx klaskar ji.aapse discuss karne mein bahut achha laga.aapne kaafi achhi tarha samjhaya hai ab to.maza aa gaya. icon_flower
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«Reply #17 on: March 26, 2010, 09:27:23 PM »
Aree nahi , Aise koi baat nahi hai .
yh it vs 1st post & i m nt used 2 write bhut phele kabhi likhti thi abb kabhi likha hi nahi bus aise hi jo ban pada maine likh diya ... thnx 4 ur apreciation ..
it makes me mre motivatd ..
Thnx once again..
Quote from: klaskar on March 26, 2010, 12:35:48 AM
Bahut khoob Neel ji...

bahut achcha likhte hain aap bhi... aapki pehli kavita Yoindia me... aage k liye aapko hamari or se bahut bahut shubhkaamnaayen...aur yunhi apne lekh padhwaate rahiyega humko...

Aapke is lekh se hamare kalam roopi khanjar ko aur tez kar diya hai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: March 26, 2010, 09:57:52 PM »
Hi Neel Ji,

If my appreciation motivates u then I am always there to appreciate u. But for that u have to write. If u do not write then what i will appreciate. So please start writing. N can I call u Neel?

ALL THE BEST...!!!!!
Quote from: neelgold on March 26, 2010, 09:27:23 PM
Aree nahi , Aise koi baat nahi hai .
yh it vs 1st post & i m nt used 2 write bhut phele kabhi likhti thi abb kabhi likha hi nahi bus aise hi jo ban pada maine likh diya ... thnx 4 ur apreciation ..
it makes me mre motivatd ..
Thnx once again..
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«Reply #19 on: March 26, 2010, 10:09:54 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on March 26, 2010, 01:40:23 PM
Suresh ji...

Ise is tarah se samjhe aap....

" Agar vastavikta ki nazar se dekhenge to kalam likhta hai aur dil sharir ka ek ang keh sakte hain. Dono me kisi bhi tarah ka koi mel nahi hai. Har vyakti yahi kahega ki dono me bahaut fark hai. Usi baat ko maine ek dusre nazariye se soch k likha hai ki usme koi fark hai bhi to wo bahut kam hai. Jo ki naa ke barabar hai. Usi ko maine likha ki ... "Dil aur kalam me fark hi kitna hai"...aur fark hote huye bhi (vastavikta me) kya samaanta hai usi ko pesh kiya hai maine.... Par fark hota to hai hi. Har dusre insaan k soch me. Maine kuch soch k likha aapko shayad kuch aur samajh aaya. Ek hi baat ko alag alag tarike se samjha ja sakta hai."

Dil hi to hai jo humse likhwaata hai. Jab tak dil me dard rahega . Humari kalam chalti rahegi aur hum likhte rahenge.

Umeed hai aapke prashna ka jawab main de paya hoon.


oh to derd hone pe hi likna he ye to koe argument nahi, kuch log to freelance bi likte hen koe anand mein likte hen to koe des bakti mein likte hen, ye jo tum bole it could not be the only reason to write poetry. Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: March 26, 2010, 10:28:23 PM »
Bilkul sahi kaha aapne ki log freelance likhte hain aur sach kahun to bahut achcha likhte hain. Ye baat humne sirf apne liya kaha tha ki jab tak dard rahega tab tak hum likhte rahenge. Darasal hum jyadatar dard bhara hi likhte hain. Yahaan hum matlab "Main". Baaki likhne me kuch khaas mazaa nahi aataa. Shayad bhavishya me likhun main baaki kisi aur theme par bhi. Aur jarur koshish karunga likhne ki.
Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

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oh to derd hone pe hi likna he ye to koe argument nahi, kuch log to freelance bi likte hen koe anand mein likte hen to koe des bakti mein likte hen, ye jo tum bole it could not be the only reason to write poetry. Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: March 26, 2010, 10:38:14 PM »
uffo to ye bolna ke derd mein likna tumara specialty he, per comment dete samae tora general sa vision dena he na.
chalo thanks Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: March 26, 2010, 10:42:16 PM »
Ji bilkul...comment dete samay thora general sa vision dene ki koshish karenge!!!

N u r always welcome...!!!
Quote from: Kanta on March 26, 2010, 10:38:14 PM
uffo to ye bolna ke derd mein likna tumara specialty he, per comment dete samae tora general sa vision dena he na.
chalo thanks Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: March 27, 2010, 06:21:43 PM »
THanx kapil ji, i got ur msg & its really sweet of u .. i read ut post on blog syt also & i relly appreciate ur writings...   icon_salut relly....
i vll also try 2 write .. bhut kuch ata hai dimag main bhut kuch chalta rehta hai maan main bus likhti hi nhi.. sum tym vn i driving ek complte poem / u can say Gazl ban jati hai bt sirf khyalo main ... anywyz dis is gud syt 2 bring out of it coz im nt a person 2 sit & hv papr pen wid me & write .. bt yh i can play wid on dis keyboard & wid my words ...

i vll try 2 write bt relly dnt knoe ..

yh got lots of motivation ..

thnx a lot
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«Reply #24 on: March 27, 2010, 06:57:24 PM »
Thnx SHad ji got ur msg also ... Dont relly knoe hoe 2 reply u bak totaly new 2 dis syt didnt fynd any key 4 reply bak.. so posting my thnx u here .. hope u vll read dis & accept my thnx [/color]
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«Reply #25 on: March 29, 2010, 06:16:42 PM »
Neel ji,

Jab khayal dil se nikalke shabdon ka roop le leti hai to use kaagaz pe utaar diya kijiye. Jaisa ki aapne kaha ki kaagaz kalam ki aadat nahi aapko. To keyboard hi istemaal kar dijiye. Start writing.

Quote from: neelgold on March 27, 2010, 06:21:43 PM
THanx kapil ji, i got ur msg & its really sweet of u .. i read ut post on blog syt also & i relly appreciate ur writings...   icon_salut relly....
i vll also try 2 write .. bhut kuch ata hai dimag main bhut kuch chalta rehta hai maan main bus likhti hi nhi.. sum tym vn i driving ek complte poem / u can say Gazl ban jati hai bt sirf khyalo main ... anywyz dis is gud syt 2 bring out of it coz im nt a person 2 sit & hv papr pen wid me & write .. bt yh i can play wid on dis keyboard & wid my words ...

i vll try 2 write bt relly dnt knoe ..

yh got lots of motivation ..

thnx a lot

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«Reply #26 on: May 26, 2010, 04:01:17 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Kapil ji,Neel ji aur kanta ji ne bhi bahut acha saath diya.lovely creation.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: May 26, 2010, 04:18:51 AM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Kapil Ji.. !
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«Reply #28 on: May 26, 2010, 08:04:19 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 26, 2010, 04:01:17 AM
Wah bahut khoob Kapil ji,Neel ji aur kanta ji ne bhi bahut acha saath diya.lovely creation.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: May 26, 2010, 08:07:12 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Divya ji...!!!

Quote from: Sophi on May 26, 2010, 04:18:51 AM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Kapil Ji.. !
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