Dil Bechain Hone Laga......:Shayri-E-Dard

punam

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Unki yaad mujhe yun jalane lagi hai.
Dil bechain hone laga sham dhalne lagi hai..

Tanhai mujhe yun dasne lagi hai.
Khud ki parchai bhi daarane lagi hai...

Kante hi kante hain aangan mein mere.
Chand ki chandni bhi mujhe jalane lagi hai...

Manzil ke qareeb khud ko dekha magar
Mujhe dekh jaise woh bhi peeche hatne lagi hai...


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syednaami

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2008, 07:55:50 AM »

Yaaden hain to Jalna bhi zaroori hai, -
Dil ki bechaine main aksar yeh hota hai, -

Tanhai ko mat konso mere sanam, -
Parchaai hi to saath nibhaati hai, -

Phoolon ke rakhwaale hain yeh kaante, -
Chandini to raah nayee dikhlaati hai, -

Paakar bhi kho dete ho manzil ko, -
Yaqeen rakh dil men raasta to sidha hai, -

(Syed Naami)

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Bravo!! Good creation, keep the spirit up....


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2008, 10:29:07 AM »

nice creation punam ji and gud reply syednaami ji


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honeyrose

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2008, 12:59:02 PM »

punam aur syed bohat khoob likha hai.. Usual Smile


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sarthika

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2008, 01:28:02 PM »

Good work Punam and Syednaami jee!!

Sham ki tanhaai aor yah bechaini
Man mai kai khayal aor yah bechaini
Ankhon mai ek nami aor yah bechaini
Phir wo hi yaad aor yah bechaini!!

Kaali dasti se raat aor yah bechaini
Sooni sooni deewar aor yah bechaini
Ruki ruki se hawa aor yah bechaini
Wo hi main, wo hi tu aor yah bechaini!!!!


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punam

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2008, 01:59:19 PM »

Thanx Honey di...

Thanx shihab ji..chalo aap ko acha laga..

Baadal ji thanx ...bahot acha likhe aap ne...

Roja di..thanx ...bas kuch sikh rahi hun...

Thanx sarthika ji...

bahot khoob likha aapne sach me ..bahot acha laga...


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Rajbir

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2008, 02:08:44 PM »

Punam and Syed

Bahut achcha laga aap ka likha padh kar!

@Sarthika tongue3

Kya baat hai ji aap ki bechaini ki Winking

End bahut achcha laga !


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syednaami

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2008, 03:32:56 PM »

Aasman men laali chhai tu khilkhilai, -
Mann men nayi tarang ubhri tu machli, -
Nainon men nayi umang ayi tu sambhli, -
Yaadon ne thhandi aah li tu tilmilai. -

Chand ne chaandini phailai tu jhilmilai, -
Jagmag hui galiyan chobaare tu Chahekdi, -
Thhandi hawa se khushboo ayi tu mahekdi, -
Meri chaah ne kya bechain to tu chali aai. -

(Syed Naami)

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Wonderful, logical attitude is visible in your poetry, what a nice piece of pure thoughts and depair.
Bravo!!

Quote from: sarthika on May 06, 2008, 01:28:02 PM


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baadal102

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2008, 03:42:44 PM »

bahoot aache poonam kya baat hai hazoor Applause

good work naami ji N sarthika ji

Baadal


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syednaami

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2008, 04:13:06 PM »

baadal102 saahib, Thanks a lot for encouragement.


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pandit

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2008, 06:07:05 PM »

nice li

Quote from: punam on May 06, 2008, 07:48:30 AM

nice lines poonam ji...


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A Saeed

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #11 on: July 20, 2009, 09:11:10 PM »

Yaadon main kisi ke yon jala nahi karte
be-wajah khud ko bechain kiya nahi karte
tanhai to tnahai,parchai bhi saath chod degi (Punam Ji Usual Smile

)
be-sabab dil kisi ko yon diya nahi karte
(A Saeed, Delhi)


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madhuwesh

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #12 on: July 20, 2009, 09:19:50 PM »

Wah Punam ji midblowing creation,bahut hi khoob,beautiful lines by Syednaami ji and Saeed ji,kamaal ke likha aap sabne.excellent. icon_thumleft


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punam

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #13 on: July 21, 2009, 11:16:11 AM »

shukriya baadal ...and pandit ji....

Quote from: A Saeed on July 20, 2009, 09:11:10 PM

Yaadon main kisi ke yon jala nahi karte
be-wajah khud ko bechain kiya nahi karte
tanhai to tnahai,parchai bhi saath chod degi (Punam Ji Usual Smile

)
be-sabab dil kisi ko yon diya nahi karte
(A Saeed, Delhi)

bahut khoob saeed ji...1 saal k baad yeh post bahar lake isme kuch likhe bahut bahut shukriya ..

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 20, 2009, 09:19:50 PM

Wah Punam ji midblowing creation,bahut hi khoob,beautiful lines by Syednaami ji and Saeed ji,kamaal ke likha aap sabne.excellent. icon_thumleft

Thanx a lot Madhu ji....


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A Saeed

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Re: Dil Bechain Hone Laga......

«Reply #14 on: July 21, 2009, 06:56:09 PM »

Punam ji yeh baat to maine younhi mazaq main keh di. agr a bura laga ho to maaf karna


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