Dil Behlana -Panna 4:Shayri-E-Dard

faiiz_76

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«Reply #45 on: October 03, 2007, 08:07:29 PM »

yeh sukhan jo ham ne raqam kiye
hain yeh sab werq teri yaad ke ....

very very nice.
agar app thora wazan theek ker lain to bohat acha likh sakti hain ..keep it up waqt ke sath sath sab theek ho jayega


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Pooja

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Dil Behlana

«Reply #46 on: October 03, 2007, 09:11:42 PM »

bahoot bahot shukaria Faiz ji!! app galtia batate rahe aor main thik karne ki koshish karugi taki kavita mai wazan aa sake Usual Smile


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TeraKuttaGharKaNaGhaatKa

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Dil Behlana

«Reply #47 on: October 04, 2007, 12:01:42 PM »

meri raah mein kante bicha kar
kaunsa tum phool traashte ho

beech safar mein raahein batka kar
kaunsi manjilo ke nishan banate ho

karke bewafai iss mord par aa kar
apni lalach ko mehfil mein dard batate ho

pal mein hassa kar, pal mein rula kar
Kaise mere ashQon se apna dil behlate ho


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Pooja

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Dil Behlana

«Reply #48 on: October 05, 2007, 03:43:29 PM »

Nice Lines TKNGKNGK.. Nice to see you after long time... ho sake to please apna nik change kar le.. likhte hue bahoot ajeeb lagta hai..

Shabdo ke teer se wo dil behlate hai
Kis tarah se pyar ko apne bhulate hai

Kabhi bandha tha rehsam ki dor se pyar
Jinko kanto se ajj wo torre jaate hai

Ajeeb naata hai bhawnao ka insaan se
Jo na hua apna, to mitti main use rondein jaate hai

Waqat dikhata hai kaya kaya manjar “Pooja”
Kabhi khud ko, kabhi is duniya ke rukh ko soche jaate hai!!


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ISHPREET

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Dil Behlana

«Reply #49 on: October 05, 2007, 07:50:54 PM »

Great one pooja...bahut khoobi se aap haal-e-dil bayan kar lete ho..

Tumhare chand alfaaz hi kaafi hai "pooja"
mehfil mein haal-e-dil bayaan karne ke liye
hum likh bhi le agar saari kitab bhi
to kam padegi kisi ko
haal-e-dil samjhane ke liye Usual Smile


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TeraKuttaGharKaNaGhaatKa

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Dil Behlana

«Reply #50 on: October 06, 2007, 04:39:59 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

thanks for welcoming Pooja, janta hu naam ajeeb hai, lekin yahi paya hai.

khud par aaye, tab dil tilmilaye
aoro ko rond kar sab uthna chahe

dil par ek tinke sa bhoj nahi,
koi zindagi chahe tinka tinka ho jaye

jis par bhi tum karlo vishwas "pagal"
wohi sab kuch cheen apna ghar basaye

kya fiza,kya rang tum dekhogi bewaffa
Pehle khud se ek bar Najar milana to aaye !!!!


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Pooja

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Dil Behlana

«Reply #51 on: October 08, 2007, 03:25:53 PM »

Nice lines!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Dil Behlana

«Reply #52 on: January 14, 2008, 10:36:22 PM »

khud se jo nazar milai, ankho mai ansoo paya hai
teri jali kati baaton ne, mujhko bahoot rulaya hai


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Roja

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Re: Dil Behlana

«Reply #53 on: January 15, 2008, 02:52:49 AM »

Quote from: TeraKuttaGharKaNaGhaatKa on October 04, 2007, 12:01:42 PM

Nice lines... But jaise didi ne kaha apna id change karlena
Kutta kehna accha nahi lagta...


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Roja

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Re: Dil Behlana

«Reply #54 on: January 15, 2008, 02:59:33 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on October 05, 2007, 03:43:29 PM

Bahut khoob.... di daad hazir hai.
waqt ki kami hai varna kuch mai b jawab main likh deti..


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Pooja

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Re: Dil Behlana

«Reply #55 on: January 15, 2008, 02:31:43 PM »

Thanks Roja!!!!


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Roja

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Re: Dil Behlana

«Reply #56 on: January 15, 2008, 02:45:16 PM »

Kabhi Khamoshi Bhi Bahut Kuch Keh Jati Hai
Tadapne Ke Liye Sirf Yaad Reh Jati Hai

Kya Farak Padta Hai Dil Ho Ya Koiyla
Jalne Ke Baad To Sirf Raakh Rah Jati Hai


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Pooja

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Re: Dil Behlana

«Reply #57 on: January 15, 2008, 02:48:02 PM »

wah kaya baat hai

wo apni khamoshi se hume saja dete rahe
hum apni khamoshi se unka sath dete rahe
badal kar roop rahe wo mere pass pass kahin
aor hum apni tanhaio mai unhe awaz dete rahe!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Dil Behlana

«Reply #58 on: January 16, 2008, 03:21:37 PM »

very True Majid!! kaha ho app ajkal!! jayada dikhai nahi dete!!

Kon hai boora jahan main, koi nahi
humara hi na tha mukdaar, koi nahi
chaah usse aor khud hi chord diya
unto hai sari dunia, per mera, koi nahi


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honeyrose

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Re: Dil Behlana

«Reply #59 on: January 17, 2008, 11:17:03 AM »

Bohat acha hai majid ji..

Khushi mili lekin hans na sakey
gham mila lekin ro na sakey..
Zindagi ka yahi dastoor hai..
Jise chaha use paa na sake
Jise paya use chah na sakey
Tarasti nazron ki pyaas ho tum..
Tadapte dil keh aas ho tum..
Bujhti zindagi ki saans ho tum..


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