Dil be-qaraar kiyon hai ............ Ram Saraswat

by Ram Saraswat on September 21, 2012, 01:12:14 PM
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Nahi  daagdar daaman,to fir iztirar  kiyon  hai,
khud  hi hakim ho to , dil  be-qaraar kiyon hai.

Muddat se is  chaman ne,dekhii  nahiin  baharen'
naazuk se nasheman pe,mausam  ki maar kiyon hai.

Hai sach ki yehaan sab  ki,poori huiin muraaden,
per  aaj  be-wazh ye,soona  mazaar  kiyon   hai.

Jab haath mein hai kangan,chehre ko dhekh ne ko,
to aarsii ki khwahish,yoon baar baar kiyon  hai.

Jab hai raha shuroo  se,sir khud buland  ab tak,
do  lafz aaj kahnaa,  be-ikhtiyaar  kiyon   hai.

Manaa ki  mujh se  milnaa,un ko  nahin  gawaara,
shiddat ke  saath  mera,fir  intizaar kiyon  hai.

Jab aag lag rahi ho, har,shahr  har  galii mein,
ek aankh tak na fir bhi,koi sharmsaar kiyon hai. 

Zaahir  hai jab sabhi per, sab haal "Ram" teraa,
fir  iftikhaar ka ye, ab  ishtihaar  kiyon  hai.

 


   
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2012, 02:25:50 PM »
LAAJWAAB LAAJWAAB saraswat ji dili daad qubool farmaayen
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2012, 03:15:19 PM »
boht khub ram ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2012, 03:39:00 PM »
bahut khoob bahut hi umda creation ram ji
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 03:56:24 PM »
Quote from: Ram Saraswat on September 21, 2012, 01:12:14 PM
nahi  daagdar daaman,to fir iztirar  kiyon  hai,
khud  hi hakim ho to , dil  be-qaraar kiyon hai.

Muddat se is  chaman ne,dekhii  nahiin  baharen'
naazuk se nasheman pe,mausam  ki maar kiyon hai.

Hai sach ki yehaan sab  ki,poori huiin muraaden,
per  aaj  be-wazh ye,soona  mazaar  kiyon   hai.

Jab haath mein hai kangan,chehre ko dhekh ne ko,
to aarsii ki khwahish,yoon baar baar kiyon  hai.

Jab hai raha shuroo  se,sir khud buland  ab tak,
do  lafz aaj kahnaa,  be-ikhtiyaar  kiyon   hai.

Manaa ki  mujh se  milnaa,un ko  nahin  gawaara,
shiddat ke  saath  mera,fir  intizaar kiyon  hai.

Jab aag lag rahi ho, har,shahr  har  galii mein,
ek aankh tak na fir bhi,koi sharmsaar kiyon hai. 

Zaahir  hai jab sabhi per, sab haal "Ram" teraa,
fir  iftikhaar ka ye, ab  ishtihaar  kiyon  hai.

 


   

khubsurat ghazal
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2012, 04:23:18 PM »
very nice ghazal
bahut umda ashaar..dili daad haajir hai
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2012, 06:37:18 PM »
 Applause

Bahut khub likha Hai Ram Saraswat ji aapne.
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2012, 07:31:05 PM »
very very nice...beautiful!
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2012, 12:59:10 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2012, 05:11:10 AM »
Bahut khoob,,,,,zabardast creation Saraswat ji ..
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«Reply #10 on: September 22, 2012, 10:11:32 AM »
Saraswat Jee Aadaab!

WaaH janab waaH kia kahne aapke waaH bahut umdaa
behad khoob pur asar aur gazab ke khayaalOn ko
khoob lafzoN meiN piroya hai janab.... Usual Smile

Mashaa Allaah har ashaar meiN gazab ki gehrai hai..
Behad khoob ... is kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili
daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: September 22, 2012, 02:51:08 PM »
Waah bahaut khoob Ram ji .... Is khoobsurat aur pur asar qalaam par dheron daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #12 on: September 22, 2012, 04:31:11 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on September 21, 2012, 02:25:50 PM
LAAJWAAB LAAJWAAB saraswat ji dili daad qubool farmaayen
Bahut bahut shukriyaa Dr. Saini
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«Reply #13 on: September 22, 2012, 04:34:20 PM »
Quote from: saahill on September 21, 2012, 03:15:19 PM
boht khub ram ji
Bahut Bahut Shukriyaa Saahillji
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«Reply #14 on: September 22, 2012, 04:38:33 PM »
Quote from: soudagar on September 21, 2012, 03:39:00 PM
bahut khoob bahut hi umda creation ram ji
Bahut Bahut Shukriyaa Saudagarji
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