dil chahta hai

by Pooja on August 12, 2004, 08:23:46 PM
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Aryaan
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«Reply #45 on: December 08, 2005, 07:58:57 PM »
Good Ones Pooja...
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tanhachand
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«Reply #46 on: December 09, 2005, 01:22:56 PM »
its strange ................realy v strange ....................maine aapka ye poem padha hin  nahi tha par kutch issi tarh ka poem aaj maine bhi post kiya hai ..........................................


behad achcha likha hai aapne ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bye tc ...........
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Pooja
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«Reply #47 on: December 09, 2005, 04:02:09 PM »
Thanks Aryan and tanhachand!!

Insaan ke ahsaas ek jaise hi hai...magar unhe izhaar karne ke tarike alag alag..kai baar ek jaise ho bhi sakty hai..

Meri kahani per, jo tum ro diye
jakham tere ka ahsaas ho gaya
kahi toota hoga dil tera bhi
bin kuch kahein, yah tera ansoo kah gaya!!!
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tanhachand
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«Reply #48 on: December 09, 2005, 04:20:09 PM »
pehli baar mujhe kisi ka aisa reply mila ...........warna ek time tha jab khud ke hin likhe poems ko net pe dhundhti thi ki kahin pehle kisi ne toh nahi likha ....................or sach oobb si gayi thi iss azeeb si bimaari se................likhne ka mann hin  nahi hota tha ..............coz aksar mere bhav mere shabd mere poems kahin  na kahin kisi na kisi se takra hin  jaate the ................................

thanks pooja ............................


.......................bye tc ............................
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Silence
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«Reply #49 on: December 09, 2005, 04:22:41 PM »
bohot ache didi!!

kitni bar samjhaya ashkon ko,
na suanya karo sabko apna hal-e-dil,
koi tumari kismat badal to nahin sakhta,
jo yeh duniya to hai hi sangdil!
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Pooja
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«Reply #50 on: December 09, 2005, 04:31:23 PM »
Tanhachand... yahan dil khol kar likho. ahsaas to takrayegy hi kayun ki insaani fidrat ek hi hai.. dard hoga to her ek ke ansoo hi ayega...aor agar juban ek hai..to lafz to takrayegy hi...

Thanks Silence and Good one dear!!


Ashq ko bas bahana milana chahiye
Mujko koi deewana milana chahiye
baat, be-baat per, ab yah dil ro parta hai
isko sirf ek bahana milna chahiye!!
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Silence
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«Reply #51 on: December 09, 2005, 04:36:04 PM »
thank u sis!!

mat karo wafa ki baat ke ankhon se askh behete hai,
in moziyon kobhi khona nahin chahate jinme woh rehte hai,
unka dard bhi amanat samajh kar sambale hue hai hum,
islyie is pani ko pee kar hum yeh sitam sehte hai!
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Pooja
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«Reply #52 on: December 09, 2005, 05:17:12 PM »
Good one Silence!!!

Be-wafa ka jab bhi naam liya
wafa khud hi sath mai kah gaya
Jaane wala to chala gaya
Tamam umar ka dard mujko de gaya!!
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Silence
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«Reply #53 on: December 10, 2005, 05:54:40 PM »
bohot ache!!

is dard se bhi hum shikwa kya kare jo humse unse mila,
murja gaya woh ek phool bhi to gumon ki khiza me khila,
kya kare jab zoor chalta nahin kismat pe apni,
kya kahen ek bewafa se aur kya kare Khuda se bhi gila!
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Pooja
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«Reply #54 on: December 14, 2005, 06:23:23 PM »
Good one Silence!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #55 on: January 17, 2006, 02:16:47 PM »
Dil chahat ahai ki wo phir se mera ho jaye
jo dekhein sapne sath sath, wo khawab poora ho jaye
yah judai, yah tanhaai, sab mujse door ho jaye
Dil chahta hai, dil ki yah chahat poori ho jaye!!!

jo chaha dil ne, wo kab mujko milla hai
phir kayun ajj Zindagi se gilla hai
ajj bhir teri chaht ne tarpaya hai
ajj bhir meri tanhaaine mujko daraya hai!!!
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HumTum is back
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«Reply #56 on: January 17, 2006, 03:22:56 PM »
Nice Nice !!!

us sitamgar ko ya-rab na bhula payu ga
daag us ke lagaye dil pe na mita payu ga
woh apna bana ke chor bhi gya hai mujhe
bedard zamaney ko kaisey yeh bata payu ga !!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #57 on: January 17, 2006, 03:24:34 PM »
HumTum again a beauty from you. Keep it up !
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HumTum is back
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«Reply #58 on: January 17, 2006, 04:33:17 PM »
Thanks a million Big B :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #59 on: January 18, 2006, 04:17:25 AM »
Good one humtum ji!!

Tarap dil ki, usko sunai degi jaroor
wo rahen kahin bhi, meri najar usko dikhai degi jaroor
wo uska, na palat kar dekhna mujko
meri muhabbat ne, Rulaai di hogi, usko jaroor!!!!
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