Dil ek naya.......( Ghayel )

by sajid_ghayel on April 28, 2009, 07:53:19 AM
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sajid_ghayel
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Jo cheen kar le gaye mujhse khoobiya.N meri
Main un dosto ke aib damen me chipaye phirta hu

Koi baat bhi tumhari mujhe badal nahi payee
Main nafrato se bhi tumhari bohat pyaar karta hu

Na ho mehfil me koi ranjish, jo koi bhala humko bol bhaithe
Bas yeh soch kar, main har ilzaam swikaar karta hu

Bas thodi mohlat mujhe tum dedo, samet lu main toote dil ko
Toote phir dobara dil ek naya Ghayel, taiyaar karta hu

-Sajid Ghayel-
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2009, 02:16:35 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 28, 2009, 07:53:19 AM
Jo cheen kar le gaye mujhse khoobiya.N meri
Main un dosto ke aib damen me chipaye phirta hu

Koi baat bhi tumhari mujhe badal nahi payee
Main nafrato se bhi tumhari bohat pyaar karta hu

Na ho mehfil me koi ranjish, jo koi bhala humko bol bhaithe
Bas yeh soch kar, main har ilzaam swikaar karta hu

Bas thodi mohlat mujhe tum dedo, samet lu main toote dil ko
Toote phir dobara dil ek naya Ghayel, taiyaar karta hu

-Sajid Ghayel-

Bahut Khoob Ghayal Ji
Bahut doston ke aib dil me chhupaye hue ho
Very very good, Beautiful composition.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2009, 02:24:51 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on April 28, 2009, 07:59:46 AM
verr nice Gheyel Ji

acha likha hai aapne.. Applause

Bohat bohat shukriyaa.N dost.

Oh yaro sirf 2 reply, itna kharab likh diya kya maine  DOH
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junaidqadir
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2009, 02:25:32 PM »
Bahoth bahoth umda mera dost matle ka to jawab hi nahi baoth gaheri baath kahe di tumne sajid ...allah apke kalamth ko izzath bakshe !!


Utha jo pather to de samar !!
Mujhe eak aise shajar ki talash hai !!

JQ
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2009, 04:09:36 PM »
Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 28, 2009, 02:16:35 PM
Bahut Khoob Ghayal Ji
Bahut doston ke aib dil me chhupaye hue ho
Very very good, Beautiful composition.
SARVESH RASTOGI

Bohat bohat shukriyaan Sarvesh....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2009, 04:11:22 PM »
Quote from: junaidqadir on April 28, 2009, 02:25:32 PM
Bahoth bahoth umda mera dost matle ka to jawab hi nahi baoth gaheri baath kahe di tumne sajid ...allah apke kalamth ko izzath bakshe !!


Utha jo pather to de samar !!
Mujhe eak aise shajar ki talash hai !!

JQ

Subhan_allah Qadeer mere kalam se ziyada tumhari dad khoobsurat hain....bohat khoobsurat sher kaha hain tumne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2009, 04:15:27 PM »
Good one Sajid
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junaidqadir
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2009, 04:15:42 PM »
Nawazish karam sajid apke kalam ke aggge haqeeq insaan ki khuch bisath hi nahi ashar tak pahonch gaye app isse baadi baath kya hosakti hai hausla afza-e-ka shukriya janab ke nazaron ki iniyath baaqi khuch nahi ..Allah khush rakhe mere dost ko !!

JQ
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honeyrose
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2009, 05:55:09 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Sajid ji..
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2009, 09:18:59 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 28, 2009, 04:15:27 PM
Good one Sajid

Thank You Pooja...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2009, 09:25:11 AM »
wah sajid ji.. bahoot khoob likha hai.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2009, 10:31:14 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 28, 2009, 07:53:19 AM
Jo cheen kar le gaye mujhse khoobiya.N meri
Main un dosto ke aib damen me chipaye phirta hu

Koi baat bhi tumhari mujhe badal nahi payee
Main nafrato se bhi tumhari bohat pyaar karta hu

Na ho mehfil me koi ranjish, jo koi bhala humko bol bhaithe
Bas yeh soch kar, main har ilzaam swikaar karta hu

Bas thodi mohlat mujhe tum dedo, samet lu main toote dil ko
Toote phir dobara dil ek naya Ghayel, taiyaar karta hu

-Sajid Ghayel-
Bahut Khoob Ghayel Ji
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salma786
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2009, 10:34:51 AM »
Very nice Sajid ji!
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2009, 12:13:14 PM »
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2009, 01:54:47 PM »


sajid bhai chha gaye hai bhaijaan aap toh..dil karta hai haath choom loon aapke kya karamaat likhte ho bhai...last two lines toh dil k paar ho gayi hai........

dil le kar mera chal diye maikhane kii taraf
unka kehna tha kii toote dil ko jaam ki jaroorat hai
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