Dil-- Jal Raha Hai~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on May 27, 2009, 01:23:33 PM
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ummed karta hoon aapko pasand aayegi

jis chiraag kii roshni hai tere ghar mein
kabhi dekhna kaun ooski lau main jal raha hai

tum to chen se ood kar so jaate ho chadrein
kabhi dekhna tumhaari salamati ki dua kaun pad raha hai

itne ajnabee ho kar duniya se sajate ho mehfil
kabhi dekho to kiske dil mein gham pal raha hai

main nahin poochhta kii tum kiske dil mein rehte ho
jo tumhe chahta hai,poochho toh uska haal kya chal raha hai

palat kar dekhte nahin tum yeh mujhe maloom hai
magar yeh toh dekho jis pe paanv rakha woh dil machal raha hai
 
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vikas2210
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2009, 01:33:02 PM »
very nice Salil ji. Bahut hui umdaaaa....
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2009, 02:02:12 PM »
Quote from: vikas2210 on May 27, 2009, 01:33:02 PM
very nice Salil ji. Bahut hui umdaaaa....
shukriya bhaijaan
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2009, 06:42:12 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Salil dear
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2009, 06:45:02 PM »
Wah Wah!! Kitni Maasumiyat Thi aapke Iss Nazm Mein..Bahut Khoob Salil ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2009, 06:49:32 PM »
Aap likho hume pasand na aye aisa toh ho hi nahin sakta...Bahaut ache bhai...Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2009, 02:06:51 AM »
wah sallil ji,excellent,very very nice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2009, 08:15:45 AM »
Wah wah salil brother darling bohat khoob ... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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f2_zeal
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2009, 07:03:54 AM »
Man its just fantastic..
really amazing..

Keep the good work...
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: May 30, 2009, 06:34:51 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on May 27, 2009, 06:42:12 PM
Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Salil dear
Quote from: khwaish on May 27, 2009, 06:45:02 PM
Wah Wah!! Kitni Maasumiyat Thi aapke Iss Nazm Mein..Bahut Khoob Salil ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: dead heart on May 27, 2009, 06:49:32 PM
Aap likho hume pasand na aye aisa toh ho hi nahin sakta...Bahaut ache bhai...Applause
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 28, 2009, 02:06:51 AM
wah sallil ji,excellent,very very nice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 28, 2009, 02:06:51 AM
wah sallil ji,excellent,very very nice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: honeyrose on May 28, 2009, 08:15:45 AM
Wah wah salil brother darling bohat khoob ... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: f2_zeal on May 29, 2009, 07:03:54 AM
Man its just fantastic..
really amazing..

Keep the good work...
thanks talat di .khwahish, rahim, madhuwesh, f2zeal, jaya di
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