dil jo bezaar raha kaise dhadak payega (zarraa)

by zarraa on May 14, 2012, 05:43:02 PM
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ik dafa phool bhi murjha ke mahak payega
dil jo bezaar raha kaise dhadak payega

(bezaar = disgusted)


ankh ko ashk ki aur dil ko khalish ki taaleem
kaun kya maktab-e-ulfat meiN sabak payega

(khalish = pain, maktab = school)


kaash aate na kiye zulf pareeshaaN rukh par
raat hogee na siyah din na damak payega

(pareeshaaN = scattered, siyah = black, damak = glow)


dil ko karne haiN taghaaful ke sau gile tujhse
bas na jaane ki wo kis roz ye hak payega

(taghaaful = neglect)


hai zarooree ki rahe hasrat-e-parwaaz buland
ye zarooree naheeN har koyee ufak payega

(parwaaz = flight, ufak = horizon)


kal talak tha jo mahal aaj makaaN taNg hua
ek din shams bhi kaafee na falak payega

(taNg = narrow, shams = sun, falak = sky)


gar hai maiynoshi buree to hai saza khud apnee
paye jo roz saza kaise bahak payega

(maiynoshi = drinking wine)


gar hai gum hona tumheiN zarraa to aise hona
ke koyee raah bhi teree naheeN tak payega


- zarraa
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2012, 06:11:13 PM »
Zarra Sahaab Aadaab!

YO ki bazm meiN aapki pahli gazal khoob rahi.... Kafi gehre ahsaas
O khayaaloN ko lafzoN meiN sameta hai janab... Usual Smile
Bahut khoob badi umdaa gazal rahi...

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile
Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile

                   

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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2012, 01:44:34 AM »
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bahut khoob Zarra ji...
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2012, 03:42:43 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2012, 04:03:11 AM »
bahut khoob dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2012, 05:38:03 AM »
ik dafa phool bhi murjha ke mahak payega
dil jo bezaar raha kaise dhadak payega

(bezaar = disgusted)


ankh ko ashk ki aur dil ko khalish ki taaleem
kaun kya maktab-e-ulfat meiN sabak payega

(khalish = pain, maktab = school)


kaash aate na kiye zulf pareeshaaN rukh par
raat hogee na siyah din na damak payega

(pareeshaaN = scattered, siyah = black, damak = glow)


dil ko karne haiN taghaaful ke sau gile tujhse
bas na jaane ki wo kis roz ye hak payega

(taghaaful = neglect)


hai zarooree ki rahe hasrat-e-parwaaz buland
ye zarooree naheeN har koyee ufak payega

(parwaaz = flight, ufak = horizon)


kal talak tha jo mahal aaj makaaN taNg hua
ek din shams bhi kaafee na falak payega

(taNg = narrow, shams = sun, falak = sky)


gar hai maiynoshi buree to hai saza khud apnee
paye jo roz saza kaise bahak payega

(maiynoshi = drinking wine)


gar hai gum hona tumheiN zarraa to aise hona
ke koyee raah bhi teree naheeN tak payega


- zarraa


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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2012, 06:05:53 AM »
Bahut  achhi  ghazal  hai  Zarra  saheb . Yoindia  Shayariadab  per   aapka
khair  maqdam  hai .  3rd   sher  bahut   hi   khubsurat   hai  ...  Qaafiyon
ke  lihaaz   se   shayad   nazar e saani   karna   chaaheiN .
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2012, 07:30:10 AM »
bahut khoob....

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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2012, 04:56:30 AM »
Zarra Sahaab Aadaab!

YO ki bazm meiN aapki pahli gazal khoob rahi.... Kafi gehre ahsaas
O khayaaloN ko lafzoN meiN sameta hai janab... Usual Smile
Bahut khoob badi umdaa gazal rahi...

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile
Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile

                   



Parwaaz Ji ... Apki inayat janab! Waqt dene ka bahaut bahaut shukriya. Ummeed hai yunhi saath milta rahega.
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2012, 04:57:04 AM »
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bahut khoob Zarra ji...

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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2012, 04:58:02 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2012, 04:58:42 AM »
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bahut khoob dheron daad aur ek rau

Daad aur rau ka shukriya sahab
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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2012, 04:59:18 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2012, 05:10:29 AM »
Bahut  achhi  ghazal  hai  Zarra  saheb . Yoindia  Shayariadab  per   aapka
khair  maqdam  hai .  3rd   sher  bahut   hi   khubsurat   hai  ...  Qaafiyon
ke  lihaaz   se   shayad   nazar e saani   karna   chaaheiN .


Siddiqui sahab aadaab. Hauslafzaayee karne ka shukriya. Bareekee se qafiyon ko dekh kar laga ki waqai kuchh jagah tarmeem karne ki zaroorat hai. Aapkee bareek nazar se mujhe kuchch seekhne ko mila. Apka bahaut bahaut shukriya.
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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2012, 05:12:15 AM »
bahut khoob....

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