Dil Ka Gham,.

by Jaanasheen on February 05, 2009, 11:37:02 PM
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Jabse Dil Toota Hai, Tanha Rehte Hain Zamaane Mein,.
Dil Ke Dard Chupa Liye, Jab Dard Badtha Hai Dikhaane Mein,.

Char Din Ki Wafa Nibhayi Unhone Hamare Saath,.
Aur Laga Di Aaag Ghamon Ki Hamare Ashiaane Mein,.

Socha Na Tha Is Tarah Karegi Wo Humse Bewafai,.
Jiske Liye Humne Koi Kasar Na Chordi Wafa Nibhaane Mein,.

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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2009, 11:38:27 PM »
Three words: "I love It"
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2009, 11:43:13 PM »
Three words: "I love It"

Thank U,.
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2009, 12:21:07 AM »
Jabse Dil Toota Hai, Tanha Rehte Hain Zamaane Mein,.
Dil Ke Dard Chupa Liye, Jab Dard Badtha Hai Dikhaane Mein,.

Char Din Ki Wafa Nibhayi Unhone Hamare Saath,.
Aur Laga Di Aaag Ghamon Ki Hamare Ashiaane Mein,.

Socha Na Tha Is Tarah Karegi Wo Humse Bewafai,.
Jiske Liye Humne Koi Kasar Na Chordi Wafa Nibhaane Mein,.

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lovely poetry issi tarah likhte raho, sdaa khush raho. asghr
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2009, 12:26:23 AM »
lovely poetry issi tarah likhte raho, sdaa khush raho. asghr

Shukriya Bhai, May Allah Bless You Too,.
Bas Yunhi Aapka Haath Sar Par Rakhe,.
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2009, 11:23:19 AM »
Wah Azeem Bhai
Har Lafz Dard Mein Dooba Hua Hai
Bohat Khoob Bhai Keep It Up...




Shukriya Majid Bhai, Thank U Yaar,.
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2009, 11:28:14 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Bhadiya likh rahe ho Azeem,

Jiske liye hamne har baat karke dikhayi
Usne hi kasar na chodi hame aajmaane me,

Jiski khushi ke liye saansoo tak ko girwi rakha,
Usne ek pal nahi gawaya hame bhool jaane me,

Jiski hothon ki muskano ko kharida bech ke apne khushiyon ko,
Use koi taqleef hi na hui hame rulaane me ,

Jiske intzaar me har pal kata saadi ki tarah
Usne sirf ek bahana doonda hame chod jaane ke liye,

Shally.
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2009, 11:33:23 AM »
Jabse Dil Toota Hai, Tanha Rehte Hain Zamaane Mein,.
Dil Ke Dard Chupa Liye, Jab Dard Badtha Hai Dikhaane Mein,.

Char Din Ki Wafa Nibhayi Unhone Hamare Saath,.
Aur Laga Di Aaag Ghamon Ki Hamare Ashiaane Mein,.

Socha Na Tha Is Tarah Karegi Wo Humse Bewafai,.
Jiske Liye Humne Koi Kasar Na Chordi Wafa Nibhaane Mein,.

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waah....azeem ji bahut khoob...itna dard hai...allah aapko hamesha khush rakhe..
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2009, 11:35:00 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Bhadiya likh rahe ho Azeem,

Jiske liye hamne har baat karke dikhayi
Usne hi kasar na chodi hame aajmaane me,

Jiski khushi ke liye saansoo tak ko girwi rakha,
Usne ek pal nahi gawaya hame bhool jaane me,

Jiski hothon ki muskano ko kharida bech ke apne khushiyon ko,
Use koi taqleef hi na hui hame rulaane me ,

Jiske intzaar me har pal kata saadi ki tarah
Usne sirf ek bahana doonda hame chod jaane ke liye,

Shally.

shally dear..kya kahun...very well expressed...May God bless u with the happiness u deserve...
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2009, 11:35:56 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Bhadiya likh rahe ho Azeem,

Jiske liye hamne har baat karke dikhayi
Usne hi kasar na chodi hame aajmaane me,

Jiski khushi ke liye saansoo tak ko girwi rakha,
Usne ek pal nahi gawaya hame bhool jaane me,

Jiski hothon ki muskano ko kharida bech ke apne khushiyon ko,
Use koi taqleef hi na hui hame rulaane me ,

Jiske intzaar me har pal kata saadi ki tarah
Usne sirf ek bahana doonda hame chod jaane ke liye,

Shally.
Shukriya Shally And Nice One From Ur Side Too,.
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.

And Thank U Fairy JI, May Allah Bless You Too,.
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