dil ka sawal???

by bulbul on November 20, 2008, 05:38:08 AM
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bulbul
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koi gam nahin par kitni udasi hai,
koi taklif nahin par naenoon main ashq hai,
koi gair nahin par kitni ajnabi hoon,
mahfil main hoon par kitni tanhan hoon,
manzil ka nazara nazroon main hai par kitna dhundh hai,
daman main mooti hain par kitnae bikhrae hain,
sahil pas hai par qun dubti hue naeya hai,
koi to batade kaise jevan bitana hai,
murjhae dil ko kaise khilana hai,
bekhushbu sansoon ko kaise mehkana hai,
berang khushiyon ko kaise rangeen banana hai,
saat rangoon ki kali kaise khilana hai.
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baadal102
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2008, 05:42:26 AM »
bahut aacha likha hai aap ne bulbul ji
keep it up




Baadal
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2008, 06:44:06 AM »
bahut acha likha ha bulbul
                                      saloni
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Shikha12
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2008, 06:50:51 AM »
koi gam nahin par kitni udasi hai,
koi taklif nahin par naenoon main ashq hai,
koi gair nahin par kitni ajnabi hoon,
mahfil main hoon par kitni tanhan hoon,
manzil ka nazara nazroon main hai par kitna dhundh hai,
daman main mooti hain par kitnae bikhrae hain,
sahil pas hai par qun dubti hue naeya hai,
koi to batade kaise jevan bitana hai,
murjhae dil ko kaise khilana hai,
bekhushbu sansoon ko kaise mehkana hai,
berang khushiyon ko kaise rangeen banana hai,
saat rangoon ki kali kaise khilana hai.



Yeh sawaal toh hum bhi karte rehte hai..
Bulbul ji.. Bahut khoobsurat tareeke se dil ke mushkil sawaalon ko rakha hai aapne..
Be-shaq.. Bahut Bahut Khoob.. Applause Applause

Likhti Rahiyega.. Thumbs UP
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: November 20, 2008, 08:58:34 AM »
koi gam nahin par kitni udasi hai,
koi taklif nahin par naenoon main ashq hai,
koi gair nahin par kitni ajnabi hoon,
mahfil main hoon par kitni tanhan hoon,
manzil ka nazara nazroon main hai par kitna dhundh hai,
daman main mooti hain par kitnae bikhrae hain,
sahil pas hai par qun dubti hue naeya hai,
koi to batade kaise jevan bitana hai,
murjhae dil ko kaise khilana hai,
bekhushbu sansoon ko kaise mehkana hai,
berang khushiyon ko kaise rangeen banana hai,
saat rangoon ki kali kaise khilana hai.


Ek gehri soch...aur ek umdah peshkash.....Bohot Khoob Bulbul
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2008, 10:03:38 AM »
Ise ghazal kahu kavita kahu geet kahu, main kahu to kya kahu
Kis andaz-e-bayaan main du main tera jawab, main kahu to kya kahu
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bulbul
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2008, 04:36:38 AM »
appriciation k lia aap sab ka bohot bohot shukriya....kabhi kabhi ummid se zyada miljata hai aur aaj aesa hi ho gaya hai...thank u all very much...

ummed nahin thi istarah koi samjhaega....har pal ka mera sawal sab ka sawal ho jaega
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