dil kab ka mar gaya.

by guhar on January 27, 2010, 09:15:24 AM
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behta sa ik lamha ,
jaane kab guzar gaya,
abhi tha mere paas,
jaane kahan bicchad gaya.

khwaasiho ki is dod me,
kadmo me duniyaa to nahi caahi thi,
hai sawaal ab bhi be jawaab -
ki mera saaya kidhar gaya??

kinhi koocho mein hai,
meri umr tahal rahi,
mere naam ki kahaani
wahan bhi hai goonjti,
jaane kya pata kaun,
ye le kar khabar gaya.

pathar si hoon bejaan ab,
khaamosh si nabz hein,
chalti hoon aaj bhi,
foolo pe kaanton ke dard liye.
ye banawati si jaan hai.
 dil kab ka mar gaya.
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2010, 09:34:39 AM »
Very nice poem Guhar Ji.
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2010, 09:39:23 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Guhar Ji..

Bahut Gehre Jazbaato Ke saath Likhi Gayi Kavita Hai..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2010, 05:35:58 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 27, 2010, 09:39:23 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Guhar Ji..

Bahut Gehre Jazbaato Ke saath Likhi Gayi Kavita Hai..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriyaa...khwaaish ji,
 

likhna kya hai,
fakat jasbaaton ko
ehsaaso ko,
alfaazo me dhaalna.

jo kab ka dil bhulne,
ka naatak kar raha hai,
use kal ki gard aur andhere,
se kaagaz pe nikaalna...
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2010, 05:40:09 PM »
Quote from: riyaz106 on January 27, 2010, 09:34:39 AM
Very nice poem Guhar Ji.

dhnyaawaad riyaaz ji.

jo soyi yaado ko jhakjhor ke,
utha de use raat kehte hein,

jo bejaan haatho ko,
bhi likhna sikha de,
use ik dua bhari daad kehte hein.

shukriyaa bahot bahot.....
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2010, 03:23:58 PM »
Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Guhar Ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 28, 2010, 04:35:06 PM »
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 28, 2010, 03:23:58 PM
Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Guhar Ji
shukriyaa rishi ji...is baar laga ki aap ne dil se kuch bola....
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«Reply #7 on: January 28, 2010, 06:21:55 PM »
Quote from: guhar on January 27, 2010, 09:15:24 AM
behta sa ik lamha ,
jaane kab guzar gaya,
abhi tha mere paas,
jaane kahan bicchad gaya.

khwaasiho ki is dod me,
kadmo me duniyaa to nahi caahi thi,
hai sawaal ab bhi be jawaab -
ki mera saaya kidhar gaya??

kinhi koocho mein hai,
meri umr tahal rahi,
mere naam ki kahaani
wahan bhi hai goonjti,
jaane kya pata kaun,
ye le kar khabar gaya.

pathar si hoon bejaan ab,
khaamosh si nabz hein,
chalti hoon aaj bhi,
foolo pe kaanton ke dard liye.
ye banawati si jaan hai.
 dil kab ka mar gaya.


Bahoot Khoobsurti se dard ko labzon me Piroya hai Guhar ji  Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2010, 07:45:09 AM »
Quote from: pankshivam on January 28, 2010, 06:21:55 PM
Bahoot Khoobsurti se dard ko labzon me Piroya hai Guhar ji  Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot Khoob  Applause Applause Applause

shukriyaa pank ji..
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2010, 09:21:16 AM »
Wah wah Guhar bade khoobsurat lafzo mai dil ki baat bayaan ki hai
daad kabool ho... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
  
Kuchh lines likhne kaa mera bhi mann ho gaya hai....shayad pasand aaye tujhe..


Samay ka paheya kabhi ruka nahi
Umra badhti rahi ya ghat-ti rahi
Alag nazaria tha,hum nahi samjhe
Hum kabhi ruke kabhi chalte rahe

Rooh ghayal hoti rahi haadso mai
Tan bechaara,sab seh chalta raha
Log puchhte rahe,kya ho gaya mujhe
Wo chul-bulapan kahaan kho gaya mera

Wo kaun se lamhe they jinka aaj bhi
Intzaar karta hai sehma-sehma dil mera
Ander he ander kuchh marta jaa raha hai
Muskuraana padta hai par dil rota jaa raha hai



Quote from: guhar on January 27, 2010, 09:15:24 AM
behta sa ik lamha ,
jaane kab guzar gaya,
abhi tha mere paas,
jaane kahan bicchad gaya.

khwaasiho ki is dod me,
kadmo me duniyaa to nahi caahi thi,
hai sawaal ab bhi be jawaab -
ki mera saaya kidhar gaya??

kinhi koocho mein hai,
meri umr tahal rahi,
mere naam ki kahaani
wahan bhi hai goonjti,
jaane kya pata kaun,
ye le kar khabar gaya.

pathar si hoon bejaan ab,
khaamosh si nabz hein,
chalti hoon aaj bhi,
foolo pe kaanton ke dard liye.
ye banawati si jaan hai.
 dil kab ka mar gaya.
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2010, 09:50:44 AM »
bahoot khoobsurat likha guhar ji....
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2010, 11:43:58 AM »
Guhar jee:

namaste!

saadagee se sajii hu'ii aapki yeh kavitaa bahot hi Khoob rahiiN.. liKhate raheN aage bhee!

Khush raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #12 on: January 29, 2010, 07:43:39 PM »
ACHHAA HAI Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: February 28, 2010, 07:32:50 PM »
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 28, 2010, 03:23:58 PM
Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Guhar Ji
shukriya rishi.
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«Reply #14 on: February 28, 2010, 07:33:39 PM »
Quote from: Sheba on January 29, 2010, 07:43:39 PM
ACHHAA HAI Applause Applause Applause Applause
accha hai...sun kar nana patekar yaad aa gaya..  Winking
shukriya sheba...
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