dil kab ka mar gaya. -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

guhar

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«Reply #15 on: February 28, 2010, 07:34:53 PM »

Quote from: Dhaval on January 29, 2010, 11:43:58 AM

Guhar jee:

namaste!

saadagee se sajii hu'ii aapki yeh kavitaa bahot hi Khoob rahiiN.. liKhate raheN aage bhee!

Khush raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

aapke in komal lawz ka aihtraam karti hoon,
shukriya dhaval , bahot shukriyaa..


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guhar

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Re: dil kab ka mar gaya.

«Reply #16 on: February 28, 2010, 07:37:11 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on January 29, 2010, 09:50:44 AM

bahoot khoobsurat likha guhar ji....

dhnaayawaad Usual Smile


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guhar

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Re: dil kab ka mar gaya.

«Reply #17 on: February 28, 2010, 07:40:08 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 29, 2010, 09:21:16 AM

Wah wah Guhar bade khoobsurat lafzo mai dil ki baat bayaan ki hai
daad kabool ho... Applause

Kuchh lines likhne kaa mera bhi mann ho gaya hai....shayad pasand aaye tujhe..

Samay ka paheya kabhi ruka nahi
Umra badhti rahi ya ghat-ti rahi
Alag nazaria tha,hum nahi samjhe
Hum kabhi ruke kabhi chalte rahe

Rooh ghayal hoti rahi haadso mai
Tan bechaara,sab seh chalta raha
Log puchhte rahe,kya ho gaya mujhe
Wo chul-bulapan kahaan kho gaya mera

Wo kaun se lamhe they jinka aaj bhi
Intzaar karta hai sehma-sehma dil mera
Ander he ander kuchh marta jaa raha hai
Muskuraana padta hai par dil rota jaa raha hai

beshak pasand aayi Usual Smile

shukriya koyal apni surili panktiyaa baantne ke liye.
bas hamaari dosti ka rang yu hi gehraata jaaye.


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