Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.:Shayri-E-Dard

Sudhir Ashq

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Ishq me nafraton ke shole hain.
Doston, Aap kitne bhole hain.

Raj jo dil ke dil me rakhne the,
Kya kahun, aapne wo khole hain.

Hain ahinsa ke wo pujari,magar
Rakhte haathon me hathgole hain.

Bante hain jo wafa ke pagember,
Sone-chaandi se dil ko tole hain.

Bah rahe hain jo Ashq aankhon se,
Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

-Sudhir Ashq


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Re: Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2013, 04:47:13 AM »

waah waah waah. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne. dheron daad


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Re: Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2013, 06:01:10 AM »

aap chhotee behar badaa kamaal kar rahe hain keep it up


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Aarish

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Re: Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2013, 06:31:03 AM »

wah kya baat hai achi ghazal hai sudhir jee lekin muafi chahuNga akhri shair ka akhri misra samajh nahi aaya

dil ke rishte hue fafole haiN ka kya matlab hai, thoda roshni daleN... icon_scratch


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2013, 08:50:07 AM »

Sudhir Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab, kia kahne aaj bade naye naye aNdaaz ki kalaam padhne
mili hai... aapki yeH kalaam bhi gazab ki rahi janab...

Bade khoob khayaal bayaaN kiye hai.. Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez...

Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 16, 2013, 04:34:41 AM

Ishq me nafraton ke shole hain.
Doston, Aap kitne bhole hain.

RaZ jo dil ke dil me rakhne the,
Kya kahun, aapne wo khole hain.

Hain ahinsa ke wo pujari,magar
Rakhte haathon me hathgole hain.

Bante hain jo wafa ke pagember,
Sone-chaandi se dil ko tole hain.

Bah rahe hain jo Ashq aankhon se,
Dil ke riste hue fafole hain.

-Sudhir Ashq