Dil ki baat ......

by Just_Hate_Love on December 14, 2004, 08:23:03 AM
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Just_Hate_Love
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Baat dil ki nigaho se kehte rahe,
Hum tere gum khamosi se sehte rahe,
Aansuon ka samundar tha takdir mein,
Dubte, tairte aur bahte rahe,
Apne dil mein to tune basaya nahi,
Tere kadmo mein deewane rehte rahe,
Hum the, tanhai thi aur tha aaina,
Khud se hi hum dastaan apni kehte rahe,
Kya hua tha hame, jaane kya baat thi ?
Ask aankhon se jaane kyun bahete rahe.
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rohit30002
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«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2005, 08:59:26 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Baat dil ki nigaho se kehte rahe,
Hum tere gum khamosi se sehte rahe,
Aansuon ka samundar tha takdir mein,
Dubte, tairte aur bahte rahe,
Apne dil mein to tune basaya nahi,
Tere kadmo mein deewane rehte rahe,
Hum the, tanhai thi aur tha aaina,
Khud se hi hum dastaan apni kehte rahe,
Kya hua tha hame, jaane kya baat thi ?
Ask aankhon se jaane kyun bahete rahe.



Nice again JHL
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2005, 08:30:18 AM »
Thanks a lot Rohit for giving first reply ...
What if it is after 8 months ...
Thank you so much ...


Kadam kadam pe baharon ne saath chhoda,
Jaroorat padne pe yaaron ne saath chhoda,
Wadaa kiya sitaron ne saath dene ka,
Subha hone pe sitaron ne bhi saath chhoda ...(nm)
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2005, 06:09:26 PM »
Har taraf khaamoshi ka saaya hai,
Jise dekho wohi paraaya hai,
Gir pada hoon mohabbat ki bhuk se,
Aur log kehte hai dekho pikar aaya hai ...
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2005, 06:23:12 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Baat dil ki nigaho se kehte rahe,
Hum tere gum khamosi se sehte rahe,
Aansuon ka samundar tha takdir mein,
Dubte, tairte aur bahte rahe,
Apne dil mein to tune basaya nahi,
Tere kadmo mein deewane rehte rahe,
Hum the, tanhai thi aur tha aaina,
Khud se hi hum dastaan apni kehte rahe,
Kya hua tha hame, jaane kya baat thi ?
Ask aankhon se jaane kyun bahete rahe.


masterpiece JHl,bohat acche.
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2005, 06:27:49 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Baat dil ki nigaho se kehte rahe,
Hum tere gum khamosi se sehte rahe,
Aansuon ka samundar tha takdir mein,
Dubte, tairte aur bahte rahe,
Apne dil mein to tune basaya nahi,
Tere kadmo mein deewane rehte rahe,
Hum the, tanhai thi aur tha aaina,
Khud se hi hum dastaan apni kehte rahe,
Kya hua tha hame, jaane kya baat thi ?
Ask aankhon se jaane kyun bahete rahe.

Wah! Bohat khoob JHL.....
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2005, 06:25:11 PM »
Thanks a lot Niddhi and Aryan for appreciation of this post ...


Fateh ki raah mein jab bhi kadam badhaaye hai,
Har ek kadam pe in pairo ne zakhm khaaye hai,
Jab bhi aayi nazar ke saamne apni manzil,
Waqt ne jaane kyu yu faasle banaaye hai ...
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2005, 06:49:43 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Thanks a lot Rohit for giving first reply ...
What if it is after 8 months ...
Thank you so much ...


Kadam kadam pe baharon ne saath chhoda,
Jaroorat padne pe yaaron ne saath chhoda,
Wadaa kiya sitaron ne saath dene ka,
Subha hone pe sitaron ne bhi saath chhoda ...(nm)


this one just GR8 JHL........bahut sachai hai iss main.........baki sab na bhi achaa likha!!!!!!!!
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dolly
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2005, 10:18:05 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Baat dil ki nigaho se kehte rahe,
Hum tere gum khamosi se sehte rahe,
Aansuon ka samundar tha takdir mein,
Dubte, tairte aur bahte rahe,
Apne dil mein to tune basaya nahi,
Tere kadmo mein deewane rehte rahe,
Hum the, tanhai thi aur tha aaina,
Khud se hi hum dastaan apni kehte rahe,
Kya hua tha hame, jaane kya baat thi ?
Ask aankhon se jaane kyun bahete rahe.


bahut hi khoob JHL........really really nice.................
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2005, 05:50:56 PM »
Thanks a lot Isha and Dolly for replying for this post ...


Na jaane meri zindagi se wo chale gaye kab,
Kyu hai humse khafa ya to wo jaane ya rab,
Agar nafrat hi thi tere dil mein hamare liye,
To kya tha aankhon ko jhukaane ka matlab,
Tumhe vidaa karne ko hum na honge lekin,
Aansu zaroor bahenge teri doli uthegi jab,
Tumhaare aangan mein ronak hogi chaaro aur,
Kyunki chamkenge us chaand sitaare sab,
Na hame aap mile na mili hame khushiyaan,
Marte dum tak ek hansi ko tarse hamare lab ...
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