Dil ki baatein...:Shayri-E-Dard

-Kashish-

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Dil ki yeh baatein chahe sabse chupaye'in hum
Gunaah se apne kaise mukar jaaye'in hum...

Har chehre par hai naqaab par naqaab
nayi shaklon se kaise dil ko samjhaaye'in hum...

Kya manzar hai hi mera saaya hi mera raqeeb hai
apni parchaayi se kaise juda ho paaye'in hum...

Bas khaaali dil meintujhe paaya hai "kashish"
ab tanha rehte aur kab tak muskuraaye'in hum...


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manzil-e-ishq

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2010, 11:01:26 AM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne kashish ji.. Applause

mujhe teesra sher bahut baut pasand aaya..
likhtee rahiye..


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2010, 11:08:33 AM »

Kashish Shahab/ Sahiba Aadaab...

Aapke tarruf se waqif nahi, gustaqi na ho jayeN is liye
Sahab aur sahiba kah raheN hai... Marrat chaheNge..
Janab behad achchi ashaaroN se nawaaza hai...
Daad kabool kijiye......

Quote from: -Kashish- on October 01, 2010, 10:54:34 AM

Dil ki yeh baatein chahe sabse chupaye'in hum
Gunaah se apne kaise mukar jaaye'in hum...

Behad gehra sher hai.... Daad janab

Har chehre par hai naqaab par naqaab
nayi shaklon se kaise dil ko samjhaaye'in hum...

Kia baat hai behad sahiN farmaya aapne...
Kafi dilchasp baat kah dii.... Daad

Kya manzar hai hi mera saaya hi mera raqeeb hai
apni parchaayi se kaise juda ho paaye'in hum...

Sher ka khayaal behad khoob hai daad.. par Raqeeb lafz se sher complicate ho gaya hai wazahat farmaiyeNga...

Bas khaaali dil meintujhe paaya hai "kashish"
ab tanha rehte aur kab tak muskuraaye'in hum...

Masha Allah Kia baat hai behad khoob sher kaha hai..
Daad janab.......

Likhate rahiye.......
Khush o aabaad rahiye......

Aate rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez.....


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diya786

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2010, 11:11:39 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on October 01, 2010, 11:00:24 AM

Welcome come Back Gudiya Rani
Bahut Khushi Hui Aapko Yahan Dekh

Auron Ko To Pata Nahi Par Shayad
Mein Aapke Dard Se Anjaan Nahi Hun Behna
So Mera Dil Gawaara Nahi Karta Ki Ispe Wah Wah Karun
Phir Bhi Itna Kahunga Ki Dil Ke Ehsaasaat Ko Aapne
Lafzon Ki Shaql Mein Badi Khoobsurati Se OPesh Kiya Hai.

ALLAH Pak Aapko Humesha Khush Rakhe Aameen...

Aapka Bhai...

~Shihab~

Shukriya Majid Bhai
bas dua'in dete rahiye...
aur kuch nahin.........


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2010, 11:12:14 AM »

wah kashish jii wahhh ..

kehen ko to dil bejubaan seene me dhadakta he yaron,
shayar wo he "Abhi" jo mehfil me dil ko jubaan deta he~


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diya786

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2010, 11:16:29 AM »

Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on October 01, 2010, 11:01:26 AM

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne kashish ji.. Applause

mujhe teesra sher bahut baut pasand aaya..
likhtee rahiye..

Shukriya janaab


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baadal102

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2010, 11:20:12 AM »

bahut khoob kashish ji Applause


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diya786

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2010, 11:21:40 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 01, 2010, 11:08:33 AM

Bohat bohat shukriya Parwaaz sahab........
aapki har sher par daad dene ka nazariya humein pasad aaya....
waise aap kashish Sahiba likh sakte hain


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diya786

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2010, 11:23:12 AM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 01, 2010, 11:12:14 AM

wah kashish jii wahhh ..

kehen ko to dil bejubaan seene me dhadakta he yaron,
shayar wo he "Abhi" jo mehfil me dil ko jubaan deta he~

shukriya Abhi ji
aapne bhi bohat accha likha hai
Applause


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diya786

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2010, 11:26:13 AM »

Quote from: baadal102 on October 01, 2010, 11:20:12 AM

bahut khoob kashish ji Applause

Shukriya Baadal ji


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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2010, 11:34:17 AM »

Quote from: -Kashish- on October 01, 2010, 10:54:34 AM

Bahut bahut Khoob kashish!!!Dil ke Jazbaaton ko lafzon mein utaara hai aapne.

Aapko dekh kar bahut khushi hui hai,main yeh baat pehle bhi keh chuka hoon

humesha khush rahe..


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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2010, 12:40:31 AM »

bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kashish ji...!!!


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Yaash

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2010, 02:53:35 AM »

Quote from: -Kashish- on October 01, 2010, 10:54:34 AM


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_Vicky_

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Re: Dil ki baatein...

«Reply #13 on: October 02, 2010, 05:59:26 AM »

Bahut Dard Bhari Peshkash Hai Kashish.. Dard Ho Ya Mohabbat.. Inhe Lafzon me Utaarna aap Bakhoobi Jaanti hain.. Daad Kubool Karen..

**~** Mann **~**


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