Dil ki dhadkan ruk gaii.....soudagar

by soudagar on September 04, 2012, 02:08:42 PM
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Mujhe umar bhar chahne ki kasam tut gai
pyar ko dil se nibhane ki rasam tut gai

khta bas itni jaan se bhi jyada chaha use
na jaane kaunsi baat par wo mujhse ruth gai

uski har khawahish ko apni kismat bna sanwara maine
phir kaise unke hathon se pyar ki dor chhut gai

bade armano se snwaar rahe the apni dunia uske sang
zamane ki buri najar jo padi meri dunia hi lut gai

kuch to kehte kuch to gila shikwa krte wo mujhse
unki yun khamoshi dekh aansuon ki jhadi chhut gaii

aasani se keh diya usne bhula do hamare rishte ko
unke yeh lafz sun meri to dil ki dhadkan hi ruk gai
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2012, 02:39:20 PM »
bahut hee khoobsoorat
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2012, 02:49:27 PM »
boht khub janab kamal ka likha
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2012, 05:41:55 PM »
bahut badhiya soudagar ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2012, 05:55:39 PM »
Saudagar Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab achchi koshish hai sabhi ashaar
achche kahe haiN... Usual Smile

Kuch ashaar hume behad khoob lage... Usual Smile
Humari dheroN daad kabul kijiye...

koshish jari rakhiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2012, 12:12:55 AM »
Mujhe umar bhar chahne ki kasam tut gai
pyar ko dil se nibhane ki rasam tut gai

khta bas itni jaan se bhi jyada chaha use
na jaane kaunsi baat par wo mujhse ruth gai

uski har khawahish ko apni kismat bna sanwara maine
phir kaise unke hathon se pyar ki dor chhut gai

bade armano se snwaar rahe the apni dunia uske sang
zamane ki buri najar jo padi meri dunia hi lut gai

kuch to kehte kuch to gila shikwa krte wo mujhse
unki yun khamoshi dekh aansuon ki jhadi chhut gaii

aasani se keh diya usne bhula do hamare rishte ko
unke yeh lafz sun meri to dil ki dhadkan hi ruk gai

bahut dard hai. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne beta.
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2012, 02:42:33 AM »
lajavab saudagar ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2012, 03:28:12 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob soudagar ji acchi peskash hai dheron daad qabool kijiye ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2012, 04:13:57 AM »
Mujhe umar bhar chahne ki kasam tut gai
pyar ko dil se nibhane ki rasam tut gai

khta bas itni jaan se bhi jyada chaha use
na jaane kaunsi baat par wo mujhse ruth gai

uski har khawahish ko apni kismat bna sanwara maine
phir kaise unke hathon se pyar ki dor chhut gai

bade armano se snwaar rahe the apni dunia uske sang
zamane ki buri najar jo padi meri dunia hi lut gai

kuch to kehte kuch to gila shikwa krte wo mujhse
unki yun khamoshi dekh aansuon ki jhadi chhut gaii

aasani se keh diya usne bhula do hamare rishte ko
unke yeh lafz sun meri to dil ki dhadkan hi ruk gai


nice gahzal soudagar ji ........... keep writing
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2012, 05:54:44 AM »
bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2012, 08:57:47 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Soudagar ji....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2012, 10:13:36 AM »
bohat khoob andaz e byan ..bohat c daad...
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«Reply #12 on: September 05, 2012, 12:30:51 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2012, 12:31:20 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #14 on: September 06, 2012, 05:04:09 PM »
shukriya sahil ji
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