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Mujhe umar bhar chahne ki kasam tut gai
pyar ko dil se nibhane ki rasam tut gai
khta bas itni jaan se bhi jyada chaha use
na jaane kaunsi baat par wo mujhse ruth gai
uski har khawahish ko apni kismat bna sanwara maine
phir kaise unke hathon se pyar ki dor chhut gai
bade armano se snwaar rahe the apni dunia uske sang
zamane ki buri najar jo padi meri dunia hi lut gai
kuch to kehte kuch to gila shikwa krte wo mujhse
unki yun khamoshi dekh aansuon ki jhadi chhut gaii
aasani se keh diya usne bhula do hamare rishte ko
unke yeh lafz sun meri to dil ki dhadkan hi ruk gai
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2012, 02:39:20 PM » |
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bahut hee khoobsoorat
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2012, 02:49:27 PM » |
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boht khub janab kamal ka likha
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2012, 05:41:55 PM » |
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bahut badhiya soudagar ji..  |
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2012, 12:12:55 AM » |
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Mujhe umar bhar chahne ki kasam tut gai
pyar ko dil se nibhane ki rasam tut gai
khta bas itni jaan se bhi jyada chaha use
na jaane kaunsi baat par wo mujhse ruth gai
uski har khawahish ko apni kismat bna sanwara maine
phir kaise unke hathon se pyar ki dor chhut gai
bade armano se snwaar rahe the apni dunia uske sang
zamane ki buri najar jo padi meri dunia hi lut gai
kuch to kehte kuch to gila shikwa krte wo mujhse
unki yun khamoshi dekh aansuon ki jhadi chhut gaii
aasani se keh diya usne bhula do hamare rishte ko
unke yeh lafz sun meri to dil ki dhadkan hi ruk gai
bahut dard hai. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne beta. |
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2012, 02:42:33 AM » |
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lajavab saudagar ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2012, 04:13:57 AM » |
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Mujhe umar bhar chahne ki kasam tut gai
pyar ko dil se nibhane ki rasam tut gai
khta bas itni jaan se bhi jyada chaha use
na jaane kaunsi baat par wo mujhse ruth gai
uski har khawahish ko apni kismat bna sanwara maine
phir kaise unke hathon se pyar ki dor chhut gai
bade armano se snwaar rahe the apni dunia uske sang
zamane ki buri najar jo padi meri dunia hi lut gai
kuch to kehte kuch to gila shikwa krte wo mujhse
unki yun khamoshi dekh aansuon ki jhadi chhut gaii
aasani se keh diya usne bhula do hamare rishte ko
unke yeh lafz sun meri to dil ki dhadkan hi ruk gai
nice gahzal soudagar ji ........... keep writing |
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2012, 10:13:36 AM » |
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bohat khoob andaz e byan ..bohat c daad...
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soudagar
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«Reply #12 on: September 05, 2012, 12:30:51 PM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2012, 12:31:20 PM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #14 on: September 06, 2012, 05:04:09 PM » |
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shukriya sahil ji
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