Dil Ko Patthar Bana Liya Maine

by majid on March 25, 2008, 07:53:05 AM
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Saari Tamannao Ko Mita Diya Hai Maine.
Haan Ab Dil Ko Patthar Bana Liya Hai Maine.

Ye Sochkar Ki Ab Koi Khushi Nahi Bakht Main Mere
Bus Isi Liye Khud Ko Gum Main Doobo Diya Hai Maine.

Kamaal Ye Hai Jo Kabhi Dushman Pe Chalana Tha Mujhe
Wahi Teer Aaj Apne Kalejey Pe Kha Liya Hai Maine.

Aakhir Main Tanhaai Aur Akelapan Hi Kaam Aaya Mere
Jab Ki Is Hayyat Main Har Ek Rishety Ko Aazma Liya Maine
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baadal102
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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2008, 08:59:34 AM »
bahoot khib majid ji  Applause




Baadal
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2008, 09:47:44 AM »
very nice bro.........acchi feelings bayan ki

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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2008, 10:02:52 AM »
khwabo ko hakikat ki dar pe waakif dard se kara dunga
 gar phir bhi naa maana ye dil to is nadaa.n ko jala dunga

 lunga na tera naam kabhi jeete ji khudaa ki kasam
 tu keh de gar ek baar jo ,to mai khudko bhi mita dunga

.................................@fahi@..........................................
     
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2008, 04:34:40 PM »
bahoot khoob majid and fahi!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 27, 2008, 08:54:36 AM »
bohut achha likha hai majid ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2008, 03:48:45 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2008, 03:59:25 AM »
Quote from: majid on March 25, 2008, 07:53:05 AM
Saari Tamannao Ko Mita Diya Hai Maine.
Haan Ab Dil Ko Patthar Bana Liya Hai Maine.

Ye Sochkar Ki Ab Koi Khushi Nahi Bakht Main Mere
Bus Isi Liye Khud Ko Gum Main Doobo Diya Hai Maine.

Kamaal Ye Hai Jo Kabhi Dushman Pe Chalana Tha Mujhe
Wahi Teer Aaj Apne Kalejey Pe Kha Liya Hai Maine.

Aakhir Main Tanhaai Aur Akelapan Hi Kaam Aaya Mere
Jab Ki Is Hayyat Main Har Ek Rishety Ko Aazma Liya Maine

Bahut khoob Majid... Aakri ka do line mujhe bahut accha laga..
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2008, 04:22:01 AM »
nicely written purani jean ji....
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«Reply #9 on: March 30, 2008, 11:55:05 AM »
Wah Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai,.
Keep It Up bhaijaan/
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
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«Reply #10 on: March 30, 2008, 11:59:41 AM »
Ek Shehar Unka Jahaan Dil Patthar ke,.
Ek Shehar Apna Jahaan Patthar Bhi Dil Rakhte Hain,.

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«Reply #11 on: March 30, 2008, 12:42:32 PM »
Quote from: majid on March 30, 2008, 10:58:38 AM
Bohat Bohat Shukaria Aap Sabka...


andRoja Ji

You are welcome Majid ji
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«Reply #12 on: March 30, 2008, 12:44:00 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 30, 2008, 11:59:41 AM
Ek Shehar Unka Jahaan Dil Patthar ke,.
Ek Shehar Apna Jahaan Patthar Bhi Dil Rakhte Hain,.

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«Reply #13 on: March 30, 2008, 12:52:42 PM »
Shukriya Roja Sis,.
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«Reply #14 on: March 30, 2008, 12:55:24 PM »
Patthar Jahaan Ne Phenke,.
Iska Gilaa Nahi,
Ghar Likhe The Kaanch Ke Naseeb Mein Mere,

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