~*~ Dil main ab bhi teri yaad basi hai ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on February 07, 2011, 03:25:53 PM
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Uske chehre ki dikhawat pe na jana yaaron,
Woh ashkon main muskurahat dabaye baitha hai..

Aj jab ki hai bewaffayi usne mujse toh khayal aya,
Najane woh aur kis kis ko rulaye baitha hai..

Woh nazrein milata nahin mujse toh laga woh sharminda hai,
Sach toh yeh hai kay woh kis aur se nazrein milaye baitha hai..

Ek pal na lagaya tune jisse bhulane main Zalim,
Teri khatir woh duniya ko bhulaye baitha hai..

Jo bina shikayat kiye kanton par chalta raha sada,
Woh ‘Khamosh’ teri raahon par bas gulab bichaye baitha hai..

Ae fiza tu choo kar usse ehsaas karwa dena,
Uska chahne wala aj tak uske ane ki umeed lagaye baitha hai..

Woh toh bhale bhool gaya mujhe mager main na bhoola saka,
Uski yaadon ko aj bhi ‘Khamosh’ dil main basaye baitha hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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nirala
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2011, 04:32:46 PM »
wah dost Rahinm--
lajawaab peshkash.
poori kitaab likhi hai aapne wo bhi achhe aur kadwe ehsaason ke saath.
bht bhot hi umda peshkas dost.
daad dil se.
" thanx"
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2011, 07:03:34 PM »
wah dost Rahinm--
lajawaab peshkash.
poori kitaab likhi hai aapne wo bhi achhe aur kadwe ehsaason ke saath.
bht bhot hi umda peshkas dost.
daad dil se.
" thanx"
Nirala dost,
teh teh dil se shukriya..
Haan kafi arse baad ek lambi nazm likh paya..
Khush rahiye..!
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Intezar
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2011, 07:06:52 PM »
kya baat hai Rahim bhai... bahut khub...

kuch din baad aaj laute hum, aur aapki ye peshkash padhi achha laga... bahut khub...

Intezar !
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dead heart
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2011, 07:18:10 PM »
kya baat hai Rahim bhai... bahut khub...

kuch din baad aaj laute hum, aur aapki ye peshkash padhi achha laga... bahut khub...

Intezar !
Teh teh dil se shukriya mere Intezar dost..
Wahi kehne wala tha kay kayi din baad nazar aye..
Khush rahiye..!
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Intezar
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«Reply #5 on: February 07, 2011, 07:20:34 PM »
bas kaheen honi anhoni me reh gaye the Rahim bhai... warna ye dar to kabhi nahin chhoot-ta hai...
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dead heart
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«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2011, 07:23:16 PM »
bas kaheen honi anhoni me reh gaye the Rahim bhai... warna ye dar to kabhi nahin chhoot-ta hai...
haan Yo ki mehfil toh humse bhi chorri nahin jati..
Khair, shukar ap wapis agaye..ab kuch parrayiega zaroor..!
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Intezar
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2011, 07:26:35 PM »
koshish rahegi lekin thoda wakt lagega Rahim bhai... filhaal to aaplogo ko padhna hai abhi bahut...
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nirala
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2011, 07:27:41 PM »
Rahim ji aapne lambi nazm nahi likhi--
aapne ek complete nazm likha hai.
issliye to mene kitaab kaha.
acchi kalaam chahe jitna bhi lamba ho hamesha chota sa lagta hai.
aur aapne bhi bahut chota sa likha hai Usual Smile
"
thanx
"
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dead heart
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2011, 07:29:51 PM »
Rahim ji aapne lambi nazm nahi likhi--
aapne ek complete nazm likha hai.
issliye to mene kitaab kaha.
acchi kalaam chahe jitna bhi lamba ho hamesha chota sa lagta hai.
aur aapne bhi bahut chota sa likha hai Usual Smile
"
thanx
"
Dil khush kar diya apne Nirala dost..
Lavz..kitne kamal kay hote hai..Ager twist kar do,
toh mayne hi badal jaya karte hai.."Complete Nazm"..
Dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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dead heart
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2011, 07:30:35 PM »
koshish rahegi lekin thoda wakt lagega Rahim bhai... filhaal to aaplogo ko padhna hai abhi bahut...
Zaroor..
Intezar rahega 'Intezar' ka..
Khush rahiye..!
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nirala
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«Reply #11 on: February 07, 2011, 08:00:20 PM »
bas janaab dil ko khus hi rakhiye .
aakhir dost kaha h aapne to khus to rahna hi padega Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: February 08, 2011, 10:51:32 AM »
Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut khoob rahim...
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«Reply #13 on: February 08, 2011, 10:57:32 AM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Mere Bhai Rahim!!

Lajawaab!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley/color]
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«Reply #14 on: February 08, 2011, 11:16:11 AM »
Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut khoob rahim...
Teh teh dil se shukriya Geet di..
Khush rahiye..!
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