dil main yadoon...

by isha_verma7 on May 13, 2005, 05:55:57 AM
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hey all, this is my 1st post and i am not at all good like u guyz but still hope u'll like it!!!


Iss dil main yadoon ke mela hai fir bhi hum akele hai
Us khuda ne yehi koi ek khel mere saath khela hai,
Sabki yadoon main kisi ki sanson ko jod deta hai woh
Lekin hamare saath akele dil ka silsila hai.

Any suggestions are always welcome!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2005, 08:11:18 AM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
hey all, this is my 1st post and i am not at all good like you guyz but still hope you'll like it!!!


Iss dil main yadoon ke mela hai fir bhi hum akele hai
Us khuda ne yehi koi ek khel mere saath khela hai,
Sabki yadoon main kisi ki sanson ko jod deta hai woh
Lekin hamare saath akele dil ka silsila hai.

Any suggestions are always welcome!!


Isha ..  :thumb:

woh ek lafz ki khushboo na rakh sake mehfooz
hum unke haath sari kitaab kya dete
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sandhaya
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2005, 12:10:08 PM »
ishq bahut khoob and ..kya baat hai Humtum ji ......hunnnnn

khusbu teri saanon ki sambali hai dil main usne
ki teri khusbu se hi tuh chalti hai saansein uski
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jochahohojayein
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2005, 12:26:40 PM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
hey all, this is my 1st post and i am not at all good like you guyz but still hope you'll like it!!!


Iss dil main yadoon ke mela hai fir bhi hum akele hai
Us khuda ne yehi koi ek khel mere saath khela hai,
Sabki yadoon main kisi ki sanson ko jod deta hai woh
Lekin hamare saath akele dil ka silsila hai.

Any suggestions are always welcome!!




AKELA TO YAHA HAR KOI HAI
SIRF NAZRO KA DHOKHA HAI
WO SAB KA SATHI BANATA HAI
SIRF PEHCHAN NE KI DERI HAI
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2005, 05:47:46 PM »
wah wah wah......kay baat hai......u all wrote nice....
simply WOW
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thycreator
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2005, 05:54:49 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
hey all, this is my 1st post and i am not at all good like you guyz but still hope you'll like it!!!


Iss dil main yadoon ke mela hai fir bhi hum akele hai
Us khuda ne yehi koi ek khel mere saath khela hai,
Sabki yadoon main kisi ki sanson ko jod deta hai woh
Lekin hamare saath akele dil ka silsila hai.

Any suggestions are always welcome!!


Isha ..  :thumb:

woh ek lafz ki khushboo na rakh sake mehfooz
hum unke haath sari kitaab kya dete


Nice Isha ji...........aur humtum.........wonderful as always.....
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2005, 09:15:41 PM »
log khtey hai mujhey addat hai muskuraney ki
onhey ye nahi pata ye bhi ak ada hai ghum chopaney ki
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2005, 04:48:07 AM »
Wow faree good .......wah wah......kya baat hai.......cool
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HumTum
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2005, 05:47:09 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
ishq bahut khoob and ..kya baat hai Humtum ji ......hunnnnn

khusbu teri saanon ki sambali hai dil main usne
ki teri khusbu se hi tuh chalti hai saansein uski


Sandhaya  :thumb:

woh jo kehtey they ki tere dum se hai zindgi
Aaj unsey do pal kya mangey,nazrein cura ke chal diye sad5
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HumTum
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2005, 05:47:55 AM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
hey all, this is my 1st post and i am not at all good like you guyz but still hope you'll like it!!!


Iss dil main yadoon ke mela hai fir bhi hum akele hai
Us khuda ne yehi koi ek khel mere saath khela hai,
Sabki yadoon main kisi ki sanson ko jod deta hai woh
Lekin hamare saath akele dil ka silsila hai.

Any suggestions are always welcome!!


Isha ..  :thumb:

woh ek lafz ki khushboo na rakh sake mehfooz
hum unke haath sari kitaab kya dete


Nice Isha ji...........aur humtum.........wonderful as always.....


Thanks Creator !!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2005, 10:07:52 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
ishq bahut khoob and ..kya baat hai Humtum ji ......hunnnnn

khusbu teri saanon ki sambali hai dil main usne
ki teri khusbu se hi tuh chalti hai saansein uski


Sandhaya  :thumb:

woh jo kehtey they ki tere dum se hai zindgi
Aaj unsey do pal kya mangey,nazrein cura ke chal diye sad5


sukhriya Humtum ji >............Aur bahut hi khoob

unki aankhon main tum hi ho Humtum
kahin ye na malum karlo tum aankhen dekh kar unki
issiliye tujhse churake nazarein vo dur chal diye tujhse
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thycreator
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2005, 12:56:45 PM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
sukhriya Humtum ji >............Aur bahut hi khoob

unki aankhon main tum hi ho Humtum
kahin ye na malum karlo tum aankhen dekh kar unki
issiliye tujhse churake nazarein vo dur chal diye tujhse


Wah Sandhaya ji..........
Muhabbat ko bhala kaise kabhi koi chupayega,
Nazar churao toh saanso se ye payam aayega,
Muhabbat ko chupana toh usko aur bhi badhana hai,
Jitna dabao isko, ye utna hi badakta jayega....
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2005, 09:39:21 PM »
MUDDATON SE ARZOO THI,ZINDAGI MEIN KOI AAYE
SUNI SUNI ZINDAGI MEIN,KOI SHAMA DIL MEIN LAYE
WOH JO AAYE TO ROSHAN ZAMANA HO GAYA
EK HASEEN SHAM KO DIL MERE KHO GAYA.....
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thycreator
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2005, 04:02:54 AM »
Gud one naveed.....
Pyar seh hi aisi hai har dil ko dhadkati hai,
Mil jaye to jindagi hai,kho jaye toh mitati hai...
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HumTum
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«Reply #14 on: May 15, 2005, 06:03:49 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
ishq bahut khoob and ..kya baat hai Humtum ji ......hunnnnn

khusbu teri saanon ki sambali hai dil main usne
ki teri khusbu se hi tuh chalti hai saansein uski


Sandhaya  :thumb:

woh jo kehtey they ki tere dum se hai zindgi
Aaj unsey do pal kya mangey,nazrein cura ke chal diye sad5


sukhriya Humtum ji >............Aur bahut hi khoob

unki aankhon main tum hi ho Humtum
kahin ye na malum karlo tum aankhen dekh kar unki
issiliye tujhse churake nazarein vo dur chal diye tujhse


Sandhaya  :thumb:

uski muthi men buhat roz raha mera wujood
mere sahir se kaho ab mujhe azaad kare...
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