Dil me teri yaadon ka basera hai

by dhadkan on January 11, 2005, 11:06:17 AM
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«Reply #30 on: January 14, 2005, 06:57:32 PM »
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patjad ke phoolon me virangi basi hai,
samajha ha tumne khusboo jisko, woh banawat ki hasi hai!


Apne humdum ke pas hoke kyu itna tum dukhi ho,
Kya itna bhi nahi tumko meri wafa pe bharosa???[/quote]

wafa pe teri barosa jo hota,
to baithe na hota tanhaiy me yuh akhele!
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«Reply #31 on: January 14, 2005, 06:59:13 PM »
kya baat hai................brilliant meena.
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«Reply #32 on: January 14, 2005, 07:00:19 PM »
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Very nice meena........amit.

"wafa pe us bewafa ki bharosa jo hamne kiya,
 jaise zindgi ki sabse badi bhool ko anjaam diya."


wahhhhhhhh nidhiiiiii

anjam e wafa ka hota hai bewafai,
kyu nahi ndeti yeh haqiqat kisi ko dikhayi?
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«Reply #33 on: January 14, 2005, 07:04:15 PM »
wah..........meena!!!!

"Dekhne wale k nazariye badal jate hain,
 hamare dil k taar jab toot k bikhar jate hain."
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«Reply #34 on: January 14, 2005, 07:05:51 PM »
wafa pe teri barosa jo hota,
to baithe na hota tanhaiy me yuh akhele![/quote]

Ek aawaz toh lagai hoti mujhko mere humdum,
Hum toh kab se teri hi rah takte hai har pal...
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«Reply #35 on: January 14, 2005, 07:12:52 PM »
"Unhone na kadra ki hamare pyar ki,
 kaha intezar hai unhe aur ka kisi,
 chal diye dhoodne kisi aur ki ankho me,
 kismat woh dildar ki........................"
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«Reply #36 on: January 14, 2005, 07:14:15 PM »
pukarte rahe tume door tak,
par meri khamsohi ki awaz tumne suni bhi to nahin!
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«Reply #37 on: January 14, 2005, 07:26:20 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
pukarte rahe tume door tak,
par meri khamsohi ki awaz tumne suni bhi to nahin!


Tumhara haal e dil aankhon se bhi padh lete hum,
Tumne hi toh pas tak na mujhko aane diya...
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #38 on: January 14, 2005, 07:32:28 PM »
kitna weeraan ho chuka hai meri hasti ka jamal
tujh se bichra hoon to aaj aaya mujhey apna khayal...
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Namkeen
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«Reply #39 on: January 14, 2005, 07:53:32 PM »
Aansoon ki kimat kya hai, woh jaante......
toh Humari aankhon mein aasoon aate kyon?
Rishton ki ahmeiyat jaante woh.....
Toh judaai ka gum humme dete kyon?
Dil agar hota unka, aur dhadkta bhi.....
toh woh dil humara todte hi kyon?
Yaad agar aati hoti unhe humari......
Toh yeh sher hum kehte hi kyon?
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Meena
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«Reply #40 on: January 14, 2005, 08:10:52 PM »
nice everyone!!!!

 :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #41 on: January 14, 2005, 09:21:03 PM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "Meena"
pukarte rahe tume door tak,
par meri khamsohi ki awaz tumne suni bhi to nahin!


Tumhara haal e dil aankhon se bhi padh lete hum,
Tumne hi toh pas tak na mujhko aane diya...


Pahli do line, apki Thori si change kar ke likh rahi hu, Aasha hai app bura nahi manegy!!!

Tumhara haal e dil aankhon se bhi padh lete hum,
ek bar palake utha kar jo hume dekha hota!!

jahar  sara teri zindagi ka pi jaty hansty hansty
Nigah utha kar, jo ek bar "han" kaha hota!!!

Tujh bin un banjar na banati zindagi meri
kam se kam tumko jo baharo mai dekha hota!!!!
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«Reply #42 on: January 14, 2005, 09:23:14 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "Meena"
pukarte rahe tume door tak,
par meri khamsohi ki awaz tumne suni bhi to nahin!


Tumhara haal e dil aankhon se bhi padh lete hum,
Tumne hi toh pas tak na mujhko aane diya...


Pahli do line, apki Thori si change kar ke likh rahi hu, Aasha hai app bura nahi manegy!!!

Tumhara haal e dil aankhon se bhi padh lete hum,
ek bar palake utha kar jo hume dekha hota!!

jahar  sara teri zindagi ka pi jaty hansty hansty
Nigah utha kar, jo ek bar "han" kaha hota!!!

Tujh bin un banjar na banati zindagi meri
kam se kam tumko jo baharo mai dekha hota!!!!


 Usual Smile
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«Reply #43 on: January 14, 2005, 09:24:26 PM »
Quote from: "Namkeen"
Aansoon ki kimat kya hai, woh jaante......
toh Humari aankhon mein aasoon aate kyon?
Rishton ki ahmeiyat jaante woh.....
Toh judaai ka gum humme dete kyon?
Dil agar hota unka, aur dhadkta bhi.....
toh woh dil humara todte hi kyon?
Yaad agar aati hoti unhe humari......
Toh yeh sher hum kehte hi kyon?

Very Nice Namkeen!!!!

Rishato aor ansoo ka rishta nirala hai
ek ke bin, na doosre ka gujara hai!
rahty hai yah dhoop chai ki tarah
jaise jeevan ka, kahan mout ke bin gujara hai!!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #44 on: January 15, 2005, 05:33:41 AM »
Pahli do line, apki Thori si change kar ke likh rahi hu, Aasha hai app bura nahi manegy!!!

Tumhara haal e dil aankhon se bhi padh lete hum,
ek bar palake utha kar jo hume dekha hota!!

jahar  sara teri zindagi ka pi jaty hansty hansty
Nigah utha kar, jo ek bar "han" kaha hota!!!

Tujh bin un banjar na banati zindagi meri
kam se kam tumko jo baharo mai dekha hota!!!![/quote]

Nice pooja ji, Agar badlav acche ke liye ho toh mujhe bura kyu lagega, apne un lines ko aur accha kar diya...... Usual Smile

Dekha tha tujhko maine utha ke nigah o palak,
Ye kismat thi ki teri nigah thi gairon pe gadi,
Kaise izhar e dil kiya hota tujhse aye sanam,
Tere dil mein meri ehmiyat ki kami thi badi.
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