dil mera (nam)

by poonamA on January 15, 2013, 07:10:06 AM
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dil mera churaya tha tumne
par apna kabhi na banaya tumne
mangi thi humne kadmo me jagah
mari thokar tumne pather ki tarah
raat din maangi tere liye dua
par tere liye jaise kuch nahi hua
dil diya tha dil lene ke liye
par dil ke mere anginat tukde kiye
rab kare tumhe hamari umar lag jaye
aur hume maut  jaldi se aaye
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2013, 07:15:24 AM »
Quote from: poonamA on January 15, 2013, 07:10:06 AM
dil mera churaya tha usne
par apna kabhi na banaya usne
mangi thi humne kadmo me jagah
mari thokar usne pather ki tarah
raat din maangi uske liye dua
par unke liye jaise kuch nahi hua
dil diya tha dil lene ke liye
par dil ke mere anginat tukde kiye
rab kare usse hamari umar lag jaye
aye maut gujarish hai tu jaldi se aaye

acha likha hai aapne poonam jee
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2013, 07:26:57 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2013, 08:01:34 AM »
beautiful ....
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2013, 08:27:04 AM »
BOHUT KHUB POONAM JI AKSAR AISA HOTA HAI
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«Reply #5 on: January 15, 2013, 08:39:55 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 15, 2013, 03:42:50 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: January 15, 2013, 03:47:33 PM »
thx hriday
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«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2013, 03:49:41 PM »
bohat khoob ,............
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«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2013, 04:03:42 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on January 15, 2013, 07:15:24 AM
acha likha hai aapne poonam jee
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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2013, 04:06:30 PM »
saahill & nand thx
Quote from: nandbahu on January 15, 2013, 07:26:57 AM
very nice
Quote from: saahill on January 15, 2013, 08:27:04 AM
BOHUT KHUB POONAM JI AKSAR AISA HOTA HAI
Quote from: saahill on January 15, 2013, 08:27:04 AM
BOHUT KHUB POONAM JI AKSAR AISA HOTA HAI
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«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2013, 04:10:00 PM »
sainijee thx
Quote from: sksaini4 on January 15, 2013, 08:39:55 AM
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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2013, 04:11:05 PM »
shukriya aqsh
Quote from: aqsh on January 15, 2013, 08:01:34 AM
beautiful ....
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«Reply #13 on: January 15, 2013, 04:12:25 PM »
shukriya laaiba
Quote from: laaiba on January 15, 2013, 03:49:41 PM
bohat khoob ,............
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