Dil ne kaise khulashe kiye.... mann

by mann.mann on October 26, 2011, 04:24:59 AM
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Dil ne ye kaise khulashe kiye.
Kis kis tarah ke tamashe kiye.

Khud to tha nazuk patange ki taraha,
Aur sare rishte shamma se kiye.

Samjhaya tha kam aise na kar,
Apna kya apni bala se kiye.

Khabar thi use chot khaya hai "mann",
Aur waar kis kis adaa se kiye.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: October 26, 2011, 05:13:13 AM »
dhanyawad shihabji....

sath banaye rakhiyega
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2011, 06:24:20 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on October 26, 2011, 04:24:59 AM
Dil ne kaise khulashe kiye.
Kis kis tarah ke tamashe kiye.

Khud to tha nazuk patange ki taraha,
Aur sare rishte shamma se kiye.

Samjhaya tha kam aise na kar,
Apna kya apni bala se kiye.

Khabar thi use chot khaya hai "mann",
Aur waar kis kis tarah se kiye.

Mann

hmm good!!!
acha khayaal hai ji
keep it up
be happy always
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2011, 06:50:44 AM »
boht khoob
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2011, 08:23:55 AM »
dhanyawad nirala ji
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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2011, 08:28:16 AM »
dhanyawad saahil ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2011, 09:38:52 AM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!


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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2011, 07:46:56 PM »
Wah!
Bahot khoob. bahot hi achha likha hai aap ne. Chhu liya dil ko.
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«Reply #8 on: October 27, 2011, 05:03:42 AM »
bahut khoob kahaa mann ji
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2011, 03:28:22 AM »
dhanyawad parwaazji
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2011, 03:32:09 AM »
dhanyawad imdadji


sath dete rahiye
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2011, 03:42:10 AM »
dhanyawad sainiji
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2011, 05:16:00 AM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on October 26, 2011, 04:24:59 AM
Dil ne ye kaise khulashe kiye.
Kis kis tarah ke tamashe kiye.

Khud to tha nazuk patange ki taraha,
Aur sare rishte shamma se kiye.

Samjhaya tha kam aise na kar,
Apna kya apni bala se kiye.

Khabar thi use chot khaya hai "mann",
Aur waar kis kis adaa se kiye.

Mann
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«Reply #13 on: October 29, 2011, 11:42:14 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad sureshji
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