Dil Par Haath Rakh Kar Keh Do "Khwaish"

by khwaish on February 18, 2012, 03:29:35 PM
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Saath Chalne Ko To Chale The Sabhi lekin.....!!!!!
Meri Manzil Tak Kaa Saathi Sirf Mera Saaya Nikla!!!!!!




Udaas Hoon Par Tujhse Naraaz Nahi
Tere  Dil Mein Hoon Par paas Nahi

Jhoot Kahoon To Sab Kuch hai Paas Mere!!!
Sach kahoon To Tere Siwa Kuch Khaas Nahi

AankhoN Ki Namee Ne Waise To Sab Kuch Hi Keh  Diya
Thak Gaya Hoon Par Bhujti Kabhi  Pyaas Nahi

JazbaatoN Ke Dam Par Zinda Hai Yahan kayee Rishte!!
Dooriyan Badh Jaane Par Bhi Marte Kabhi Ehsaas Nahi

"Khwaish" Kyon Jhoot kehte Ho ke Sab Kuch Bhoola Diya.!!
Dil Par Haath Rakhkar keh Do,Ab Koi Dil mein Aas Nahi


              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2012, 03:51:43 PM »
bahut bahut khoob khwaish ji.
aap salaamat rahen.
kya zazbaat bayan kiye hain.
specially
1st four  lines. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Saath Chalne Ko To Chale The Sabhi lekin.....!!!!!
Meri Manzil Tak Kaa Saathi Sirf Mera Saaya Nikla!!!!!!




Udaas Hoon Par Usse Naraaz Nahi
Uske Dil Mein Hoon Par paas Nahi Applause Applause Applause

Jhoot Kahoon To Sab Kuch hai Paas Mere!!!
Sach kahoon To Tere Siwa Kuch Khaas Nahi Applause Applause Applause

AankhoN Ki Namee Ne Waise To Sab Kuch Hi Keh  Diya
Thak Gaya Hoon Par Bhujti Kabhi  Pyaas Nahi
 Applause
JazbaatoN Ke Dam Par Zinda Hai Yahan kayee Rishte!!
Dooriyan Badh Jaane Par Bhi Marte Kabhi Ehsaas Nahi

"Khwaish" Kyon Jhoot kehte Ho ke Sab Kuch Bhoola Diya.!!
Dil Par Haath Rakhkar keh Do,Ab Koi Dil mein Aas Nahi
 Applause Applause

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2012, 05:15:35 PM »
wah wah kya khoobsurati aur sagdi se lafzon ko piroya hai, shuru se akhir tak sabhi ashaar khoob kahen hain aapne khwaish ji, bohat achcha laga aapki is khoobsurat peshkash ko parhkar khoob
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2012, 05:16:00 PM »
Bahut bahut khoob Khwaish ji
Applause Applause
Saath Chalne Ko To Chale The Sabhi lekin.....!!!!!
Meri Manzil Tak Kaa Saathi Sirf Mera Saaya Nikla!!!!!! Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2012, 05:44:45 PM »
Khawaish ji bahot achhi nazm kahi aapne. Mubarakbad aur daad pesh hai.
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2012, 07:21:40 PM »
sach kehta hoon Khwaish ji
dil me ghr kar gai aapki kalaam
aapne jis khhobi se aaghaz ko anjaam tak pahuchaya--
kabil e tareef hai janaab
bht saadgi se dil ke zazbaat kah gye--

dili daad aor mubarakbad
khus rahen
muskurate rahen

aap ek jadugar hain
likhte rahie
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2012, 02:33:59 AM »
bahut khoob. nicely written.
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2012, 03:40:51 AM »
boht khoob janab daad kabol karen
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2012, 03:43:50 AM »
boht khoob janab daad kabol karen
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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2012, 06:38:43 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob kahaa khwaish ji badhaai ho
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«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2012, 07:07:46 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy bahut behytrin peskas khwaish ji notworthy
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«Reply #11 on: February 19, 2012, 09:05:23 AM »
bahut bahut khoob khwaish ji.
aap salaamat rahen.
kya zazbaat bayan kiye hain.
specially
1st four  lines. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2


Inn Duawon Ke Liye Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya Sureshji

Aapki Daad Sar Aankhon par  icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2012, 12:38:57 PM »
Saath Chalne Ko To Chale The Sabhi lekin.....!!!!!
Meri Manzil Tak Kaa Saathi Sirf Mera Saaya Nikla!!!!!!




Udaas Hoon Par Usse Naraaz Nahi
Uske Dil Mein Hoon Par paas Nahi

Jhoot Kahoon To Sab Kuch hai Paas Mere!!!
Sach kahoon To Tere Siwa Kuch Khaas Nahi

AankhoN Ki Namee Ne Waise To Sab Kuch Hi Keh  Diya
Thak Gaya Hoon Par Bhujti Kabhi  Pyaas Nahi

JazbaatoN Ke Dam Par Zinda Hai Yahan kayee Rishte!!
Dooriyan Badh Jaane Par Bhi Marte Kabhi Ehsaas Nahi

"Khwaish" Kyon Jhoot kehte Ho ke Sab Kuch Bhoola Diya.!!
Dil Par Haath Rakhkar keh Do,Ab Koi Dil mein Aas Nahi


              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


good.........!
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«Reply #13 on: February 19, 2012, 04:18:21 PM »
Saath Chalne Ko To Chale The Sabhi lekin.....!!!!!
Meri Manzil Tak Kaa Saathi Sirf Mera Saaya Nikla!!!!!!




Udaas Hoon Par Usse Naraaz Nahi
Uske Dil Mein Hoon Par paas Nahi

Jhoot Kahoon To Sab Kuch hai Paas Mere!!!
Sach kahoon To Tere Siwa Kuch Khaas Nahi

AankhoN Ki Namee Ne Waise To Sab Kuch Hi Keh  Diya
Thak Gaya Hoon Par Bhujti Kabhi  Pyaas Nahi

JazbaatoN Ke Dam Par Zinda Hai Yahan kayee Rishte!!
Dooriyan Badh Jaane Par Bhi Marte Kabhi Ehsaas Nahi

"Khwaish" Kyon Jhoot kehte Ho ke Sab Kuch Bhoola Diya.!!
Dil Par Haath Rakhkar keh Do,Ab Koi Dil mein Aas Nahi


              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Waaaaaaaaaaaah! Waaaaaaaaaaaah! Khwaish ji kya baat hai. Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #14 on: February 20, 2012, 08:02:55 PM »
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