Dil pukarta raha

by thycreator on May 26, 2008, 09:58:13 PM
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Meri aankhon ki tanhai ko tum pehchaan na paye,
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Hue masroof tum kuch yun gairon ki mehfil mein,
Meri hasraton ke diye tumko na lubha paye...
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Meri dil ki lagi ne haal kuch aisa mera kiya,
Sawan ke mahine mein bhi hum aansuon mein nahaye..
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Tumse andheri raton ka hum shikwa bhi kya kare,
Jab din ke ujalon mein tumko dhoondh na paye..
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Saahil pe baith tumko hanste dekha hai dil ne,
Ishq mein dubne ke wade tumne acche nibhaye..
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Zindagi se bhali maut mujhko lagne lagi hai,
Hans ke marenge gar jaan tere naam pe jaaye..
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2008, 01:34:26 AM »
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Meri aankhon ki tanhai ko tum pehchaan na paye,
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Hue masroof tum kuch yun gairon ki mehfil mein,
Meri hasraton ke diye tumko na lubha paye...
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Meri dil ki lagi ne haal kuch aisa mera kiya,
Sawan ke mahine mein bhi hum aansuon mein nahaye..
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Thycreator jee bahut accha laga padkar. mujhe second para bahut hi
accha laga. Kaash mai b kuch jawab poetic way main de pathi....
Good very good jee. Applause
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thycreator
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2008, 03:14:09 AM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on May 27, 2008, 01:34:26 AM
Thycreator jee bahut accha laga padkar. mujhe second para bahut hi
accha laga. Kaash mai b kuch jawab poetic way main de pathi....
Good very good jee. Applause

Thanks a lot Sonai Ji.........mujhe khushi hui ki apko mera likha pasand aaya.....warna jaise humara introduction hua tha...mujhe laga ki maine yahan ek aur dushman bana liya anjaane mein....Usual Smile

Jahan tak reply karne ki bat hai......koshish karne se kya nahi hota....

Thanks a lot once again.
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2008, 05:05:04 AM »
very nice thycreator ji
gum, tanhai aur udaasi, meri mahfil me sabhi aaye,
dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum fir bhi nahi aaye
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CoolGirl
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2008, 05:16:34 AM »
kuch adhore se lafz hum ne gungunaye
dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum fir bhi nahi aaye
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honeyrose
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2008, 05:22:53 AM »
Very nice thycreator ji

Dard main bhi unki awaaz sunae di humhe
Dil pukarta raha phir bhi na woh dekhe humhe
Kuch pal ki yaadein saath jo beetai thi humne
Dard main bhi unki awaaz sunae di humhe
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2008, 05:24:08 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on May 27, 2008, 05:05:04 AM
very nice thycreator ji
gum, tanhai aur udaasi, meri mahfil me sabhi aaye,
dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum fir bhi nahi aaye

Thanks a lot bekarar ji....aur bahut acche.....Usual Smile

Apne meri kavita mein thoda aur ijafa kar diya...tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2008, 05:35:40 AM »
Quote from: CoolGirl on May 27, 2008, 05:16:34 AM
kuch adhore se lafz hum ne gungunaye
dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum fir bhi nahi aaye

Kya baat hai.......aap log toh meri kavita ko aur bhi lamba kiye ja rahe hain.......thanks a lot coolgirl...Usual Smile

Sabhi dusaron se wafa ki ummeed liye baithe hain,
Koi bhi apne girebaanh mein jhankata kyun nahi....tongue3
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thycreator
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2008, 06:15:25 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on May 27, 2008, 05:22:53 AM
Very nice thycreator ji

Dard main bhi unki awaaz sunae di humhe
Dil pukarta raha phir bhi na woh dekhe humhe
Kuch pal ki yaadein saath jo beetai thi humne
Dard main bhi unki awaaz sunae di humhe

Thank you honeyrose ji and good one...


Kabhi ruswaiyon mein, kabhi tanhaiyon mein,
Humne khud ko paaya hai bas parchaiyon mein..

Jo kuch bhi mila mujhko bas tukadon mein hi mila,
Kismat ne likha hai mujhko feenki syahiyon mein..

Sabhi mujhse mere ashkon ka sabab poochte hain,
Kya karun main jo maatam hi lage shehnaiyon mein..

Aye zindagi ab tu hi badha le daaman apna,
Duba jaata hun main gumon ki gehraiyon mein..
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NOOR41
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2008, 09:25:33 AM »
zbrdasat kafi gehrye soch mian dob k lehka hye aap ny
noor 41
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honeyrose
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2008, 11:43:50 AM »
Quote from: thycreator on May 27, 2008, 06:15:25 AM
Thank you honeyrose ji and good one...


Kabhi ruswaiyon mein, kabhi tanhaiyon mein,
Humne khud ko paaya hai bas parchaiyon mein..

Jo kuch bhi mila mujhko bas tukadon mein hi mila,
Kismat ne likha hai mujhko feenki syahiyon mein..

Sabhi mujhse mere ashkon ka sabab poochte hain,
Kya karun main jo maatam hi lage shehnaiyon mein..

Aye zindagi ab tu hi badha le daaman apna,
Duba jaata hun main gumon ki gehraiyon mein..

..

Very nice thycreator ji..bohat khoob likha hai aapne..Usual Smile

Zamane ne zillat hi di mujhe aur kya mange iss zindagi mein
Kuch aapne ne kiye humhe ruswa iss zindagi mein
Kuch haseen pal ko gaye hai virano mein
Aab kya baki raha unki yaadein dil se lagai hoon iss zindagi mein
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thycreator
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«Reply #11 on: May 27, 2008, 05:15:10 PM »
Quote from: NOOR41 on May 27, 2008, 09:25:33 AM
zbrdasat kafi gehrye soch mian dob k lehka hye aap ny
noor 41

Thanks a lot Noor ji......thank you very much...Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: May 27, 2008, 05:18:46 PM »
Quote from: thycreator on May 27, 2008, 06:15:25 AM
Thank you honeyrose ji and good one...


Kabhi ruswaiyon mein, kabhi tanhaiyon mein,
Humne khud ko paaya hai bas parchaiyon mein..

Jo kuch bhi mila mujhko bas tukadon mein hi mila,
Kismat ne likha hai mujhko feenki syahiyon mein..

Sabhi mujhse mere ashkon ka sabab poochte hain,
Kya karun main jo maatam hi lage shehnaiyon mein..

Aye zindagi ab tu hi badha le daaman apna,
Duba jaata hun main gumon ki gehraiyon mein..


wow too good Amit!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2008, 05:20:17 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on May 27, 2008, 11:43:50 AM
..

Very nice thycreator ji..bohat khoob likha hai aapne..Usual Smile

Zamane ne zillat hi di mujhe aur kya mange iss zindagi mein
Kuch aapne ne kiye humhe ruswa iss zindagi mein
Kuch haseen pal ko gaye hai virano mein
Aab kya baki raha unki yaadein dil se lagai hoon iss zindagi mein

Thanks again honeyrose ji.....Usual Smile

Kitne armaan apne dil mein sametein hue hai hum,
Dard mein bhi ek muskaan lapetein hue hai hum,
Dekh haalat mere shayad rehem aa jaaye maut ko..
Ye soch kar shamshan mein letein hue hai hum..
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thycreator
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«Reply #14 on: May 27, 2008, 05:21:58 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 27, 2008, 05:18:46 PM
wow too good Amit!!

Thanks a lot Pooja ji....apki kalam aaj shaant kyun hai...??
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