Dil pukarta raha -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

thycreator

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«Reply #30 on: May 29, 2008, 05:53:58 PM »

Quote from: Roja on May 29, 2008, 02:09:04 AM

Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai sonia.... Bahut hi accha likhne lagi ho.
Arre dear kahan chupa rakhi thi yeh khoobiyan.... bahut khoob
God Bless

Mohtarma......aap kab likhengi..... Huh?


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #31 on: May 29, 2008, 10:02:13 PM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 27, 2008, 10:57:18 PM

Umda jawab de kar man mohit kar diya aapne, aise hi rachnaon ka aanand baant-te rahiya.... wah

Bahoot bahoot shukaria meri ikhi kavita ko pasand karne ke liye!! Apki sarahna ka bahoot bahoot shukaria!!


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #32 on: May 29, 2008, 10:04:59 PM »

Quote from: thycreator on May 28, 2008, 09:51:10 PM

Good one Pooja ji....apne meri kavita se line lekar usko naye mayane de diye....bahut khoob... Usual Smile

Kuch pal ko chal padte hai hum, tham jaate hain,
Yaad aate hai beete pal, pair ye jam jaate hain,
Kahin phir se na ho kissa wahi bewafai ka,
Sochte bhi hai gar ye bat, sehem jaate hain...

seham seham kar bhi himmat khatam nahi hoti
intzaar ki umeend kyun khatam nahi hoti
ansoo ki kuchu boondein hai ya hai yah samunder
kyun ankhon ki yah barsaat khatam nahi hoti..


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Sonia01

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #33 on: May 30, 2008, 03:05:56 AM »

Quote from: thycreator on May 29, 2008, 05:53:58 PM

Mohtarma......aap kab likhengi..... Huh?

Mai likhti na... likhu na? sad7


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #34 on: May 30, 2008, 06:29:49 AM »

Haan toh likhiye kuch toh yahan jiska main jawab dun phir... tongue3


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Shikha12

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #35 on: May 30, 2008, 07:29:25 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 29, 2008, 10:04:59 PM

seham seham kar bhi himmat khatam nahi hoti
intzaar ki umeend kyun khatam nahi hoti
ansoo ki kuchu boondein hai ya hai yah samunder
kyun ankhon ki yah barsaat khatam nahi hoti..

Woh aayeinge toh harr intezaar khatam ho jaayega,
Dard is dil ka bhi zara madham madham sa ho jaayega..
Aankhon ki barsaat thamm naa jaaye aise mein kahin,
Haqiqat milan ki nahin toh phir koi bharam ho jaayega..


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #36 on: May 30, 2008, 02:36:01 PM »

wah.. bahoot khoob MAHIYA!!!


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Sonia01

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #37 on: May 30, 2008, 02:52:17 PM »

Quote from: thycreator on May 28, 2008, 10:00:01 PM

Kya bat hai........sahi ja rahi ho.... Winking

Na kissi ki muhabbat ne, na judaai ne,
Na mara hai humko kissi ki bewafai ne,
Khud ke hathon hi hum lute gaye yahan,
Kyu laga baithe hum ye dil aashnai mein... sad5

Khokar paya hai tumhe, aab judayi ki baat na karna
Mai jab jab tumhe yaad karu, tum samne mere aa jana
Apne aapko yu saza na do sanam, manzil dhur nahi
Her saal meri, guzarti hai tere hi yaadon main
Her din nikalta hai, liye huye tera hi naam ....


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #38 on: May 30, 2008, 02:56:09 PM »

nice lines Sonia


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #39 on: May 30, 2008, 04:35:22 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 29, 2008, 10:04:59 PM

seham seham kar bhi himmat khatam nahi hoti
intzaar ki umeend kyun khatam nahi hoti
ansoo ki kuchu boondein hai ya hai yah samunder
kyun ankhon ki yah barsaat khatam nahi hoti..

Wah pooja ji............bahut acche...

Chahat ho jahan bhi, dard-e-dil saath hota hai,
Mehboob jo bichade toh gum din-o-raat hota hai,
Kehte hain jisse muhabbat rolati toh hai bahut,
Aankhen chalak pade jo khoon-e-jajjbat hota hai...


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #40 on: May 30, 2008, 04:42:01 PM »

Quote from: Sonia01 on May 30, 2008, 02:52:17 PM

Oh my God......sonia.....aap toh har din pehle se accha likh rahi ho....aur kehti ho likhna nahi aata.... tongue3

Thama hai jo tera haath, toh na haath chodenge,
Teri aankhon se dil mein utar ke dilon jodenge,
Teri kashish ke hum kayal hue jate hai dilbar,
Tera jo saath ho toh hum har dukh ka muh modenge... tongue3


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #41 on: May 30, 2008, 04:45:57 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 30, 2008, 07:29:25 AM

Too good mahiya......specially the last line is a killer... Winking

Milan ki aisi hui bat mujhe judaai yaad aa gayi,
Mere mehboob se chahat ki wo khudai yaar aa gayi,
Kehte hain dard mein bhi ishq ka alag andaz hai,
Mehfil mein bhi baith kar hame tanhai yaad aa gayi...


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Sonia01

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #42 on: May 30, 2008, 04:47:15 PM »

Quote from: thycreator on May 30, 2008, 04:42:01 PM

Oh my God......sonia.....aap toh har din pehle se accha likh rahi ho....aur kehti ho likhna nahi aata.... tongue3

Gurujee yeh sab kamal Aap/Pooja di/Celmira/Mahiya jaise shayron ka kamal hai jee. mai kuch b nahi aap logon ke samne

Jane kya baat thi tujhme, yeh dil diwana ban gaya
Baat toh kuch nahi thi magar afsana ban gaya
Teri aankhon main itni masti thi yaara
Jisme doobkar tum ab dunia se begana ban gaya


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #43 on: May 30, 2008, 04:50:18 PM »

wah wah wah bahoot khoob Amit ji sabhi reply ek se bard kar ek diye hai apne...

Sonia bahoot acha likh rahi hai app!!


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Sonia01

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #44 on: May 30, 2008, 05:10:25 PM »

Thank Pooja di


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