Dil pukarta raha -Panna 4:Shayri-E-Dard

Shikha12

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«Reply #45 on: May 30, 2008, 05:38:23 PM »

Thanks Pooja di, Amit and Sonia..

Quote from: thycreator on May 30, 2008, 04:45:57 PM

Too good mahiya......specially the last line is a killer... Winking

Milan ki aisi hui bat mujhe judaai yaad aa gayi,
Mere mehboob se chahat ki wo khudai yaar aa gayi,
Kehte hain dard mein bhi ishq ka alag andaz hai,
Mehfil mein bhi baith kar hame tanhai yaad aa gayi...

Good Reply Amit..
Ek chhoti si koshish hamari taraf se..

Tumhare kuch khat puraane aaj almaari se nikal aaye,
Shabd har ek jinka tha, anginat armaanon ko sajaaye...
Beete lamhon ki yaad tabassum si palkon par bikhraaye,
Daaman thaam tanhaai ko mere kamre tak kheench laaye..


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #46 on: May 30, 2008, 05:42:45 PM »

wah !! wah!! wah!!

kaya baat hai Mahiya.. ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai apne...
Daaman thaam tanhaai ko mere kamre tak kheench laaye..
Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob!!


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Shikha12

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #47 on: May 30, 2008, 05:50:38 PM »

Thanks Pooja di..

Aap bhi agar kuch likh dete, toh saath humara ho jaata,
Diary ke pannon par phir se kalam humara leharaata..
Kuch tukdon mein banti yaadein, adhoori si mulakaate,
Dil shayari mein keh jaata, bojhil mann halka ho jaata!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #48 on: May 30, 2008, 06:03:02 PM »

Dil ko apne hum kuch dino se samjha rahe hai
Gum-e-halaat se kahin door le ja rahe hai
ek yug beeta, jinki hai chand yaadein dil main
khud ko khud he un yaadon se uljha rahe hai!!!


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #49 on: May 30, 2008, 07:09:15 PM »

Quote from: Sonia01 on May 30, 2008, 04:47:15 PM

Gurujee yeh sab kamal Aap/Pooja di/Celmira/Mahiya jaise shayron ka kamal hai jee. mai kuch b nahi aap logon ke samne

Jane kya baat thi tujhme, yeh dil diwana ban gaya
Baat toh kuch nahi thi magar afsana ban gaya
Teri aankhon main itni masti thi yaara
Jisme doobkar tum ab dunia se begana ban gaya

Hunar khud mein hi hota hai lovely....sirf usko pehchan.na jaruri hai......mujhe khushi hui agar maine ismein apki madad ki hai toh.....ab iss se pehle ki mere andar ka monitor jag jaye...dard mein ishq ki poetry band kar deni chahiye hum dono ko...pooja, talat, mahiya....sabki nigahen lagi hongi yahan... tongue3

Aye pyar tu mujhse yun juda kyun hai,
Bewafa tu nahi par yun khafa kyun hai,
Sun le kabhi toh mere ashkon ki sada,
Mere baton se tu yun unsuna kyun hai...


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #50 on: May 30, 2008, 07:11:44 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 30, 2008, 04:50:18 PM

wah wah wah bahoot khoob Amit ji sabhi reply ek se bard kar ek diye hai apne...

Sonia bahoot acha likh rahi hai app!!

Thanks a lot Pooji ji.......shukriya!!


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #51 on: May 30, 2008, 07:29:15 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 30, 2008, 05:38:23 PM

Thanks Pooja di, Amit and Sonia..

Good Reply Amit..
Ek chhoti si koshish hamari taraf se..

Tumhare kuch khat puraane aaj almaari se nikal aaye,
Shabd har ek jinka tha, anginat armaanon ko sajaaye...
Beete lamhon ki yaad tabassum si palkon par bikhraaye,
Daaman thaam tanhaai ko mere kamre tak kheench laaye..

wo wo......another sixer.....form mein ho aaj aap.... Winking

Aaj phir mere khayalon pe jaise cha gaya koi,
Muddaton bad bhi apni yaad yun dilaa gaya koi,
Wo apni muhabbat mere dil mein jinda rakhegi,
Apne kiye uss waade ko phir nibha gaya koi....


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #52 on: May 30, 2008, 07:44:58 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 30, 2008, 05:50:38 PM

Ha ha ha.......jawab ke liye majboor karne ka accha andaaz hai... tongue3

Didi ne saath de diya.....chalo hum bhi bina mange dene ki koshish karte hain............. tongue3

Hazaron nashtar jaise dil mein chubhte jaate hai,
Uski yadon ke diye ab toh mujhe jalate hai,
Aye khwabon-khayalon mujhe tanha hi rehne do,
Tumhari mehfil ke shor ab na sahe jaate hain..


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #53 on: May 30, 2008, 07:48:28 PM »

wah kaya baat hai, full mood mai hai app bhi Amit ji!! bahoot acha likha hai !!

ek hi nashtar kafi hai, uski yaadon ko ane ke liye
ek hi yaad kafi hai, dil ko torr jaane ke liye
khwab-o-khyalo main hi hoti hai ab to usse baatein
ek hi baat kafi hai, ankhio ko rula jaane ke liye


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #54 on: May 30, 2008, 07:53:33 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 30, 2008, 06:03:02 PM

Dil ko apne hum kuch dino se samjha rahe hai
Gum-e-halaat se kahin door le ja rahe hai
ek yug beeta, jinki hai chand yaadein dil main
khud ko khud he un yaadon se uljha rahe hai!!!

Good one pooja ji.........

Beete kal ki parchai ka saath ajab nirala hai,
Tanhai mein har ek pal inhi se katne wala hai,
Darte hain par hum ye kal aaj ko na luta de...
Peeche na dekhne ka isliye humne andaz pala hai..


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #55 on: May 30, 2008, 07:56:46 PM »

bahoot sahi kaha Amit ji apne!!!

Her kisi ka apna yaha andaaz hai
her ek ka andaaz bhi khas hai
koi samjh leta hai zindagi aoro ko dekh kar
koi khud ki zindagi se ladte ladte bezar hai


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #56 on: May 30, 2008, 07:57:46 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 30, 2008, 07:48:28 PM

Thank you jee....kam aap bhi nahi hain.....humne toh apse hi seekha hai...warna humari kya hasti hai... Usual Smile

Kyun tujhe yaad karun apna dil dukhane ke liye,
Muhabbat ka ye andaaz-e-dard nibhane ke liye,
Aur bhi gum hain zamane mein tere ulfat ke siva,
Hum gum ka sahara lenge gum ko bhulane ke liye...


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thycreator

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #57 on: May 30, 2008, 08:01:04 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 30, 2008, 07:56:46 PM

bahoot sahi kaha Amit ji apne!!!

Her kisi ka apna yaha andaaz hai
her ek ka andaaz bhi khas hai
koi samjh leta hai zindagi aoro ko dekh kar
koi khud ki zindagi se ladte ladte bezar hai

Hmmmm.......

Zindagi se iss ladai ka koi haasil toh nahi hai,
Jiske liye lade wo apno mein shamil toh nahi hai,
Jo apna hi na hua, uske baare mein bhi soche kyun,
Kisi bewafai ko nibhana itna mushkil toh nahi hai...


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #58 on: May 30, 2008, 08:02:29 PM »

wah kaya baat hai... magar last line main app khud hi apna sath chor gaye...

But thanks Amit ji, apki lines bahoot himmat deti hai!!!

wo hi nahi apna to uska gum bhi apna kyun kare
ussi ki raahon per chal kar, her us pal ko khud se juda kare
tanha hai, uski yaadon ke sath, tanha hai uski yaadon ke bin
phir kyun na khud ko tanha, khud ki tanhaai se kare


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Pooja

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

«Reply #59 on: May 30, 2008, 08:04:40 PM »

Quote from: thycreator on May 30, 2008, 08:01:04 PM

mushkil hai kaya, yah soch kar to dekh
uski bewafai main meri wafa ko to dekh
mushkil nahi hai uski bewafai ko bhulana
bahoot mushkil hai magar dost, apni wafa ko kahin dafnana


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