Dil

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Haal-e-dil kabhi bata na saken
Tha pyaar lekin jata na saken
Chaha unhe par paa na saken
Kisi aur ko apna bana na saken
Kisi ka dil toda aur
Apna tutne se bacha na saken.
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2015, 10:51:39 AM »
Very nice lines
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2015, 02:44:49 PM »
Thank you so much, Shikha ji!
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2015, 04:53:39 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2015, 08:15:39 PM »
Quote from: vinery on August 18, 2015, 08:29:42 AM
Haal-e-dil kabhi bata na saken
Tha pyaar lekin jata na saken
Chaha unhe par paa na saken
Kisi aur ko apna bana na saken
Kisi ka dil toda aur                            ( Kisee kaa dil torhhaa hai aur )
Apna tutne se bacha na saken.
waah waah kyaa baat hai, dheron daad with RAU

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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2015, 04:23:22 AM »
Quote from: vinery on August 18, 2015, 08:29:42 AM
Haal-e-dil kabhi bata na saken
Tha pyaar lekin jata na saken
Chaha unhe par paa na saken
Kisi aur ko apna bana na saken
Kisi ka dil toda aur
Apna tutne se bacha na saken.

वाह वाह... बहुत सुन्दर पंक्तियाँ।
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2015, 04:33:28 AM »
Quote from: vinery on August 18, 2015, 08:29:42 AM
Haal-e-dil kabhi bata na saken
Tha pyaar lekin jata na saken
Chaha unhe par paa na saken
Kisi aur ko apna bana na saken
Kisi ka dil toda aur
Apna tutne se bacha na saken.



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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2015, 05:02:46 AM »
Thank you so much, prashad ji.
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«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2015, 05:04:03 AM »
Thank you sooooooo much surindarn ji!
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«Reply #9 on: August 19, 2015, 05:05:19 AM »
Thank you so much, umrav ji.
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«Reply #10 on: August 19, 2015, 05:06:10 AM »
Thank you so much, qalb ji.
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«Reply #11 on: August 20, 2015, 07:20:35 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2015, 06:07:44 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: August 23, 2015, 05:29:08 AM »
Thank you so much, nand ji.
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«Reply #14 on: August 23, 2015, 05:30:03 AM »
Thank you so much, jeet ji.
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