Dil......

by SUNNY MOHALIWAL on March 31, 2010, 04:53:53 PM
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Tuta hai abhi
Tukdo mein bikhra nahi,
Chhalka ashq aankh se pahuncha hai lab tak,
Ke zameen par abhi geera nahi,
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2010, 07:14:24 PM »
Bahut achcha likha hai aapne Sunny ji...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tute huye dil k tukde bator raha hoon aajkal,
Tere aasuon ko p k ji raha hoon aajkal,
Kal tak main bhi roya karta tha tere yaad me,
Teri yaadon ko bhulake muskura raha hoon aajkal...
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2010, 07:18:18 PM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2010, 09:45:22 PM »
Wah wah bahut hi khoob Sunny ji and Kapil ji,really touched ,marvelous creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2010, 09:58:48 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya aapka Madhu ji..!!!
Quote from: madhuwesh on March 31, 2010, 09:45:22 PM
Wah wah bahut hi khoob Sunny ji and Kapil ji,really touched ,marvelous creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2010, 10:25:27 PM »
Vry gud SUnny..
KApil ji wat a chnge.... AApne b muskarna shrur kaar diya
Quote from: klaskar on March 31, 2010, 07:14:24 PM
Bahut achcha likha hai aapne Sunny ji...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tute huye dil k tukde bator raha hoon aajkal,
Tere aasuon ko p k ji raha hoon aajkal,
Kal tak main bhi roya karta tha tere yaad me,
Teri yaadon ko bhulake muskura raha hoon aajkal...
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2010, 10:37:15 PM »
Neel ji... aap hamari muskurahat pe nazar q laga rahe hain?
Quote from: neelgold on March 31, 2010, 10:25:27 PM
Vry gud SUnny..
KApil ji wat a chnge.... AApne b muskarna shrur kaar diya
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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2010, 10:47:45 PM »
ARee kapil aise nzar nahi lagti ... hmari to bilcul bi nhi

I m happy 4 ur happiness
i m smiling 4 ur smiles....
so keep smiling ....
Quote from: klaskar on March 31, 2010, 10:37:15 PM
Neel ji... aap hamari muskurahat pe nazar q laga rahe hain?
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«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2010, 10:56:38 PM »
Neel ji,
Please don't mind . I was just kidding.
And thanx a lot

Quote from: neelgold on March 31, 2010, 10:47:45 PM
ARee kapil aise nzar nahi lagti ... hmari to bilcul bi nhi

I m happy 4 ur happiness
i m smiling 4 ur smiles....
so keep smiling ....
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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2010, 11:10:23 PM »
Im Also kidding kapil..
Take it easy
Quote from: klaskar on March 31, 2010, 10:56:38 PM
Neel ji,
Please don't mind . I was just kidding.
And thanx a lot
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«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2010, 11:17:44 PM »
 Usual Smile

Quote from: neelgold on March 31, 2010, 11:10:23 PM
Im Also kidding kapil..
Take it easy
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2010, 05:16:12 AM »
Wah wah Sunny ji aur Kapil ji kya kahne. Bahut achha likha hai aap dono ne.
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2010, 09:14:21 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2010, 09:17:04 AM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on April 01, 2010, 05:16:12 AM
Wah wah Sunny ji aur Kapil ji kya kahne. Bahut achha likha hai aap dono ne.
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«Reply #14 on: April 02, 2010, 02:46:53 PM »
aap sabka thank u ji......... aapne meri ek koshish ko padhke usse saraha, uski tarif bhi ji...aur kapil ji aapka khas thanx ji
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