Dil

by suman59 on October 22, 2012, 02:29:48 AM

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suman59

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Dil tlabdaar hai hamara unko ek nazar dekhne ka
Magar zamane ki khatir unko dekhne ke kasir hai hum

Na jaane kab aur kahan ho jaye mulakat hamari aur unki
Zindagi ki raahon mein auron ki tarah musafir hai hum

kasir - bebas/majbur


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Dil

«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2012, 02:48:00 AM »

Quote from: suman59 on October 22, 2012, 02:29:48 AM

Kalaam achchii hai.
Sirf achchii hi nahii bahut achchii hai.


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gaytri gupta

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Re: Dil

«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2012, 02:54:27 AM »

v v nice.....but masoom ji aap ko yesa likhana shobha nahi deta....kyun ki shayar jo likhata hai wo sab us ka personal mamla nahi hota.....


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aqsh

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Re: Dil

«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2012, 03:16:59 AM »

wonderful.....sumanji.....


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Aarish

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Re: Dil

«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2012, 03:27:28 AM »

bohut khoob mam achche ashar haiN


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Aarish

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Re: Dil

«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2012, 03:28:57 AM »


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Re: Dil

«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2012, 04:14:19 AM »

waah bahut khoob


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Re: Dil

«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2012, 05:47:31 AM »

very nice suman ji


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Re: Dil

«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2012, 05:57:18 AM »

bahut khoob


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Re: Dil

«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2012, 09:34:51 AM »

Quote from: suman59 on October 22, 2012, 02:29:48 AM

bahut khoob Applause


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Re: Dil

«Reply #10 on: October 23, 2012, 11:41:30 AM »

Quote from: suman59 on October 22, 2012, 02:29:48 AM

gr8 maa'm


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suman59

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Re: Dil

«Reply #11 on: October 23, 2012, 03:02:25 PM »

Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 22, 2012, 02:48:00 AM

Kalaam achchii hai.
Sirf achchii hi nahii bahut achchii hai.

hahaha budda hoga................... baap. tongue3

thanks for reading beta


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suman59

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Re: Dil

«Reply #12 on: October 23, 2012, 03:04:36 PM »

Quote from: gaytri gupta on October 22, 2012, 02:54:27 AM

v v nice.....but masoom ji aap ko yesa likhana shobha nahi deta....kyun ki shayar jo likhata hai wo sab us ka personal mamla nahi hota.....

Thank you very much dear Gaytri. aapne bilkul sahi kaha. Jo koyi likhte hai, yeh zaruri nahi k wo pyar mein kho gaya ho etc. etc. bas kuch ehsaas ko lafzon mein sajakar post karte hai. kavita ko mazak na banaya toh accha hi hoga... khair

Itna personal lena nahi tha masoom jee ko tongue3

thank you onceagain dear