DIL TOOTANA HAI KISMAT MAIN HAMARI

by BeNam on September 17, 2005, 08:05:56 PM
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Pooja
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«Reply #15 on: September 25, 2005, 10:43:58 AM »
It's ok nirbhay ji, app kuch likh kar jaaty to acha lagta!!!
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nirbhay
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«Reply #16 on: September 25, 2005, 11:10:44 AM »
Thnx , to aabhie likh detey hai usme kai hai

        Manzar tak dastak diye bina mahobaat bikri hamari
        Aarmano ko tora aaur bebaas kiya zindagi ko hamari
        tuhjse bichar kar botlon me dubi zindagi hamari
        Khafa mein tuhse aaj bhi nahi, tujhse se wafa hi hai haamri
        khafain to us raaab se hai hamari.......................
        kiu milaya dilon ko.........................
        Jab dil tutana hi tha kismat mein hamari.
        JAI  SHREE KRISHNA.    ( okay pooja jee)
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Pooja
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«Reply #17 on: September 25, 2005, 03:19:35 PM »
wah bahoot khoob nirbhay ji!!!
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nirbhay
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«Reply #18 on: September 26, 2005, 04:15:32 AM »
Ji shukriya pooja ji !!!  ek aur hai aap ke liye
 
  Dil leke hamara aapni mehfil se tukrao ye tamasha hum bhi dekhenge
  Dard diya hai tumne par zid thi hamari, mahfil mein kismat aazama ke  dekhenge
  Dil ke aarmano ko tere paron tale kuclate hum bhi dekhenge
  Tune diye kaante is mahobaat mein............................
  Par kaante kabhie murjhatey nahi isme pyar hamara javan hum yuhi dekhnge

 
  JAI  SHREE  KRISHNA>
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: September 26, 2005, 02:48:10 PM »
wah kaya khoobsoorat line likhi hai apne:

Kante kabhi murjhaty nahi....!!! bahoot khoob nirbhay ji!!

Dil ne dil ki had ko paar kiya
dard ne dard ki her deewar ko paar kiya
Insaan ka hi to dil aor dard tha mera
kismat ki thokar kha kar bhi tera intzaar kiya!!!
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nirbhay
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«Reply #20 on: September 26, 2005, 04:46:03 PM »
Ji shukriya pooja ji , n well replied. JAi SHree KRiSHNa

         Dilon jab dard ki hadon ko pura kia
         Is dil se us dil tak ek rasta more diya
         jine ke raah mein ek rutaba or jor diya
         tune dhaya zulm par............................
         dekh kisiney hamien pyar mein ghol diya.
         JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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Pooja
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«Reply #21 on: September 26, 2005, 04:56:00 PM »
dil ke dard ki had kabhi meri samjh na aai hai
her baar uske waar ne, ek nai baat sikhai hai
kayun kahty hai, Naari ko dharati, ab yah samjh aai hai
ayye kitne bhi tufaan, dharati apni jagah se kabhi hill nahi paai hai!!!
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nirbhay
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«Reply #22 on: September 26, 2005, 05:53:43 PM »
khoob!!!!

       Baat jaab naari ke aahan ki aayi hai
       to hum kia bayaan kare........
       par aapne jo kaha jo sachai hai.
       JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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Pooja
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«Reply #23 on: September 26, 2005, 05:59:33 PM »
SHUKARIYAN Nirbhay!!!

baat thi dard ki, jo mere dil se ayya tha
yah to khud ko maine naari batlaya tha
jo naari hai jameen, to nar (Adami) ko mai pahar samjhati hu
jiski uchaai ko mera dil kabhi samjh nahi paya tha!!!
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nirbhay
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«Reply #24 on: September 26, 2005, 06:27:27 PM »
well come pooja ji , n this i cant say anything regarding this!

      Dil dene waale kabhie chehre nahi bhulte
      aur dil lene wale kabhie chere nahi dekhte
      Hum unpe 7 janam aaur kar dete............
      Agar palat kar hamein wo ek baar orr dekte.
      JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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Pooja
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«Reply #25 on: September 26, 2005, 06:29:04 PM »
wah bahoot khoob!! nirbhay ji!!
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nirbhay
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«Reply #26 on: September 26, 2005, 06:38:16 PM »
ji shukriya , par aapne kuch nahi likha?

        Teer teri nazron ke aaj hum sine pe kha ke dekhnge
        Mahobaat ke dard par char aask hum baha kar dekhenge
        aap luto hamein khubsurati se hum lutne ka fasana dekhnege
        tere isq ki mahfil aaj hum bhi taqdir aazma kar dekhenge.
        JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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walee
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«Reply #27 on: September 26, 2005, 07:08:45 PM »
BEnaam Saahib khoob rahi...
bohat acha likhtay hai aap...
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walee
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«Reply #28 on: September 26, 2005, 07:13:11 PM »
likha hai mera naam samandar` pe hawa` ne
dono k muqaddar mai sukoo hai na wafa hai
    ADAAB
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BeNam
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«Reply #29 on: September 26, 2005, 08:16:40 PM »
-- walee --- bahot achhe ! -----

Khud hi apane aap se naraz hun main,
Ke tod diya her nata tera,
Aaj kuchh aisi aag lagi hai dil main,
ke Jal gaya her ashiyana mera!

--- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
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