dil tootne ki awaaz

by nishita on July 22, 2004, 11:23:11 AM
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Meena
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«Reply #30 on: January 07, 2005, 12:37:59 PM »
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee nishu and nidhi!

 :D
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Talat
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«Reply #31 on: January 07, 2005, 01:55:39 PM »
Wow  too good!! Friends happy9  and Thanks@all!!!  happy9

Ajeeb larki hoon khud ko jalana chahti hoon
Main khud ko rakh kar kahin bhool jana chahti hoon

Mere naseeb ki khushiyaan bhi kab mili mujh ko
Bas ab to umr bhar aansoo bahana chahti hoon!! (NM)
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #32 on: January 07, 2005, 03:01:30 PM »
Tum bhi ajeeb ladki ho,
Pata nahi kyun aise karti ho,
Hum hi se pyaar karke,
Hum hi ko bhoolana chahti ho.


It was nice one Talatji.
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Talat
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«Reply #33 on: January 07, 2005, 03:07:15 PM »
Thanks!! Zainul!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #34 on: January 07, 2005, 03:15:03 PM »
U r most welcome Talatji.

Someday when the pages of my life end,
I know that you will be one of its most
beautiful chapters & if i ever get to read
it again; I will open it from the page
where i first met you....
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Meena
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«Reply #35 on: January 07, 2005, 05:20:27 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Wow  too good!! Friends happy9  and Thanks@all!!!  happy9

Ajeeb larki hoon khud ko jalana chahti hoon
Main khud ko rakh kar kahin bhool jana chahti hoon

Mere naseeb ki khushiyaan bhi kab mili mujh ko
Bas ab to umr bhar aansoo bahana chahti hoon!! (NM)


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhh!

 :D
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Talat
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«Reply #36 on: January 08, 2005, 05:42:46 AM »
Thanks!! Meena happy9
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preeti
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«Reply #37 on: January 08, 2005, 06:30:24 AM »
amazin ............i love ur poetry guys n gals
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sandhaya
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«Reply #38 on: January 08, 2005, 07:37:28 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Wah!!! Very Nice Nishi!!

Is dil ke tootne ki awaaz nahin hoti
Dil ke ghamo ki kisi ko khabar nahin hoti
Tadap jaati hai rooh ashk ban jata hai lahu
Phir is dil ki dunya abaad nahin hoti!! :-(


very nice talat

meri aankhon ko hasin khwab dihaye kyun
the jab mera dil thod kar, mujhse muh mod ke jana tha
tuh aaye kyun the
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Meena
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«Reply #39 on: January 08, 2005, 11:31:28 AM »
wah wahhhhh sandhaya!

ana unka tha kismat se,
jana unka tha majboori se,
bas ghav de gaya woh,
jiski dawa na milegi zamane se!
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shyama
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«Reply #40 on: January 08, 2005, 04:26:54 PM »
Nice work all. :D

 "sheeshey se bhi nazuk hai par naaz nahin karta,
  dil toot jaata hai par awaaz nahin karta." [NM] :cry:
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«Reply #41 on: January 08, 2005, 04:33:08 PM »
very nice sandhya,shyama,meena and all.

"Dil toota hai zaroor kahin,
 ehsas mujhe ho raha hai,
 jo ehsas mujhe hua tha,
 ab kise ho raha hai."
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #42 on: January 08, 2005, 05:22:49 PM »
nice work all..............  bahot khoob.........
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Meena
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«Reply #43 on: January 08, 2005, 05:25:48 PM »
shukriya dosto!!!!!!!! :D

niceee nidhi and shyama!

 :D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #44 on: January 09, 2005, 05:37:19 AM »
It was nice job by all. Keep it up Shyama n Sandhya....
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