Dil Udaas Rehta Hai ...............!!!

by Talat on August 01, 2006, 05:09:12 PM
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Machal jaata hai seene main, kabhi tadapta hai
Kabhi baithe baithe sard aaahen bharta hai
Dil ki udaasiyon ka sabab hum jaan na paaye
Besabab, yunhi ye dil udaas rehta hai .........!

Hansti aankhon main ashk ye bharta hai
Seene main dhadakta hai, shor ye karta hai
Batata nahin kabhi, kya chaahta hai yeh
Muddatain guzreen, ye dil udaas rehta hai.....!

Ek dhundla sa khwaab kabhi ye dikhaata hai
Aur ek saaya sa mere paas se guzar jaata hai
Benaam si khwaahishain karta hai, mitaata hai
Deewana thehra, ye dil udaas rehta hai..........!
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2006, 05:27:53 PM »
bahut khoob talat ....

aksar har shaam ko yeh dubata sa suraj mujhse kuch kehta hai
chand bhi andhare mein lipta hua sa udas sa rehta hai
bich jaata hai dur tak ek gehara sa sanaata
na koi sunta hai na koi bolta hai
yeh dil aksar yun hi udas sa rehta  hai....
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2006, 08:04:21 AM »
Thanks a lot Ranjana.....and Gum....bohot shukriya pasand karne ka !!

Nice written Ranjana !!
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vikas2210
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2006, 08:13:09 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"

Machal jaata hai seene main, kabhi tadapta hai
Kabhi baithe baithe sard aaahen bharta hai
Dil ki udaasiyon ka sabab hum jaan na paaye
Besabab, yunhi ye dil udaas rehta hai .........!

Hansti aankhon main ashk ye bharta hai
Seene main dhadakta hai, shor ye karta hai
Batata nahin kabhi, kya chaahta hai yeh
Muddatain guzreen, ye dil udaas rehta hai.....!

Ek dhundla sa khwaab kabhi ye dikhaata hai
Aur ek saaya sa mere paas se guzar jaata hai
Benaam si khwaahishain karta hai, mitaata hai
Deewana thehra, ye dil udaas rehta hai..........!


woow very good Talat and nice ranju too.

dil mera tera talabgar raha har su.n
karta raha teri hi aarzu har su.n
nahi milegi y mujhe pata hau mujhe
par dil mera tera karta raha intezar har su.n.....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2006, 09:49:37 AM »
Talat, Ranju, Vikas

Very nice !

Keep it up !

Rajbir
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2006, 10:27:01 AM »
Thanks a lot Vikas....it was very nice from you !

Thanks Rajbir...hume pata hai itna achcha nahin likhte hain, phir bhi hausla afzaai ke liye shukriya !
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vikas2210
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«Reply #6 on: August 02, 2006, 10:46:03 AM »
Rajbir ji Shukriya bahut bahut aapka

and thanks a lot Talat.....
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ranjana
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«Reply #7 on: August 02, 2006, 10:54:36 AM »
shukriya Talat, Vikas and Rajbir ...... Usual Smile
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ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: August 02, 2006, 01:20:33 PM »
Quote from: "gum"
TOO GUD TALAT AND RANJU. MEIN TOH KAYAL HO GAYA AAP KE SHAYARI KA


shukriya gum ...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: August 02, 2006, 05:13:46 PM »
Wah, Bohat khoob Talat & All...
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ranjana
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«Reply #10 on: August 03, 2006, 03:20:29 AM »
shukriya Aryaan ....

fir se kisi khawab ne badla hai rang apna
fir se kisi ne in aankho ko dikhaya hai sapna
fir se in nazaro ko intazaar kisi ka rehta hai
tadpa uthata hai yeh dil kisi ki awaz sunte hi
aur fir yunhi  udas rehta hai ......

chhaa jaati hai ek ajab si beqarari
har taraf ek ajab sa manzar hota hai
nahi hota yakeen apni kismat per hame
ki koi hum per dilo jaan se marata hai
hoti hai jab baate nayi nayi
toh ajab sa dil ka haal hota hai
bichar ke toh unse hum kabhi kush na they
per mil ke bhi dil  aksar udas rehta hai ...
yeh dil yunhi udas rehta hai .......
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«Reply #11 on: August 03, 2006, 03:22:09 AM »
Bahoot Khoob Talat And Ranjana Sis,..
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ranjana
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«Reply #12 on: August 03, 2006, 03:37:58 AM »
shukriya Azeem bhai ....
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«Reply #13 on: August 03, 2006, 08:19:41 AM »
Thanks a lot Aryaan, Usual Smile and Janasheen....vrey nice again Ranjana ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2006, 03:40:51 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"

Machal jaata hai seene main, kabhi tadapta hai
Kabhi baithe baithe sard aaahen bharta hai
Dil ki udaasiyon ka sabab hum jaan na paaye
Besabab, yunhi ye dil udaas rehta hai .........!

Hansti aankhon main ashk ye bharta hai
Seene main dhadakta hai, shor ye karta hai
Batata nahin kabhi, kya chaahta hai yeh
Muddatain guzreen, ye dil udaas rehta hai.....!

Ek dhundla sa khwaab kabhi ye dikhaata hai
Aur ek saaya sa mere paas se guzar jaata hai
Benaam si khwaahishain karta hai, mitaata hai
Deewana thehra, ye dil udaas rehta hai..........!


Talat,
bohot hi achcha likha hai..........

Ranjana & Vikas,
dono ne bohot achcha likha hai...............

I have tried to write regarding "dil udaas rehta hai".
Though, do not know how it turned out.............

wo paas aate nahin aur duur bhi jate nahin
na jaane kyun, apna chehra dikhate nahin
jaise patthar ka dil bana kar baithe hai wo
sanam pighalte nahin, to dil udaas rehta hai

bahar bhi mere aangan se duur ho gayi hai
gulshan ke phuulo ki khushboo kho gayi hai
phuulon ki khushboo, lati thi unki yaadein
phuul jo khilte nahin, to dil udaas rehta hai

unse kaise karun apni ijhaar-e-mohabbat
wo dekhte bhi to nahin mere dil ki chahat
kash dhundh pata wo lafz kashish se bhare
alphaz jo milte nahin, to dil udaas rehta hai.............!
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